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-Zahra15- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg...geet came to ny......bt happy that maan has come after her......i wanna no geets past which is troubling her...............continue soon
-Saruu- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

wow so many updates in 1 day i am loving it...............do u plan to update the next one too............

pl make them meet....................

It is nearly finished😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 15

G WALKING FROM 1 SIDE,M FROM ANOTHER.

G:Lets go into this shop.

M: No further down.Thats rubbish.

G: Thanks for dissing my choice.

M:Sorry! u know I love u really?

THEY LAUGH

SCENE CHANGE.M WALKING

M:G,where are u? Please let me find u.

HIS PHONE BLEEPS.HE READS THE TEXT AND IS LOOKING DOWN.G WALKS PAST HIM AT THAT MOMENT AND HE DOESN'T SEE HER.THE WIND STARTS BLOWING FAST.

G ST:WHY DID I FEEL AS IF M WAS HERE? NO,G,U'VE GONE MAD.WHY WOULD HE BE HERE? HE MUST BE IN INDIA IN COLLEGE.

M: G,are you coming?

G: Yes.

THEY GO INTO THE SHOP.

SCENE CHANGE.M WALKING OUTSIDE.HE PASSES THE SHOP G AND M ARE IN.

M:She would never go into a shop like this.Leave this one,I'll try the next one.

SCENE CHANGE.ITS 5 OCLOCK.G AND M IN A CAF.

G:That was so tiring.And I swear im never coming shopping with u again.U treat me like a doll.Try this,Try that.

M: But it was fun,Wasn't it?

G: Fun? Are u crazy?

M LOOKS HURT.

G:Im only joking.I had the best time ever.I actually enjoyed myself for once.

M ST:FINALLY I GOT A SMILE ON YOUR FACE,G.NOW I HAVE TO MAKE IT STAY THERE.

MAAN ENTERS THE CAF.

Maan ST:Urgghh!! That was a day wasted,not even 1 sign of her.And so much humiliation.I cant believe that assistant thought I was a paedophile when I was shouting her name in the changing rooms.Its good that I managed to make up a story about my missing cat,Geet and me coming to find her.Now I think I deserve a hot chocolate after that.

Maan: 1 hot chocolate please.

Assistant: Weve got a sale on.Coffee at half price.Would u like to try that?

Maan HAS A FLASHBACK OF HIS COFFEE DATE WITH G.

Maan:No thank you.Just Hot Chocolate.

HE TAKES IT AND LEAVES.HE SITS ON THE TABLE BEHIND G WITH HIS BACK TO HER.

G: Now im tired.Lets go home.

M: I want to know why came here first.Please,G. I want to help u.

G:M, I need time.The wounds still aren't healed and it will just hurt me.Especially here.

M: Ok,but you'll have to tell me.

G: I know.Can anyone argue with u?

M: Actually,youre getting pretty good at it.

THEY BOTH LAUGH AND GEET TURNS TO LEAVE,PAST MAANS TABLE.

M: No,Geet.Not that way.Its quicker this way.

G:Oh,Ok.

Maan ST: GEET?

HE TURNS ROUND AND SEES A GIRL WEARING A LIGHT PINK DRESS LEAVING.

MAAN ST:NO,THAT CANT BE HER.IT WAS JUST A COINCIDENCE.I BEST LEAVE.HOPEFULLY,TOMORROW WILL BE BETTER.

HE LEAVES.

SCENE CHANGE.AT GEETS HOUSE.IN THEIR BEDROOM.

G:I should ring annie.Afterall,A promise is a promise.But if I break down?No,G, u have to be strong.

SHE DIALS THE NUMBER.

END

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-Zahra15- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
damn.......they were so near to came face to face.........hope they meet soon......
MystiqueDew thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

dey didn't meet😭

hopefully in next part waiting for their meeting!!!!

wonderful update!!!!

ambbiha thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg both in the same place and not able to c each other
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovley update dera ur make to hard from them and us to so....................................................plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
MAKE THEM MEET CANT C THEM FAR AWAY PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
SWEET HEART
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh no me 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔
u didnt let them meet 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
well they were this close to each other....................well r u updating next can c u still online dear........
-Saruu- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

oh no me 😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔

u didnt let them meet 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
well they were this close to each other....................well r u updating next can c u still online dear........

I am writing the next part now😊
So myt be updated soon or maybe 2nite😛
Not sure😊
-Saruu- thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 16

GEET DIALS ANNIES NUMBER.

A: Hello.

G:H..Hi,Annie.Its me.

A: Geet!!OMG,Where are you? Why haven't u been in college? Speak!

G:How can i? Youre just blabbering away.

THEY LAUGH.

A:Sorry! But I was just so happy to hear your voice.Where are you?

G: Im in New York.But u cant tell anyone,Ok Annie? Not even M.Or I will get the first flight back to India and kill you,OK?

A:Ok,chill.I wont.No need to be so dramatic.But why are you there?

G: I just needed to get away for abit.

A:But why?

G:I cant tell you anything else.Anyway,I called because I needed to talk to you something.

A:What?

MEERA COMES AND IS STANDING OUTSIDE THE DOOR LISTENING.

G: Before I left,M asked for a favour.And I said I would.So now im fulfilling that promise I gave to him,OK?

A: A promise about me?

G: Yes

A:G,tell me.Im dying here.

GEET ST: I HAVE TO TELL HER.GO ON,GEET.BUT WHY IS THERE SUCH A BIG PAIN IN MY CHEST?

G:M wanted me to….

A: Yes?

G:Ask you if…

A:Go on!

G:You would like to go out with him!

G STARTS CRYING SILENTLY.

A: OMG!! Me? Im so happy today! But why didn't he ask me himself?

G:Huh? Oh,he sed he wasn't good at it.So… tell him yes,u know,give him a hint.

A: I would but hes not here.

G: What? Where is he then?

A: I don't know.since u went,I haven't seen him.That day he came and asked for u.I gave ur home number and since then hes disappeared.

G: Why did u do that,A?

A:Sorry.

G:Bye.

A:Listen-

G STARTS CRYING.

G: There,I did it.I fulfilled my promise and now it feels like im dying inside.How will I be able to bear seeing him with Annie when I get back? I Wont be able to,I know I wont.

SHE CRYS UNCONTROLLABLY,M WALKS IN.G SEES AND WIPES HER TEARS.M STOPS HER.

M: U don't have to hide nything from me anymore,G? I know the truth.I heard u on the phone.I didn't mean to but-

G STARTS CRYING AGAIN.

M:So youre in love with ur friend? And he asked u to pair him up with someone else?What a jerk!! And you fled from there? G, Theres no use running away from your problems.What happened to the G who could fight against the whole world and wasn't scared of anyone?

G:M,that G died 4 years ago when she left New york and went to India after being betrayed.

M: G,u cant live like this!! You have to learn to trust people again.Just because you were betrayed once doesn't mean youll be betrayed again.Not every guy is going to be like Dev!

G LOOKS AT M.

END

To find out about geets past,read the next update.

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