**THE WAY I LOVED U**[FINISHED] - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago
@lizz,Ramani,Akhi-thanx alot guys🤗
arre meri majburi bhi to koi samjho😭meri mom chutti pe hai or rozz net pe bathna allowed nahi h.....
main kya karu?dant parti h mom se or kabhi kabhi to imotional black mail v karti hai😕
but i'll try han😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 00123trisha

@lizz,Ramani,Akhi-thanx alot guys🤗

arre meri majburi bhi to koi samjho😭meri mom chutti pe hai or rozz net pe bathna allowed nahi h.....
main kya karu?dant parti h mom se or kabhi kabhi to imotional black mail v karti hai😕
but i'll try han😊

That used to happen with me, too. 😆 Studies in India are a PAIN .. Mujhe net pe bahut kum allowed karte the. Yahaan I have my personal computer, though. :P

Aaaah, me wants an update as soon as possible! If not tomorrow, then day after. Yesh, I'm shellfish. 😈

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: _Akanksha_

That used to happen with me, too. 😆 Studies in India are a PAIN .. Mujhe net pe bahut kum allowed karte the. Yahaan I have my personal computer, though. :P

Aaaah, me wants an update as soon as possible! If not tomorrow, then day after. Yesh, I'm shellfish. 😈

oh miss selfish😆 lucky u
but i think i can give an update tomorrow
kal mom shoping karne jayegi tab😆
Edited by 00123trisha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lykd it vry mch trisha....do cntinu...add me to ur pm list too😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

lykd it vry mch trisha....do cntinu...add me to ur pm list too😊

oh..thank u
surely add u in pm list😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry trish 4 posting my comment so late
actually was busy incontest
so coming to update
i love d way daksh ws getting j of shlok
and as alws daksh and asmin r superb
nd i dnt knw whom to choose 4 asmin both r rockstars
u r makin me confuse
nd aanchal and arjun are super romantic
keep updating soon
and lovely updates
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjna4

sorry trish 4 posting my comment so late

actually was busy incontest
so coming to update
i love d way daksh ws getting j of shlok
and as alws daksh and asmin r superb
nd i dnt knw whom to choose 4 asmin both r rockstars
u r makin me confuse
nd aanchal and arjun are super romantic
keep updating soon
and lovely updates

thanx Sana😃
asmin-daksh-shlok's story is a triangle type
look forward
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update.. Shlok-Daksh-Aish part was Great.. Angad do u wanna partner was amusing.. Anchal-Arjun locked in library how romantic.. Update d next part soon.. n plz do pm me.. lol..
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Posted: 14 years ago

hey

thnx for the updt it was nice n interesting
sorry nowadays i m not able to comment on ur ff bcoz i have shifted to new state kolkata from chennai n i have not yet connected internet connection so very sorry
but i do read ur ff on my mobile
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part-12
(in librery)

Anchal:"what? lock ho gaya hai?"
(arjun trying to open the door but no results)

(suddenly Anchal remember 1 thing)

Anchal:"oh no.............i was forgot k ye door sirf bahar se khulta hai"

Arjun:"what??toh aab kya hoga?"

Anchal:"I don't know………..agar ki yaha nahi aya to ye darwaza khulna namumkin hai"

(they both r look scared)

(Arjun sat on a chair)

Arjun:"fine….toh kissi ka wait karte hai"

(in other side……………..Aish came out from the class room…………..thinking about Shlok)

Aish:"Shlok mujhe apna pura naam kyu nahi bata raha hai? I'm sure koi garbar hai………………mujhe pata karna hi parega ki usska sir name kya hai but how...yah….college records me usske bareme koi na koi information mil jayegi…………….mujhe principal sir se baat karni paregi"

(she went to the princi's office………………..princi was doing some works)

(Aish knocked the door)

Aish:"may I come in sir?"

Princi:"yes…..

Aish:"hello sir…I'm Asmin Dobriyal"

Princi:"oh to tum ho Asmin…………….Daksh se tumhare bareme suna tha"

Aish:"Daksh se???"

Princi:"lekin tum yaha……………Daksh ne kuch kaha?"

Aish:"no sir……….actually mujhe ek student k bareme information chahiye thi"

Princi:"information?............kisske bareme?"

Aish:"Shlok……………..mujhe usska sir name nahi pata…………..maine usse pucha bhi lekin no ans"

Princi:"dekho………kissi studen k bareme koi info or kissi student ko dena humare college rules me nahi hai……so I'm sorry"

Aish:"plz sir…………mera janna bohut zaruri hai"

Princi:"I'm sorry miss Dobriyal……………lekin main kuch nahi kar sakta"

Aish:"fine sir"

(she left the office very sadly)

(came out from office)

Aish:"aab kaise pata karu k ye wohi Shlok hai ki nahi"

(suddenly she starts smiling…………..she have a plan)

(in library)

Anchal:"abhi tak koi nahi aya"(she looks very scared)

Arjun:"don't worry kuch nahi hoga…..main hoon na"

(Anchal looking at him & smiling)

(suddenly the light was gone)

(Anchal screamed)

Anchal:"oh god..ye light kaise chali gayi?Arjun tum yaha ho na?"

Arjun:"ha main yaha hoon……tum daro mat"

Anchal:"mujhe andhere se bohut dar lagta hai"

(she came closer of Arjun…………….then hugged him…..the same way Abhiya hug in old library)

Arjun:"Anchal…………main yaha hoon tumhare sath"

(she looking in his eyes)

(they staring each other)

(after college in Dobriyal's house)

(Aish trying to talk with Arnab)

Aish:"papa ek bar meri baat sunlo na"

Arnab:"noway……I'm sure tum koi ulti sidhi zid karogi………….mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai"

Aish:"hey bhaggu………..mujhe aapne ek aisa papa dia hai jo meri baat hi nahi sunte hai"

Arnab:"tumhare bhaggu ko blem mat karo………………….tumhari zid sunke koi bhi aisi baat karega"

Aish:"fine……..aap sune ya na sune main bol rahi hoon………………college main ek ladka hai………

Arnab:"wait wait wait……….ladka?...........aab ye ladke ka kya chakkar hai?"

Aish:"papa aisa kuch nahi hai………………..aapko yaad hai bachpan me mera ek dosst tha Shlok?"

Arnab:"ha ha…………..Raichand's ka beta"

Aish:"right…………………uss ladke ka naam bhi Shlok hai"

Arnab:"to?"

Aish:"toh main soch rahi thi k kahi vo yehi Shlok to nahi?"

Arnab:"tumne usska sir name pucha?"

Aish:"pucha tha lekin ussne koi jawab nahi dia……………..so main kahe rahi thi k agar aap kissi tarha pata lagate ki vo kon hai toh….

Arnab:"okey main dekhta hoon……………par kuch kaha nahi jaa sakta hai"

Aish:"jitna ho sake utna hi karna"

(she hugged Arnab)

(in Daksh bedroom)

(he was thinking about Asmin)

Daksh:"mujhe itna farak kyu par raha hai?Asmin Shlok k sath raheti hai to mujhe kyu bura lagta hai?................kahi mujhe usse………………nahi nahi……….ye nahi ho sakta …………..uss wacko k sath main……………..lekin mujhe pahele kabhi kissi ladki k liye aisa feel nahi hua………………oh god main pagal ho jaunga"

(he went to sleep)

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