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Posted: 14 years ago

-truly magical-
part 125

khan - nahi shoot mat karna.. VIP ko lag gayee tho issue ho jayega...
athif - relax we have the situation in control
gk looked straight .. nothing...nothing disturbed..even the continuous warning ..didn't seem to reach the ears... as if gk ever cared about the countless transfers that was imposed on several occasions for taking unnecessary risk..
khan -..no no ...hold back
athif - gk we have every thing in control
their voice died when they heard the gun fire...they immediately rushed to the spot..breaking in the front door.. the kidnapper laid on the floor dead with a bullet shot straight on his forehead between the eyes..the VIP stood their shaking in terror.. still feeling the brush of the bullet pass through his hair..probably he just pissed on his pants.. GK was calm composed & relaxed like nothing happened. Athif & khan smiled & looked a away trying to hide their laughter on the VIP. Nothing could be read through those glassed eyes & masked face even the voice couldn't be recognised with the voice modulator. Those eyes where sealed no emotions could be seen. nothing nothing was known about Gk's identity in that look of walking emotionless body.
VIP after recovering from the shock - officer wat do u think of ur self...agar goli mujhe lag jathi tho
gk never responded just walked away. ..gk never answered anyone..never had to..even superiors had failed but all of then knew gk was the best officer they had ..best shooter, extra - ordinary intelligence. no wonder 2 double promotions & 5 awards in 7yrs of service. Youngest officer to be ranked as Deputy Commissioner of Police ..IPS officers posted in insurgency infested states such as J&K can wear this rank before 13 years of service to facilitate coordination and interaction with Commanding Officers of paramilitary and the Indian Army though technically it not right before required number of years but Gk earnned it.
Head the Commissioner of police - Gk.. that shot was not called for..but he knew the answer, by now he was used to it..tumhare chup rahena se kaam nahi hoga..I have to answer my seniors
tumhe pata hain woh kaun tha..
gk - hoga kisi political leader ka beta.. I am here to serve the country..inki talwa chaat ne ke liya nahi
high security & sudden movements.. the minister just walked in with his guards ..total unexpected visit
commissioners tone changes straightens himself - go ..goo good morning sir
minister turns to gk - thank u officer
gk stiffened & straight blank & emotionless face
commissioner pleaded gk to at least fake a smile.
Minister - I wanted to thank u personally for saving my son's life, we have a party in ur honor at the taj to night.
Gk point blank - thanxs for the invite I don't attend parties.
Minister was taken little back by the attitude, probably offended too - see u at 7..he inisited
& left from there.
Commissioner - can't u for once smile..wats wrong with u, aise koi party ke liya mana karta hain kya..nahi jana tho mat javoo..lekin aise ..aab kya
gk smirked - send khan..let him represent us.. usse tho waise bhi parties ki nangi thitliyan pasand hain
commissioner laughed
DELHI KHURANA MANSION
Daadi - Maan aise kab taak chalega
he excatly knows wat Daadi was pointing to
Daadi - its been more than 7yrs now
he thought 7yrs 6months..3days
Daadi - aap shaadi kyun nahi karlete, I got some proposals for u
he just left ..hating to even hear the word shaadi.. he hated wat he has done to her, ruined her dream, didn't even keep any of his promise.. he looked for her every where madly.. he regretted those words he spoke to her last..go hide ur self where ever u want... I will come looking for u... & he is still looking for her...the Maan Singh Khurana Empire felt timid.
He hated to see happily married dev & Nt with a 4yr old devansh.. jealousy some where Arjun & Anni with 6yr old Anjali. So much he wanted a happy family with Geet. Then the thought..she didn't want kids..a smiled teased his lips with a tear in his eyes.. he ruined his family, his love, his life..wat he hated most was he was not even sure ..where she was..is she alright..
BARAMULLA
a week later gk walks in without permission into commissioner office & throws an envelope on his table
gk - yeh kya hain?
Commissioner - uppar se orders hain
gk - I don't care
commissioner - it was a lapse from our end
gk - not our end..delhi police
commissioner - it is very high profile kidnapping case
gk spat - u know wat that saala mantri ka beta said after we saved his life
commissioner - its a national security issue
gk - ask defense to handle it then
commissioner - they r already looking into it, lekin police ki taraf se lapse hain tho its better we sort it out. Warna khamakhan force ki batnami hogi
gk - why me
commissioner - u seem to have impressed that minister
gk - sala..B*****.cho**.uski tho main..
commissioner given up to the foul language by now...- every one knows u are the best
gk - yah right!!
commissioner - tumhe delhi wallon se itna kya allergy hain
wrong question ' he knew there won't be answer like always.
Commissioner - ammunition deal waigra ka koi chakar hain
gk stiffened & some emotions seemed to flash...anger..fear some where - Maan Singh Khurana
commissioner nodded...dam this ammunititoin deal gk thought
immediately gk - how long since??
has any one claimed the kidnapping? like ramson call or anything?
last time they took him some where near delhi - haridwar highway..?
did it happen in the same location?
Commissioner - wait wait wait..just relax..all the details r on this file
gk - who is coordinating from defense.. Raj?? I mean Capt Rajveer
commissioner - Col Rajveer Singh Shikawat... thats cool already seem to know the case..
gk (how else would know his case better gk thought)- yah right
commissioner - delhi Deputy Commissioner of Police Ayur will be coordinating u..u will need to leave now
delhi airport
as ayur walks in ..gk doesn't even wait for the intro
gk walking briskly with luggage & looking into the files - any further information
ayur - no nothing yet
gk - how sure r u of the location
ayur - thats wat Col Rajveer confirmed.
Took the map studied the area while in the car. Athif & khan joined in with more details of the location. They reached the location in 30minutes

all of them were dressed in black & black with black cloth on head & a mask partly covering the face. Gk wore the glasses..completely sealing their identity...gk instructed holding the gun steady in one hand. ..pointing left to athif & right to Khan. Athif was in-charge of coordinating with raj..
raj - u should have waited
athif - gk told us to go head
raj - back off now..looks like high militant intervene in this whole thing. I don't think u guys can handle it
athif - we r already in there
raj immediately arranged for the chopper to reach the location..
precap,
do they actually meet???
-PREV PART 124 NEXT PART 126-
hope u all like the updates. Love all your comments.
Really love reading them
please do keep commenting'.
Love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yippieeeeeeeeeeee
u updated...now let me go read
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Posted: 14 years ago
good ...maan deserves that lonely life😡 where evrybody is there for him bt still alone...

gk........well what should i say for her..u made me cry today😭😭

loved the scene of mantri's son got scared and atif & khan supress their laughter😆

fab update 👏cont soon,,,
Edited by agmaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski aur kitna tadpaogi yaar
plz unhe mila do
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sigh!!!
Muski......all I can do i Sigh.......
😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you for the update. Interesting precap. I hope they meet.
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Posted: 14 years ago
BLECK . .

Muski diiiiiiiiiiiii why! I wanted them to MEET! UGHHHHHHHHHH THE WAIT! UHHHHHH

😆
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow.. i loved it!! l.o.v.e.d i.t!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was a great update 👏 but one sad thing we are missing geet badly the cute cute way she talks and behaves we are missing them
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwww!!!!!! Geet is superb!!!!
will Geet and Raj meet???????
so, MAAN has been kidnapped again??
Thanks for the update!!!!

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