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Posted: 14 years ago

Restaurant

Pancchi was sitting on the wrought iron silk-cushioned chair as if it is going to explode any second. She was locking and unlocking her fingers again and again , her heels tapping on the carpeted floor, her eyes darting here and there as she forked the spaghetti and asparagus in her plate , nervously. I mean, it was strange. Daksh was being so gentlemanly and charming, there were violinists playing such beautiful music but the sheer dominant power of Daksh's appearance was making Pancchi feel overpowered and anxious. She was not used to be treated like a queen , especially after the Danish episode , and that too from Daksh. Her unpredictable, multiple-personality disorder inflicted , massively sexy boss! Daksh looked at her almond eyes looking down at the carpet and he put his fork down. He put his right knuckle under his chin and observed her with his calculating and shrewd slanting black eyes.

Daksh ( clearing his throat )- I can buy it for you if you like it that much.

Pancchi's reverie of thoughts broke and she snapped out of her thoughts. She blinked her eyes at his searching face.

Pancchi ( shakes her head )- Am sorry. I was not paying attention, Sir. Just got on my flight of thoughts. Sorry.

Daksh ( sitting back and sipping his wine )- The setting , the music , the romance – reminds you of Danish?.....( Pancchi looks at him in surprise )……Danish, interesting name. I heard he dumped you. Sad. But its cool. Am sure someone better awaits you.

Tears well up in Pancchi's eyes as she gulps the pain , and nodding , goes back to eating. Just then, the manager walks in with a black velvet box with a pink satin knotty ribbon sitting pretty on it. He gives it to Daksh . Daksh smiles and the manager goes away. Pancchi looks at Daksh in bewilderment. Now what? Daksh looks at Pancchi and forwards the box to her.

Daksh ( smugly )- For you. Don't give me that 'OH' look. Open and see it. I am sure you will like it.

Pancchi ( puts her fork down )- What is going on, Sir? This expensive dinner , a limited edition designer label dress, diamond chandeliers , this queenly treatment and now….this?

Daksh ( rolls his eyes )- Pancchi , cut the crap, will you? You should have known by now. This is me. I am treating you like a queen because I want to make you feel special – I want to undo my rudeness to you. Words are never enough , okay? They don't undo any wrong . For me , its all about gestures.

Pancchi ( curtly )- Or money? You are a MIDAS Sir. Synonymous with gold. You weigh everything in money.

Daksh ( shrugs his shoulders )- That's me. Money can't buy happiness but hell yeah. It can buy things that at least create an illusion or a solid presence of happiness. This dress , the earrings , this velvet box will be a permanent memory of my apology. Can you argue with that? NO. So, stop going all Marxist and open the box.

Pancchi understands that she cannot argue with Daksh. She purses her lips, shakes her head and puts her delicate fingers on the small button lock of the box. She unlocks it and slowly opens the box. As she lifts the lid, her lips form a small O and her eyes widen in surprise. On a sheet of black velvet rests a platinum chain with a pendant which has a heart shaped emerald held by two fairies carved in white gold and encrusted with diamonds. The glitter of the magnificent jewel reflects like a thousand stars on Panchhi's face. Daksh is observing her face quietly.

Daksh ( softly )- Makes you speechless, doesn't it?

Pancchi ( looks up with a softened expression )- It does…..but its too expensive….

Daksh shakes his head and gets up from his chair. He comes and bends over the table , putting one hand on Pancchi's shoulder and the other on the table. Pancchi feels a strange numbness climb up her legs and get stuck in the middle of her chest. He had a strange raw animal magnetism to him – something prehistoric – yes, prehistoric manhood that overrode all his Valentino sophistication and polish. Daksh fingers the emerald and whispers in Pancchi's ears, making her heart pound.

Daksh ( taking the locket off the box)- Magnificent is the word. Not expensive.

Daksh slowly sweeps Pancchi's hair aside , baring her fair neck. Pancchi clenches her fists and she has a strong urge to turn around and just hug this strange creature who is sending her senses to Bahamas. Daksh's mouth curves into a sly knowing smile as he puts the beautiful jewel around her neck, raising it slowly over her chest , brushing against her skin. He holds the two ends of the chain and fingers the back of Pancchi's neck. While Pancchi thinks that her boss is feeling her neck , she is unaware that Daksh is looking for a particular nerve. He finds it and his hand stops. As he holds the hook and loop of the locket, the frontal of the hook is straight as a needle and not curved. His hands around Pancchi's neck, Daksh bends again and looks at her face.

Pancchi ( breathlessly )- Daksh….

Daksh signals the violinists to leave and they do. Daksh looks down at Pancchi's face again- her glossy pearly pink lips shimmering in the lamps. Daksh pulls her face closer and his breath paralyzes her senses.

Daksh ( in a husky voice that turns off the fluctuating bulbs of Pancchi's brains )- Suddenly, you've become beautiful……

With this , he presses his mouth to Pancchi's lips , pulling her into a passionate kiss and as the girl gives in , whispering his name, he pricks the needle into her neck – looping the locket, permanently as the needle embeds in her vein. Unaware, Pancchi loses herself to the passion that she feels for this man.

TO BE CONTINUED……………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
poco omg u took me to fairyland
i mean d treatmentpanch is gettin seems like every grls dream
i mean u represented her thoughts and nervousness beatifully
i mean i ws lost in my imagination
it ws like my dream date
and d passion u depicted at last is beyond speechless
daksh has got very classy style to do everything
is daksh playing wid panch cz of some selfish reason?
cz i dnt knw m getting feeling dat he hs big motive behind aal dis


and most importanatly m waiting kabeer to respond as vampire slayer
does kabeer and daksh has some family realtion wid each other


superb update and thanx 4 takin me to fairyland

Edited by sanjna4 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
👍🏼 Splendid as usual.I don't know why but Daksh in your ff reminds me of Elijah of TVD.May be because of his classic elegance ,soberness and Man of Honor personility or certain dignity that commmands respect.
Love you so x infinity much. 😃
Edited by prayasbanetta10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG Poco, what was that? What is this needle about?

It was such fairytale setting but why I am not able to trust Daksh? What is he planning?
Edited by Ritzie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!! I kept saying i wanted more daksh-panchi, and today poco u gave me JUST THAT!! i loveee uu!!!!!!! i mean the daksh-panchi conversation was nice...it had a lovely appeal to it...although i am very much intrigued by what daksh did to her with the whole needle thing at the end, im not gonna think about it too much right now cos im still in lala land over the whole date, if u can call it that....
it truly was beautiful!! seriously!! infact u made it soo beautiful that for now, im frankly not bothered by whats happening with abhiya right now....which is saying something!! all i can think of is the amaaaaazing daksh-panchi chemistry!!
thanks poco! u made my day!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Heyy, Pocoz!! *waves*

Whew! I'm here after a loooooooooooooooonnnnggg time! I have no idea how many parts I have to catch up on courtesy me reserving and never unreserving 😳
But I promised to edit this one for sure!
And of course, Lizzie has kinda been keeping me informed about the latest track, a big thank you to her for that 😆 😆 😆

Res! 😃



:D :D :D :D :D
HOLY LORD!!!
i hope am nt stoned.. is this u bracket?😛 r you seriously back?
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗
and your welcome..
am so going to tell u everything b4 u read it.. u knw wht a spoiler i am😆

@poco.. i knw tht zee will never be of ne threat to misha sam...😳
she is just the darling of ur ff now!!!
but every time u tell me tht T WILL be a threat to them.. breaks my heart... i knw tht T will... par mujhe na yaad dilaao..😉 😆
the more u remind me, the more i hate her.🥱😆

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girl.. u r so good with ur vocab must say.. like so many terms from diff fields.. description of rooms with the types of materials available.. like the frst thing i read in your update was the wrought iron chairs... i rememeber wen i had to make models of wrought iron chairs, i so didnt knw the spell😆 wondered wht it meant for days i guess. and u actually excel in terms from each end..
coz in the next part u describe some jewelery design.. 😆 havent read any of ur old ffs, and i dnt knw hw good u wer b4.. but am sure, this writing keeda in u must have helped u alot too..😛
supernatural lingo ki toh baat hi nahi karni.. am still nt sure if ur human🤣
panchi's pink bubble is so going to burst very sooon... she is attracted to daksh,, but wht is tht needle all about?😲

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: elizaa


:D :D :D :D :D
HOLY LORD!!!
i hope am nt stoned.. is this u bracket?😛 r you seriously back?
🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗
and your welcome..
am so going to tell u everything b4 u read it.. u knw wht a spoiler i am😆


Yes, Dhakkan! Bracket is back to Poco's FF 🤗
@spoiler: Tell me about it. Poco's FF and TVD, both known before reading or seeing respectively 😆 😆

@Poco: I can see I have one more update to catch. I'm off from page 21
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG POCO!!! I can't believe I missed two updates!!! In my defense, I had a physics project that I was working on for the past 2 days.

For the page 42 chapter:
At least Piya is more composed now. If she had still been crying over her loss, I think I would have yelled at you (figuratively, of course...) The way you have made Piya in this story has shown that she is a strong person, and if she had been sitting there, still crying, it would have ruined her persona. I am liking Zeenia already. She is lightening the atmosphere, just when it is needed. But that was a shock. I thought she would have been a little bit more mature, since she's done it before, and this is Anushka's body she's in. It would make too many people suspicious if Anushka's personality suddenly changed. And Misha is funny when she is jealous. She should know that she has no threat from Zeenia. OMG!!! It all makes sense now! So, basically, if Abhay gets the ring, he becomes all powerful, and then becomes like Dr. Jeykll and Mr. Hyde? Can't there be some other way for the werewolves to stop shifting when the moon comes out other than sacrificing Abhay? Like, having him draw blood out of himself while reciting some spell... I wonder, if Abhay knew everything that they all just learned, would he take the powers and become corrupt, or would he stay away from the ring, so that everyone is safe? I think that there should be some way for him to get all his powers, and still be in control of his good side. Obviously, Piya would help with that as soon as he remembers her love again.

For the page 45 chapter:
This one was short! I'm hating Daksh so much now! I take it back, Poco. You can keep the Daksh doppelganger! Pancchi trusts Daksh blindly, and it seems like he is just using her to get closer to Abhay, since he knows that she is friends with him.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sanjna4

poco omg u took me to fairyland
i mean d treatmentpanch is gettin seems like every grls dream
i mean u represented her thoughts and nervousness beatifully
i mean i ws lost in my imagination
it ws like my dream date
and d passion u depicted at last is beyond speechless
daksh has got very classy style to do everything
is daksh playing wid panch cz of some selfish reason?
cz i dnt knw m getting feeling dat he hs big motive behind aal dis


and most importanatly m waiting kabeer to respond as vampire slayer
does kabeer and daksh has some family realtion wid each other


superb update and thanx 4 takin me to fairyland


Thank you so much, sweetz. Yeah, Daksh did set up a fairytale , only to plunge Pancchi into darkness.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: prayasbanetta10

👍🏼 Splendid as usual.I don't know why but Daksh in your ff reminds me of Elijah of TVD.May be because of his classic elegance ,soberness and Man of Honor personility or certain dignity that commmands respect.

Love you so x infinity much. 😃


Thanks a lot, my dear. Daksh does resemble Eijah in terms of 'classic manhood'.

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