AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131 - Page 20

Originally posted by: shruthiR

It was a very nice chp.T and Sam get along really well.I feel so bad for AbhIya!This was actually the last sweet moment they had togetherLooking forward to the next chp😊

Originally posted by: vidi263

Great update Poco..As I said before I have been following your update since a long time and I find it more interesting than the actual show. One thing I like about your story is that all the characters are connected to each other in some way or the other. What I mean is that they all play their part but together they are taking the story forward in a collective fashion. They all are a part of the same story which has a central idea. This is one thing that I am missing in the actual show. I feel the characters are very disconnected from each other. At any given point in time they concentrate only on a couple of characters aur unke aas paas hi sab kuch ghumta rehta hai...everyone else just disappears...

In your FF even though Tracker and Angad are not still the part of the supernatural secret they don't seem outsiders. I liked Tanushree in the show and I like her in your FF too. All the characters are very well defined. I get the idea that Daksh might be a vampire slayer but what about Abhay's father? Is he here yet?

Do you know the best part about reading your update for me? When I started reading it I was visualizing the actual actors who are playing the respective parts. But as I went further those faces have disappeared. Now I have completely different faces of Abhay, Piya and most of the characters and they relate only to your update. Now I don't visualize Vivian and Sukirti playing your Abhay and Piya. And I think as per my view this is the best part about you and your writing. ALthough your FF is based on the theme of the show and most of the characters are same you are able to disengage the real actors from your characters and create of different picture of them in your readers' minds. And it would be a tough job but you so easily did it.

I am sorry I am going on and on about so many things, half of which probably won't even make any sense to u. But I had these thoughts about your update and since this is the 1st time I am writing something on your update I poured everything out.

Now I shouId tell you Thanks and Good Luck for reading My gibberish 😆. Update soon.

Originally posted by: missglam

Hey Poco....

i loved ur update... the abhiya scene was super hottt.... i just luv u for it....👏

As far as Sam-T are concerned... i do understand ur perspective abt their relationship....Damon n Rose relation was a perfect hint for it.... But i'm still worried abt abhay forgetting piya....

Anyways.... i know u'll surprise us as u always do...😉

plz update sooooon.........😊

@Anushka's vision or not sure what it was- Who and why?

NICE CHAPTER Di😊,its really good like all other chapters.i really don't like maithili in abhay's arm😡 but i know its destiny.

Although short but a very interesting and engaging update....😊. And someone's entry is anticipated...that's again something intriguing...Great Going!!