AbhIya FF: And I will Be Waiting: B-2-Updtd- Pg131

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NidhaA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#171

gr8 imagntn i mst say..lovd evry bt of it..do write soon.,am rdng dis frm phn wer cn i rd buk one❓

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Untitled001

@Untitled001

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Posted: 14 years ago

#172

Really great update. I feel so bad for Pia and Abhay its like Abhay was telling Pia their story and i felt so bad. I hope that Abhay's heart does remember the love... I like T. she might be a little bad in the serial but in this fan fiction she is different. I like the way Sambhav and T are connecting. But finding out that they wont have a happy ending makes me sad too.... Wish Misha and Sambhav story does take place but T finds her soul mate too... I want her to be happy. Everyone deserves happiness even if they are bad...

And i am in love with the supernatural too. I connect with it more than i connect with reality. I can relate to it. and i am in love with a supernatural character. I am guessing you like Damon dont you? I like him too... But i guess Edward wins over. ☺️

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shivani

@ssshh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#173

poco u r amazing👍🏼 ,fabs,writer,i cant not explained ,how much i love this chapter,i have read this chapter 10 times ,its amazing😳😳😳👏👏👏😊😊😊😊.

abhiya's love moment muahhhhhhhhhhh😳😳😳,a fairytale,abhiya's seduction part and piya's good bye,

OMG,more than love,🤗🤗🤗

poor T😔,i really feel syampathy for her,she doesn't deserve this much pain,i hope,she will find other way to live happily😊,sam can connect to T,but plzzzzzz not fall in love,he deserves misha's love and lecture😉😉😊.

plzzz update fast,love u poco😳

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

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Posted: 14 years ago

#174

i loved da part

especially da abhay n piya dey wer so sweet

poor misha is an aware of sam's feeling

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#175

hey poco😃

wonderful, awesome update as usual👏⭐️

thanks for includin that super hot romantic scene between abhiya☺️ that was a real treat and also the best 1 of them all. i guess we'll have to wait a few more weeks for another 1

am really lookin forward as to hw this whole drama is gona play out, very exciting times ahead😆

btw what happened to danish? i thought he was gona ask abhay to release him from this torture😕

Anyways take care🤗

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sosweetsumi

@sosweetsumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#176

though i don't like T but the last scene was really adorable and somehow its touched my heart .

sam and T may not be the best couple but they can really good freinds or some uname relation they held which is infact both an neccasity and gift for them.

pia and abhay were just so cute

abhay told her a story wow totally dreamlike

and yup maybe this will be last sweet moments for a long time

pia did said good bye to him and that story did symbolizes their one.

do continue

dear

its beautiful

bye sumi

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shruthiR

@shruthiR

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Posted: 14 years ago

#177

It was a very nice chp.T and Sam get along really well.I feel so bad for AbhIya!This was actually the last sweet moment they had togetherLooking forward to the next chp😊

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@vidi263

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Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Great update Poco..As I said before I have been following your update since a long time and I find it more interesting than the actual show. One thing I like about your story is that all the characters are connected to each other in some way or the other. What I mean is that they all play their part but together they are taking the story forward in a collective fashion. They all are a part of the same story which has a central idea. This is one thing that I am missing in the actual show. I feel the characters are very disconnected from each other. At any given point in time they concentrate only on a couple of characters aur unke aas paas hi sab kuch ghumta rehta hai...everyone else just disappears...

In your FF even though Tracker and Angad are not still the part of the supernatural secret they don't seem outsiders. I liked Tanushree in the show and I like her in your FF too. All the characters are very well defined. I get the idea that Daksh might be a vampire slayer but what about Abhay's father? Is he here yet?

Do you know the best part about reading your update for me? When I started reading it I was visualizing the actual actors who are playing the respective parts. But as I went further those faces have disappeared. Now I have completely different faces of Abhay, Piya and most of the characters and they relate only to your update. Now I don't visualize Vivian and Sukirti playing your Abhay and Piya. And I think as per my view this is the best part about you and your writing. ALthough your FF is based on the theme of the show and most of the characters are same you are able to disengage the real actors from your characters and create of different picture of them in your readers' minds. And it would be a tough job but you so easily did it.

I am sorry I am going on and on about so many things, half of which probably won't even make any sense to u. But I had these thoughts about your update and since this is the 1st time I am writing something on your update I poured everything out.

Now I shouId tell you Thanks and Good Luck for reading My gibberish 😆. Update soon.

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: Nidhsara
gr8 imagntn i mst say..lovd evry bt of it..do write soon.,am rdng dis frm phn wer cn i rd buk one❓

Thank you so much , my dear. The link to the first book is on page 1 .😊

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TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: Paradisekiss053
Really great update. I feel so bad for Pia and Abhay its like Abhay was telling Pia their story and i felt so bad. I hope that Abhay's heart does remember the love... I like T. she might be a little bad in the serial but in this fan fiction she is different. I like the way Sambhav and T are connecting. But finding out that they wont have a happy ending makes me sad too.... Wish Misha and Sambhav story does take place but T finds her soul mate too... I want her to be happy. Everyone deserves happiness even if they are bad...

And i am in love with the supernatural too. I connect with it more than i connect with reality. I can relate to it. and i am in love with a supernatural character. I am guessing you like Damon dont you? I like him too... But i guess Edward wins over. ☺️

Thanks.😳😳😳😳😳😳.....I just wanted to make Abhay-Piya's last meeting special and am glad i did. Abhay has left Piya with a question and she will herself walk into the answers. T will never find her soulmate - her character is relegated to misery.

Oh, i love Stefan-Damon equally and Edward. is , well Edward. I am yet to read your work and i will, hopefully soon.😊

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