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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.............cute maan wanna give geet all happiness
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Originally posted by: preethia

nice update.............cute maan wanna give geet all happiness

But he wont be able to.....😭😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my god, maan is so cute....................nice update..............continue soon.....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
next part kab continue karo gi
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Originally posted by: maan13579

awesome

next part kab continue karo gi

Tomorrow😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww 😭 koi baat nhi i will be waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lovely update.. all 3 out for a movie.. thts cool.. continue soon
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Part 29

GEET,MAAN AND MEERA WALKING.MEERA SHRUGS IN BETWEEN MAAN AND GEET.

Geet:Meera!!!

Meera:What? Were all going to watch a movie,not just you and maan.I don't want to be left out.Tonight,No lovey dovey stuff,ok?

MAAN AND GEET SMILE.

THEY ARRIVE AND BUY THE TICKETS.THEY GO IN THE THEATRE.MEERA SITS IN BETWEEN MAAN AND GEET.THE FILM STARTS.

GEET ST:THIS IS SO BORING!! I'D THOUGHT THAT I'D GET TO SPEND ABIT OF TIME WITH MAAN BUT NO'

MAAN ST:MEERA,NO MATTER WHAT YOU DO,ME AND GEET WILL TALK.YOU HAVEN'T SEEN MSK'S STUBBORN SIDE YET.

MAAN TEXTS GEET:IM BORED.

GEET TEXTS:ME TOO!! YOU KNOW,I HATE WATCHING FILMS,I ONLY CAME SO I COULD SPEND TIME WITH YOU!!

MAAN TEXTS:WELL,I DO HAVE A FORM OF ENTERTAINMENT FOR ME,WATCHING ANUSHKA.BUT WHAT ABOUT YOU? AKSHAYS UGLY AND MARRIED ASWELL!!

GEET:OHH!! DON'T EVEN DARE LOOK AT HER!!!

MEERA FINDS OUT AND TAKES GEET PHONE OFF HER,MAAN DOESN'T KNOW.

HE TEXTS: I LOVE YOU.WHY WOULD I EVEN LOOK AT HER?

MEERA TEXTS: OH REALLY? YOU LOVE ME?

HE TEXTS:YES.

Meera: I thought you loved geet.I'll just tell her.now shut up and watch the film.Oh god,never make me fall in love,it's a crazy thing!!

MAAN AND GEET LOOK AT EACH OTHER.

MAAN ST:WHAT DO I DO NOW? I GOT IT.

HE RIPS A PIECE OF HIS SHIRT.HE LOOKS IN MEERA BAG AND GETS LIPSTICK OUT.HE WRITES ON THE CLOTH.HE HIDES IT.

Maan:Excuse Me,I need to go to the toilet.

Meera:Come quick,it's the climax.

MAAN DROPS THE CLOTH ON GEETS LAP.GEET CONFUSED.SHE READS IT:MEET ME OUTSIDE.XX MAAN XX

GEET ST:HOW DO I DO THIS? GOT IT!!

Geet:Meera,pass me the juice.

MEERA PASSES IT,GEET SPILLS IT ON PURPOSE.

Geet:Ohhh!! Meera!! Now I'll miss the climax. I'll go clean myself.

Meera:Sorry,Geet!!

GEET LEAVES.

Geet:Phew!!! Wheres Maan?

MAAN COMES AND TAKES HER HAND.

Maan:Quick!!

Geet:But where are we going?

THEY BOTH RUN AWAY.

SCENE CHANGE.GEET AND MAAN WALKING IN A PARK.

Geet:I thought I'd die if I watched that film any longer.BTW,Ur plan was quite good!!

Maan:Like me,then?

GEET LAUGHS.THE WIND IS BLOWING.MAAN BRUSHES GEETS HAIR BACK AND KISSES HER HAND. MAAN SEES SOME ROSES IN A BASKET.HE GOES OVER TO THEM AND SMILES.GEET SITS DOWN ON THE BENCH.MAAN STARTS BREAKING OFF PETALS,GEET CONFUSED.HEY SHONA FROM TA RA RUM PUM STARTS PLAYING.MAAN STARTS SPREADING THE ROSE PETALS ON THE GRASS.

Geet:Whats Maan Doing?

MAAN IS FINISHED,HE MOVES AWAY AND IT SPELLS OUT'I LOVE YOU GEET'

GEET HAS TEARS IN HER EYES.SHE SEES MAAN HAND BLEEDING.SHE RUNS OVER TO HIM.

Geet:Maan!! Youre so stupid,look you hurt yourself!!!

SHE KISSES HIS HAND,HE IS STARING AT HER.THEY HUG AND GET CLOSE.THEY ARE ABOUT TO KISS BUT GEETS PHONE RINGS.

Maan:This phone had to ring now!!!

Geet:Annie? It must be quite late in India.Why is she ringing?

END

Please comment😊

Part 30
Edited by tere_liye_10 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear.....maaneet plan was awesome....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wat an idea!!!
loved it.............wonderful update!!!

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