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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ssshh

poco u r amazing👍🏼 ,fabs,writer,i cant not explained ,how much i love this chapter,i have read this chapter 10 times ,its amazing😊.

abhiya's love moment muahhhhhhhhhhh😳😳😳,a fairytale,abhiya's seduction part and piya's good bye,
OMG,more than love,🤗🤗🤗
poor T😔,i really feel syampathy for her,she doesn't deserve this much pain,i hope,she will find other way to live happily😊,sam can connect to T,but plzzzzzz not fall in love,he deserves misha's love and lecture😉😉😊.
plzzz update fast,love u poco😳



Thank you!😃.....i am happy that you loved this chapter and hopefully you will like the forthcoming ones as well with AbhIya. T is a pivotal character in this story and don't worry Sam-Misha are the end game. T is an important arch in Sam's life .
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: charmingkiller

i loved da part

especially da abhay n piya dey wer so sweet
poor misha is an aware of sam's feeling



Thank you. 😃Abhay-Piya were their romantic best in this one , i guess. Misha and Sam need a journey to get together and no, they are not going to just get up and fall in love. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Poco....
i loved ur update... the abhiya scene was super hottt.... i just luv u for it....👏
As far as Sam-T are concerned... i do understand ur perspective abt their relationship....Damon n Rose relation was a perfect hint for it.... But i'm still worried abt abhay forgetting piya....
Anyways.... i know u'll surprise us as u always do...😉
plz update sooooon.........😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Pocahontas



Thanks.😳.....I just wanted to make Abhay-Piya's last meeting special and am glad i did. Abhay has left Piya with a question and she will herself walk into the answers. T will never find her soulmate - her character is relegated to misery.

Oh, i love Stefan-Damon equally and Edward. is , well Edward. I am yet to read your work and i will, hopefully soon.😊




Hmmmm. So stephen and damon equally. I havent seen the VD serial yet it all goes to what my friend narates... So i guess after i watch everything on you tube i will get back to you and as for Edward. (No competition! Most people think i am crazy and i am... I am in love with a vampire who is real in my wold!!! My mom knows that too. She is cool about it! 😳 😛) Dont worry if you dont find my comments... My computer and lap top both are gone dead... Well they are not working and i dont think i will be back in a week or so... But i will catch up soon!

Bye! 😭 I will miss you!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Pocahontas



Thank you. 😃Abhay-Piya were their romantic best in this one , i guess. Misha and Sam need a journey to get together and no, they are not going to just get up and fall in love. 😊

are SAM 'n' Misha made for each other?will they be together?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Anushka's Bedroom, Guesthouse, Maarwa

It is 6.30 in the morning and Anushka walks out of the shower , wearing a red bathrobe , her alabaster skin wet , fragrant and gleaming in contrast to her troubled doe eyes. She looks at the wall clock and her jaw tightens. As she slips into a white summerdress , wearing her black gold rose vial back in her neck , she tells herself not to feel or go weak at all. This was the time of action. All moral and emotional battles were long done. She was going to keep her promise and deal with Maithli and Natasha . Abhay would reach the Bloodstone Dungeon by 9am as he had messaged her . She and Maithli had to be there before him, as she had often reminded herself while reaching this day. Brushing her hair and wearing her rings and charms back, Anushka looked down the window. Maithli was standing in the shades of the walnut trees ,tapping her feet impatiently on the ground. Anushka is filled with a humbling pity for this misguided obsessed evil soul. Abhay. She was doing all thus madness , betraying Sam, joining hands with Natasha just to get Abhay. Anushka shook her head and zipped her luggage shut. With a click of her fingers , it disappeared into thin air . But the gold dust that rose from the magic did not settle, to Anushka's surprise. It dazed her and Anushka felt a high-pleasure feeling in her head – her mind going blank and her nerves springing with an adrenaline rush. Anushka's whole body shook as her veins seemed injected with some kind of a drug. The feeling was familiar …..she closed her eyes and she found herself in a sun-kissed summer field of flowers. Anushka opened her eyes and she saw a familiar spectacle….

Anushka is dressed in some traditional princess attire of 'Rajwaadaz' ( royals of Rajasthan) and she is running in the fields , giggling and laughing as her anklets make sweet tinkling sounds. There is a well-built young man running behind her calling her name and asking her to stop. His face can't be seen as he runs behind her. Anushka teases and dodges him and he manages to catch her. He hugs her and she puts her arms around his neck , lovingly.

NO! Anushka screams and comes back to reality. Her face is drained off all colour and she sits down on the bed with a thud. NO! This… this was just not possible! After so many years! ….Anushka looks around madly and only sees the window panes swaying to the morning wind smelling of walnuts. Her breathing is scared , excited and caught in her throat.

Anushka ( holding her head )- No…..NO! H-How could I relive that? …( timidly but with a streak of emotion )…. Are you…. Are you here? ….( her head reeling and voice breaking )… you can't be ! Do you hear me? YOU CAN'T BE! ….( sits down on the bed again steadying herself )…this 'feeling'…( touches herself to rinse off what she felt and looks rather vulnerable )…..it can only be him….Abhay! I must … I must tell Abhay! ….

Just then, her cellphone rings and a perturbed and shaking Anushka looks at it . Maithli calling! Anushka is jolted back to reality. Tell Abhay? Tell Abhay that there was a possibility that 'he' could be coming back? Worming his way back into their lives? Her and Abhay's life? But she was going to perform magic on Abhay. Do I tell him? Come on Anushka, just how many things can you hide from him? You will be gone to the underworld and that frisky Zeenia will be in your place. At least, Abhay should know about this approaching danger , if nothing else. DAMN! What was happening! Werewolves, Bolshvas, Majesty, signs of vampire slayers and now ……His return? What will happen here in her absence?

Bloodstone Dungeon , Middle Earth

Anushka and Maithli are standing in some gothic high ceiling caves which have gargoyles , demons and angels carved on them and the whole structure is covered with murals. Both the women are standing at the life size mouth of a demon and Maithli is looking pretty, glowing , dressed in the same attire in which Abhay had last seen her 300 years ago on the day of losing her.

Anushka ( cautiously )- Abhay is reaching here , I can sense him coming. You will go into this tunnel, Maithli. Keep walking till you reach the end. Don't look back . Don't ask any question. Don't answer any question. That will awake the Oracle and the whole cluster of vampires – the Czen vampires will arrive here and have you and me for early breakfast. Get it?

Maithli ( nods )- I hope you are not double crossing me.

Anushka ( grits her teeth )- I wish I could. But since I have everything to lose , I might as well keep the agreement to keep Piya and myself alive. ….( turns to the demon and touches his face )…. ENTOREIA!

The stone face of the demon moves and his huge eyes blow out fire that the two witches dodge. He growls horrendously as his huge mouth opens with a creaking mincing sound of stones crushing against each-other.

Anushka ( pointing to the hollow abyss inside)- WALK IN…….And remember what I told you. The oracle must not wake up.

Maithli nods and one look of mixed emotions to Anushka , Maithli steps into the demon's mouth , disappearing into the dark.

Maithli senses Abhay approaching and her eyes closed, her hands hooked together , her lips moving with chants under her breath , she takes a deep breath and turns back – her face is flushed red with all the energy in her. She slowly opens her eyes and Abhay walks towards her.

Abhay ( looking at her )- What? Are you in the middle of the ritual already, Anushka? …..

Anushka ( keeping her fists closed )- Yes. I had to be ready before you, Abhay. This is for guarding you against the Bolshvas and the werewolves . More than that it is to immunize you against their mind power – more for the safety of Piya than you. You both are connected, remember….( holds out her fists and looks into his eyes )…. Trust me.

Abhay smiles and firmly puts his hands on her upturned fists.

Abhay ( looking into her eyes )- I trust you.

Anushka opens her fists and a glow hologram rises from it , lighting up Abhay's face with a silver light. He looks at the light and the irises of his ice blue eyes become still and his face hardens. He puts his hands on her open palms. She grasps his hands and slowly takes him towards the demon's mouth.

Anushka ( with a devilish echoing voice )- Abhay , what do you remember now?

Abhay ( dazed )- Glow. The silver glow.

Anushka( grasping his hands )- You will only remember what my voice tells you. You will forget what I tell you to. I am the voice of your mind. Release your senses and yourself to me.

Abhay – Yes. I release myself to you.

Anushka guides him to the demon's door. Still holding his hands, she takes him into the demon's mouth.

Inside the Demon's Mouth , Bloodstone Dungeon.

As soon as they both enter the mouth , they start descending a stone spiral staircase that is going down, down, down, almost trying to reach the other end of earth. Anushka closes Abhay's eyes with her palm.Holding his hands and her voice echoing , she takes him down the stone staircase that looks like an endless abyss.

Anushka ( her voice echoing )- Go back in time, Abhay. 300 years ago. You are at the forest river and you are losing someone special. Do you see her?

Abhay ( his brain traveling through a wormhole )- I do. I am losing Maithli!.... they…. The werewolves are taking her away!... ( tears rolling down his cheeks )…. I am screaming but I can't save her.

Anushka – You love her.

Abhay ( moved )- I do. I will wait for her.

Anushka – She loves you too. More than anything. You will never stop waiting for her. You will never love anyone else. Come ahead. At the end of 300 years.

They are continuing descending the steps.

Anushka – There is a girl in your life. Who is she?

Abhay ( memories of him and Piya in his mind )- Piya. I love her. I am happy with her. She says she loves me.

Anushka- No, Abhay….( her hands tightening around his hands)… she doesn't love you and you don't love her. You are going to forget Piya's love……You will remember everything else except what you and Piya once had.

Abhay ( sadly )- I am going to forget Piya's love.

Anushka – Look into your mind. Harder. Again. Do you see her anywhere?

Abhay ( shaken )- No…. she is …. She is gone. I don't see her…..

Anushka – Look again now. There is a girl walking towards you ….look at her….you are in the valley of flowers and she has come. For you. A long wait of 300 years …open your heart, Abhay. Open your arms. You love her….

Abhay ( seeing Maithli come towards him with a smiling face and her arms outstretched )- Maithli…..I love Maithli?

Anushka – You love Maithli. None else. Embrace her.

With this Anushka releases Abhay's hands – her last words echoing in Abhay's mind.

Abhay opens his eyes slowly and he finds himself standing in a valley of flowers and a beautiful, compassionate and loving Maithli coming towards him……her smile lighting up her eyes….

You love Maithli. None else. Embrace her.

A smile slowly spreads across Abhay's face and he opens his arms to her. She runs into them and Abhay engulfs her in an embrace…..

You love her….

Abhay ( softly )- I love you…..Maithli….

TO BE CONTINUED…..

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Posted: 14 years ago
eeeeeeeeeee
new chapter!!!
xo!
EDITED*
oh my almighty lord!!!! anush is all in for this ritual.. and i so can empathize with her.. imagine doing all this against your will... feeling so helpless, theres nothing she can do.. the revenge part is far later, but she has to go on with this evil plan of metz and natz🤢
whom did anush seee btw? her old love ofourse.. is he back... for good? is he evil.. oww my poor kabeer.. 😳
Werewolves, Bolshvas, Majesty, signs of vampire slayers and now ……His return? poco.. so much of danger i see ahead.. or is it just me?
grr metz, cant she just trust anush for once.. ek toh poor anu is busy dealing with all sort of emotions, and now u torture her by opening your mouth😡
alrite, anu is done with her task, and it was so very well written, i cld feel every bit of it
:D

Edited by elizaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rozy77

hey poco😃

wonderful, awesome update as usual👏⭐️
thanks for includin that super hot romantic scene between abhiya☺️ that was a real treat and also the best 1 of them all. i guess we'll have to wait a few more weeks for another 1
am really lookin forward as to hw this whole drama is gona play out, very exciting times ahead😆
btw what happened to danish? i thought he was gona ask abhay to release him from this torture😕
Anyways take care🤗



Thanks for reading, darling. 😳i am busy , sweetz but am trying to be as regular as i can. 😆...Danish will tell that to Abhay after he attacks Kabir.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ilove99

are SAM 'n' Misha made for each other?will they be together?


YES YES THEY WILL😳
they r soul mates, supposed to betogether na
:D
lmao, one more hyper one like me
:P
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

though i don't like T but the last scene was really adorable and somehow its touched my heart .

sam and T may not be the best couple but they can really good freinds or some uname relation they held which is infact both an neccasity and gift for them.
pia and abhay were just so cute
abhay told her a story wow totally dreamlike
and yup maybe this will be last sweet moments for a long time
pia did said good bye to him and that story did symbolizes their one.
do continue
dear
its beautiful
bye sumi



Thanks Sumi. I am glad that finally you and others are getting Sam-T . 😳....This bond is necessary for both of them. Abhay-Piya's good times are over and their exciting times have begun. 😉

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