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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess_rashmi

hey Anu
awesome part.....👏👏
loved it so much
waiting AR meeting

continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -RabiaKSGKaJen-

Hey Anu..

Just Catched Up Wiv Dis FF..
And I Must Say Superb FF So Far..
Wohoo Armaan An FBI Agent.. <3
Awww I Love Mallik Familyy Such A Shweeet Familyy..
Great Character Sketch...
Loved Tha Pixx..
Gupta Familyy..
Love Dem Too..
Great Entry Of Riddhima's <3..
Hehe Riddhima Poured Water Ova Anjii😆
Cant Wait For Armaan Riddhima Meeting..
Pleasee Update Soon..

Once A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jeni'ian.. Always A KaJen'ian, KSG'ian & Jen'ian <3

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Posted: 14 years ago

still reserve.............

edit it na yaar...not fair..............

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Posted: 14 years ago

NOTE:

hi guys...

thnx alot for liking the part...

sorry for the delay.................

i was out of town for few days............

thnx all the readers...who pressed the LIKE button..

thnx alot guys.............

jaspreet12, rash.gupta, ARfanSanaa, gyanvi, sweety7395, shaaz_91, hotKaJen, ksg_farhan, gupta.aditi20, qt4ever, krazzy4armaan, niki.5, akshad, NANCYKASHYAP, sharonyaqoob, swarobi1, illa8, iceprincess101, -RabiaKSGKaJen-, disha4life, anamika2010, Pearl29, mansibharti, Amona, -Prithi-, Crazyy_Fan, prachi_mjht, dhruvikaluvsKSG, salinashah, ammy_ka_ashu, AMMY12, shilpI007, AR_LOVER, cutie_mahima, Iqbal Neha1, youth_showsfan, jiyaa, ishuKSGKAJEN, BhartiKhushi909,

loads of luv..

anu...........

Edited by anumeha_rajat - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi guys.....

sorry im late wid the update....but i was out of town for a trip n after coming back was not feeling well...so got late........sorry again....here goes the update...n hope it compensates for the delay.........

PART 3 B.......

RECAP: Mallik Family CS...gupta family's inttro.....n now ahead..........

Anjali was after Ridhimaa'.throwing all the things come in her hand towards her'all the cushions'pillows'.teddy bears everything''..


N Ridhimaa trying her best to duck them'they keep on running all around the room''..both panting'but still not stopping'


Anjali hold a cushion n was about to hit on Ridz face when she opened the door n flew away'both running downstairs'wid Anji still behind her to catch her'they run all around the house'in all the areas..study room'hall'kitchen'dining area''


All were laughing seeing the gals like this'they knew Ridhimaa must have done something'she is really sweet n bubbly'n not to forget'naughty''but sweet'caring'helpful''..they were running around Shanky'Padma n Nani..who were still laughing seeing the hungama in the house''..


They were running in the dining area'where nani n Shanky were sitting on the table..n Padma'setting the table'..when the gals run around them'Shanky hold Ridz n Padma holds Anjali'


Shanky: arey arey'bachoon'.bas'kya hua'subha subha world war 3 huh''..


Both the gals were breathing heavily..n trying to catch up their breath'''


Anjali : Dad dekho na'wat she did'. "she said wid a pout'."


All looked towards Anjali n seeing her'all wet'n completely messed up'her hairs'wet n messed'her face' showing anger'n she was also pouting'.


Shanky: Ridhimaa bache'y u did'kyun tang kar rahe ho usey''.. "he said controlling himself not to laugh"


Ridz: mein ne kuch nahin papa'mein kabhi kuch karti hoon bhala' "she said making a sweet cute face'wid a pout'."


Now the two gals pouting'looking..cute'n the other angry''.who can stop himself not to laugh'n all burst out laughing'seeing them like this''..Ridz who was standing wid a pout also joined her'making Anji more angry''..


Anji: aap sab mujh pe hass rahe ho'jao mein nahin baat karti aap se'.. "she said again showing her anger'"


Shanky controlled his laugh..along wid him others as well'n looking at Anji first n then towards Ridhimaa'


Shanky: princess chalo say sorry to her''n don't do this again ok'' "he said to Ridz like he is ordering her'but wid such a polite voice'also winking at her'that she can continue her act.."


Hearing this..Ridhimaa first pouted a bit'bt then looking at her dad'she knew he is just acting'so she tried to stifle her urge to laugh..n looked at Anjali'


Ridhimaa: im sorry di''..agey se aise nahin karoon gi'.SORRY'' "she said n hold her ears..making a cute'n who cannot melt at this site of hers''.so Anjali came near her'n gave her a bear hug'"


Anjali: its ok princess'."n she moved out of the hug'they looked at each other n laughed out loud'both were wet now''.since she took her in hug'Ridz clothes also got wet''.."


All were smiling seeing them smiling'hugging'.caring n loving each other'


Shanky: awww'.now I'm jealous very is my hug''' "he said wid a pout'n seeing him like this'gals smiled'move towards him'.bent down a lil'as he was sitting'gave him a hug'''.n both kissed his cheeks together'making him smile deeply'n others were looking at the site of the daughter ' father love'"


After that they both move to their room'n got ready for Sanjeevani'breakfast tym is a family tym wid all of them sitting together'pulling each other leg'teasing n loads of masti''n after that they left for Sanjeevani'


On the other hand..the two handsome dude where sleeping'they were really exhausted'but their beauty sleep got disturbed coz of the ringing of their cell fone'none of them want to get up n pick the fone'but it keeps on ringing'n Armaan got frustrated''..n picked it up''.


Armaan: hello''"he said in anger'frown..n sleepy voice'.but hearing the person on the other side'it soon changed from frown to a sweet'cute'n enchanting dimple smile'."


Armaan: mom'.kaise ho aap''..aap ko pata hai mein aap ko kitna miss kar raha hoon'


Kash: awww'mela bacha'im also missing u a lot babu'.so aap so rahe thae..sorry mein ne jagah diya'u must be tired na'after soo long journey'''


Armaan: arey nahin mom'its ok'ab uthne hi wale thae..aaj se kam start karna hai'n yes got really tired' "he said while trying to wake Atul also'"


Kash: hayee..mera bacha'zyada tu nahin thake na..tabiyet tu kharaab nahin hui na'u always get sick after long journey..plzz babu..ab ki baar tu mein bhi pass nahin'waise where is my champ..


Armaan: don't worry mom'I'll take care of my self..n champ..he is here'still sleeping..wait I'll wake him up'. "he tried again to wake Atul up..but he was not at all ready''not getting anything how to wake him up,'as usually its him to wake Armaan up..n now he is not getting up'.he said loudly in his ear''"CHAMP''"


Atul got up wid a jerk'completely shocked..as wat happened wid him'his heart beating wid so much speed like It will come out any minute..n he glared at Armaan''


Armaan: mom' "showing him a fone'.his anger gone at the back of his mind'"


Atul: hi mom'kaise ho aap'.


Kash: im fine bacha..aap kaise ho'u also must be tired'


Atul: haan mom'thora bohat'its ok..we r fine'n before u ask..let me tell u'hum ne sandwiches bana k khae'aur coffee li'then we slept for quite gud hours'n now we r fresh'.we'll eat something n then we'll go for our work' "he said sweetly n politely where as Armaan was having hard tym to control laughing'"


Kash: tu wapis aa Atul..fir mein tujhe batati hoon'badmash kahin ka..abhi mein ne kuch pucha nahin n u started'''


Atul: arey mom..kyun naraz ho rahe ho..waise dad kahan hai'. "Asked Atul'as he didn't talk wid him yet'"


Kash: arey bacha..woh office gaye hain'koi case pe kaam kar rahe hain..when he'll come I'll tell him to call u guys..ok bacha'chalo now get up n get ready'.luv u my babies'"


Atul n Armaan: luv u too mom'takes care'' "n after bidding bye'they moved towards the restroom'took shower'grabbed some food'n then start getting ready to do their task"


***


Ridhimaa n Anjali reached Sanjeevani sharp at 9''all their co interns standing at the nurse station'n to their luck'Hitler was not there yet'n seeing this both rushed''.


Anjali n Ridz: hi guys' "said both panting'"


V: hi'guys'.tum log aj bal bal bach gaye..abhi hitler ati hi hogi'. "said a boy'having amazing grey eyes'normal height'amazing body'n sweet n friendly.."


Ridz: arey Rahul'.rehne de na'hitler nahin ayi na abhi'so bach gaye'.


Anjali: haan Rahul'aj tub ach gaye'
Rahul: arey lekin'


V: abbey oye Kankhajure'chup reh'tut u na hi bol tu changa ho ga'.kawa [crow] na hoye tu'har waqt kahen kahen karta rehta hai'. "said a gal'curly brown hairs'.amazing eyes'sweet smile'n gorgeous'."


V: Dr. Muskaan'mind ur language' "hearing the voice'Muskaan bit her tongue n others straighten themselves'"


Turning around she saw hitler in front of her'looking wid daggers in her eyes'.n she gulped hard seeing this''


Muski: sorry Dr.Kirti'agey se aisa nahin hoga'.


Kirti: it's better not' "she said wid anger'Dr. Kirti'senior doctor in Sanjeevani'very strict'interns call her "Hitler n Gabbar"'. She is always on their head'want them to do everything properly'n learn a lot..she is strict but gud from heart'helps her interns a lot'n guide them'"


Kirti: waise mujhe aap ko batana tha k kal se humein 2 naye interns join kar rahe hain..so plzz be nice to them'n help them''''


She gave them their duties n all moved for their respective work'on the other side'Armaan n Atul dressed by putting fake mustaches n beard n wearing different style of clothes n entered Sanjeevani''.


They checked out every possible part of Sanjeevani'.n spied on Dr.Shubhankar'Dr. Kirti'n many other senior doctors..to see if they can get any clue about the culprit'n after looking around the whole hospital'they moved to check on the interns' Armaan collided wid Rahul'who said in anger'


Rahul: dekh ke nahin chal sakte kya'


Armaan: sorry'woh mein kahin aur dekh raha tha'


Rahul: huh'sorry..pata nai kahan kahan se ajate hia log'. "Armaan was about to answer when Atul stopped him'"


Then they met Muskaan'.asking her random questions like..


Armaan: hello Dr ji..kaise hain aap'


Muski: mein tu teekh hoon aap kaun hain'


Atul: oy ji..hum yahan aapne ek rishtedar se milne aye thae'aap ko dekha tu milne agaye'


Muski: oye changaa ji..waise ek gal [baat] kahon'aap ki ankhein barhi hi wadiya hai ji''. "she said to Armaan'"


Armaan: thnx'''."n that was it'she was after him'wanna look in his eyes all day'n poor Armaan n Atul running away from her'.but still they didn't met 2 most important ppl'for whom they have come'Ridhimaa n Anjali''.they looked around bt couldn't find them'as both the gals were busy in the operation theatre'helping Dr.Shashank n Dr.Harikant respectively'.


It was evening tym n all were moving towards their houses'..everyone's duty is over'but still both the boys cant hold of the gals they have to protect'they were coming out of Sanjeevani'when they saw a car stopped in front of two gals'whom they cant see who they were'n some ppl wearing mask came out n tried pulling the gals in the car'the gals protesting n trying to free themselves..but they r forcing them to sit..


Seeing this both Armaan n Atul blood boiled'n they run towards them..as the FBI agent got woke up in them'n before they can push the gals inside'Armaan n Atul took hold of them'n beat them up''they fight a lot'n beat the mask men badly''..n they run away from their..


Armaan: ma'am aapko kahin lagi tu nahin'aap teekh hain'. "he said..while setting his clothes n didn't looked up..same goes wid Atul.."


Atul: ma'am are u alrite'.


Armaan looked up'n lost himself in the deep almond shaped green eyes''they were soo attractive..n sooo innocent n full of fear now'.they both got an eye look'.looking at each other'she also feeling soo amazing n different looking in his grey ' blue eyes'.drowning in each others smell'''..


Atul looked up'n was shocked seeing the beauty in front of him''she is sooo cute'soo amazing'.seems like fulfilling Atul's dream gal''..n the gal also looked at him'.n passed him a smile'


Anjali: thnx a lot for ur help'Ridz chalein''.


Hearing Anjali's voice'AR broke the eye lock,'n looked away awkwardely'.


Ridz: thnx''."n then both of them moved from their'.both Armaan n Ridz'in their rooms'thinking about each other'the eye lock they shared'both feeling different'n special'but brushed it off n went to sleep'." *guys Armaan n Atul were in some other attire'n not original ok'*


On the side..sleep was miles away from Atul's eyes'as whenever he close his eyes'the same gal appear in front of him'making him completely crazy'.n finally putting all the thoughts aside'he slept''.


All thinking about the other person''n dreaming for a beautiful sweet n sound sleep'''..

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loads of luv..

anu........

Edited by anumeha_rajat - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey amazing part ANu.........love muski lol😆😆......Wow love the first meeting yaar.totaly filmy type but still awsome and new.

Do update fast
love u
salina
Edited by salinashah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey yar i luvec it.....
n plss add me to uur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey i got the pm bt i commented first....
bt i luv ur ff...
will be waiting for ur next update
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow that was sooo amazing! lovedd it!

cont super super soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb part.
Amazing and excellent meet of ar and aa.
Totaly awsm part.
Waiting 4 nxt one.
Plz update soon with more ar meet and romance.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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