AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 36

Originally posted by: Ritzie

OMG Poco, what was that? What is this needle about?

It was such fairytale setting but why I am not able to trust Daksh? What is he planning?

Originally posted by: sonu.p

OMG!!! I kept saying i wanted more daksh-panchi, and today poco u gave me JUST THAT!! i loveee uu!!!!!!! i mean the daksh-panchi conversation was nice...it had a lovely appeal to it...although i am very much intrigued by what daksh did to her with the whole needle thing at the end, im not gonna think about it too much right now cos im still in lala land over the whole date, if u can call it that....

it truly was beautiful!! seriously!! infact u made it soo beautiful that for now, im frankly not bothered by whats happening with abhiya right now....which is saying something!! all i can think of is the amaaaaazing daksh-panchi chemistry!!

thanks poco! u made my day!😊

Originally posted by: elizaa

:D :D :D :D :D

HOLY LORD!!!

i hope am nt stoned.. is this u bracket?😛 r you seriously back?

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗 🤗

and your welcome..

am so going to tell u everything b4 u read it.. u knw wht a spoiler i am😆

@poco.. i knw tht zee will never be of ne threat to misha sam...😳

she is just the darling of ur ff now!!!

but every time u tell me tht T WILL be a threat to them.. breaks my heart... i knw tht T will... par mujhe na yaad dilaao..😉 😆

the more u remind me, the more i hate her.🥱😆

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girl.. u r so good with ur vocab must say.. like so many terms from diff fields.. description of rooms with the types of materials available.. like the frst thing i read in your update was the wrought iron chairs... i rememeber wen i had to make models of wrought iron chairs, i so didnt knw the spell😆 wondered wht it meant for days i guess. and u actually excel in terms from each end..

coz in the next part u describe some jewelery design.. 😆 havent read any of ur old ffs, and i dnt knw hw good u wer b4.. but am sure, this writing keeda in u must have helped u alot too..😛

supernatural lingo ki toh baat hi nahi karni.. am still nt sure if ur human🤣

panchi's pink bubble is so going to burst very sooon... she is attracted to daksh,, but wht is tht needle all about?😲

Originally posted by: Chill_Out

Yes, Dhakkan! Bracket is back to Poco's FF 🤗

@spoiler: Tell me about it. Poco's FF and TVD, both known before reading or seeing respectively 😆 😆

@Poco: I can see I have one more update to catch. I'm off from page 21

Originally posted by: AbhiYa_luver

OMG POCO!!! I can't believe I missed two updates!!! In my defense, I had a physics project that I was working on for the past 2 days.

For the page 42 chapter:

At least Piya is more composed now. If she had still been crying over her loss, I think I would have yelled at you (figuratively, of course...) The way you have made Piya in this story has shown that she is a strong person, and if she had been sitting there, still crying, it would have ruined her persona. I am liking Zeenia already. She is lightening the atmosphere, just when it is needed. But that was a shock. I thought she would have been a little bit more mature, since she's done it before, and this is Anushka's body she's in. It would make too many people suspicious if Anushka's personality suddenly changed. And Misha is funny when she is jealous. She should know that she has no threat from Zeenia. OMG!!! It all makes sense now! So, basically, if Abhay gets the ring, he becomes all powerful, and then becomes like Dr. Jeykll and Mr. Hyde? Can't there be some other way for the werewolves to stop shifting when the moon comes out other than sacrificing Abhay? Like, having him draw blood out of himself while reciting some spell... I wonder, if Abhay knew everything that they all just learned, would he take the powers and become corrupt, or would he stay away from the ring, so that everyone is safe? I think that there should be some way for him to get all his powers, and still be in control of his good side. Obviously, Piya would help with that as soon as he remembers her love again.

For the page 45 chapter:

This one was short! I'm hating Daksh so much now! I take it back, Poco. You can keep the Daksh doppelganger! Pancchi trusts Daksh blindly, and it seems like he is just using her to get closer to Abhay, since he knows that she is friends with him.

Originally posted by: ilove99

hey nice update...😆why didn't you replied........

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

☺️Fab update Poco......Daksh sends everyones senses to Bahamas you know.......but why did he embed the needle in her vein or is it nerve........is it for her protection or does he intend to harm her......i dont onr bit trust this guy......so the locket is gonna stay permanently on her neck.........i hope our birdie pie doesn't get hurt