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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 124

I should have known all along,there was something wrong
I just never read between the lines
Then I woke up one day and found you on your way
Leaving nothing but my heart behind

What can I do to make it up to you
Promises don't come easy
But tell me if there's a way to bring you back home to stay
Well I'd promises anything to you

I've been walkin' around with my head hanging down
Wondrin' what I'm gonna do
'Cause when you walked out that door,
I knew I needed you more
Than to take a chance on losing you

What can I do to make it up to you
Promises don't come easy
You know I've made up my mind to make it work this time
That's the promise that I give to you
You never thought I loved you
I guess you never thought I cared
I was just too proud to say it out loud
Now I know, to let my feelings go (so tell me)

What can I do to make it up to you
Promises don't come easy
You know I've made up my mind to make it work this time
That's the promise I can give to you
What can I do to make it up to you

he could cry this whole day, every day for last 7years.. but still didn't know wat can he do to make it up to her..she was gone... gone where he didn't know..wat a shame Maan Singh Khurana didn't know where she was. Crashing down like a glass ki hawali in a storm.. all his arrogance, attitude with one act of hers ..just leaving everything that held her identity as Geet Handa on his table.. that day..she just walked away..never to return.. her passport, her driving license, her every thing was left behind in that bag. She didn't go back to her house, not even to her friends.

Every one searched for her madly.. handa family gave up & lunched an missing report in police too. He did wat ever he could as Maan Singh Khurana. Raj came & threatened him..if any thing happens to gudiya I will kill u with my bare hands. 7Years...umm..police even declared her dead...his feet went cold with the thought...his heart felt like sinking....he reacted in shock when 6 year old Anjali came running to him..hugged him...Maan mama...dehko devansh mujhe mar raha hain 4yr of Devansh nahi Maan uncle its not me...pehle anjali di ne mara tha. He lifted them both & walked into the kitchen & gave them both ice-creams..no more fighting..friends umm
anjali & devansh - friends & hugged him
anni - bhai aap humesha aise karte ho
NT - veerji ..only u can handle them
devansh hugged Maan - my uncle is the best
anjali - my uncle '
Daadi walked in - tum dono ka uncle bus!!
he smiled. Kissed them both & left for another wild camp of his.
Daadi - Maan it is not safe now days.
As if he cared any more..his life felt like a burden to him.. he was lifeless..


5.30am Baramulla Police Head Quarters Out side Interrogation Room
Head - this is it.. he is the prime witness we have
jr cop Atif - lekin sir he is no where near giving us any information
head - well then u haven't tried enough
jr. cop Khan - sir hum log kal raat se lagen huwen hain.. humne uss sale ki halat kharab kar di hain
head - call gk..then
constables - aab tho murda bhi bole ga...woh bhi 5.30 bhaje tho iska sar kiska huwa hota hain

when Gk walks in ..all the staff gets on their guards & greet feeling intimidated with mere presence
gk ignores them all in ruthless look
gk - good morning sir
head - good morning ' this is a prime witness.. sala kuch moo nahi khol raha hain
gk - salen ki maa bhi bolen ghi
head - don't kill him
gk - umm
gk bend to walk inside the interrogation room
man sitting on the chair with his hand tied backward smiles at the person who stood infront of him. slipping in the gloves & adjusting the revolver. No warning, nothing blind fire just to tear slight his ligament on the right leg. He screamed in pain..the aim was so perfect ,...to induce pain to the maximum..the smile faded turning into a terror, horror, worsth nightmare he could ever even think of.
jr cop athif came running - sir ne marne ko nahi kaha hain
another point blank shot on the arm the left arm. Blood oozing out splashed on gk's face & hand. Gk wiped the revolver ruthless on his wound & pulled the trigger placing the gun on his forehead..any act by which severe pain or suffering, whether physical or mental, is intentionally inflicted on a person was cake walk for gk. Cold, brutal, ruthless..even the dead would speak out feeling the pain.
Man shivered & pissed on his pants.. - haan humne hi kidnap kiya hain
still shoot another bullet on his right hand just next to the shoulder...the constable took the statement.
Head - great job
there was no reaction on gk face ..it was probably the nth time head said that.
Head - u are handling case
gk - u know I don't like all this high profile stuff..waise bhi yeh humare area ka case nahi hain
head - nahi they are hiding him in our region
gk - umm
head - army will provide full support
gk snapped - why can't they handle it then
head - relax ..sachi subha 5.30 bheja tumhe kya hojata hain
just coldly wiped the blood stains from the face & walked away slamming the door behind
inspector khan & Athif where part of the mission with 10 commandos
Gk pushes off all the files & other papers on the table & spreads the map
Athif holds at one end
Khan - information ke hisaab se they are hiding at the Rajpur forest at this region pointing at the top most corner.
Gk - DFO se baat huwaee?
Athif - district forsest officer ke paas koi moment registered nahi hain
gk - charse ke paas pasien khaane se phursat ho tho kaam karga ...ba***..c*** sa***
athif - last month he brought a flat in Srinagar
gk - leave that..
pointing at the paper gk - we will move in from here..athif u go with 5 commandos
athif - umm
gk - khan tum baaki longo ke saat yanha se umm
khan - umm
they rushed out loading the guns & hiding few extra in the leg & back. They followed the path of the silent jungle..birds chirps, some strange noises... khan ..yah akela ..how can..uff??he couldn't explain the risks gk always takes
athif - humesha..takes ultimate risk...like doesn't fear death...really isse yanha nahi kargil field main hona tha..
athif & khan split opposite direction with their commandos
gk on the micro phone - I am going in now
walk-ins..straight where there were 5 kidnapper held captive the VVVIIP
cross firing...all the 4 kidnapper were too slow in reacting compared to gk's speed & smartness
last one held the gun against the VVVIIP & hid behind him ..almost shielding himself
athif spoke on the micro phone - gk don't shoot
they just handled the guys who where guarding outside.. all of them..situation was under control
khan - nahi shoot mat karna.. VIP ko lag gayee tho issue ho jayega...
athif - relax we have the situation in control
gk was looked straight .. nothing...nothing disturbed..even the continuous warning ..didn't seem to reach the ears...

precap,
another high profile kidnapping

-PREV NEXT PART125-
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Really love reading them
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Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
rrrr
yeyey...me firsssssssssttttt.....🥳
waaaah waaah muski di...wht a update...GKKKK...our geeet rockssssssssssssss.....😉😉..n the precap.....luks lyk maan is kidnapped...riteeeeee????..luved the update n the new twist in the story...me jus shocked with the 7 yearsss geet left maaan..haan haan i was also among the one who was angry with maan lekin yeh tho yeeeeeeeeehhh..tho bahuth zooor ka revenge nikla....😕..continue soon...n double muaahssss for u today..!!!😃😳

Rohini

Edited by Rohini20 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

whether this track is to make maan nd geet meet?????

7 years leap...........😲😒

like to have the magic back which make TM the more magical in the next update!!!!


Edited by dia_ditz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

ye gk geet khurana hain na.. yaar tumne in dono ko y years ki leap main vej dia....now what is else..

Edited by reea88 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh God....where is Geet??😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭😭
not fair...
what is going on...7 yrs??? no geet??
😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
RES
dun tell me GK is GEET KHURANA.......naaaahhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!😲
😲muskaan....yeh kya kar diya tumne???😕 aishi bhi kya galti ki thi maan ne jo itni badi sazaa de di tumne un dono ko???😭😭......1-2 saal ki baat hoti to zyada takleef nahi hoti....but 7 saal.......omg........am gonna faint now🤢🤢🤢.....plz plz plz maaneet ka aamna-saamna kara do.jaldi se.......plz.....i can't bear too much of separation😭😭😭.....
Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
ok seven years is a bit too much but he deserved it... after what he did to her... after all thst he said he so deserved it... GK is geet right...i am so very happy that now geet is independent... but why did she have to leave her parents for a man like maan who disrespected her love... why does she have to suffer... you know even in this seperation it is she who is suffering the most.... she left her parents coz she was pregant wasnt she... i am crying but i am with you on this .... you've done the right thing k now i want maan to win her back coz whatever it be she did love him and still does that i am sure but he needs to repent...
luv ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW that was an unexpected turn of events . . . 7 years? HAIII . . . NOW WHAT?

Love

Liz
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Posted: 14 years ago
Kaha thana
Geet itni door cahli jayegi that Maan Singh Khurana wont be able to find her
Chali gayi wo
New entries
Looks lik sumthg related to Geet
7years baap re
Well koi stry ko ek hi update mein fully change karna tumse seekhe
Edited by -afsha- - 14 years ago

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