SandStorm(FF) -(updated Chapter 19)

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 14 years ago

#551

super duper hit beautiful ending pls come up with another lovely FF thanks pm

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: sharmake11
super duper hit beautiful ending pls come up with another lovely FF thanks pm

Thanks for loving it. Surely will come up with a new one soon.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#553

Originally posted by: siroilily
awesome .......blissfull ........lovely👏
im gonna miss ur update so much😭 😭😭

thank u so much for ''SandStorm''

all ur updates were rocking ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Thanks.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: nihatri
hai rabba wat a part😍😍😍

Thanks.👏👏

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: pickachu
Amazing!!!!
I'm going to miss this ff.

Can u please start a new ff?

Thanxx for the pm.

Fatima

Many of you have requested this...and I am also excited with it.. I will surely come up with a new one... some plots are already cooking in my head...will finalize one soon and put it.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: chubzy
I jst lovd maan's confession his fears led hm marry her forcefuly in disguise of claimin hs child when d reason was other way round. Plz give an epilogue if u cn.

Many requests have come for epilogue...I have never written one.. I will check some ....and then surely will put one if I find it relevant.

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#557

amazing conclusion.........................finally maan has said it......................loved their confession...........

congrats on successful completion of this ff................if u start a new ff on maaneet pl do pm me

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: jazzerette
Whoa!! That was an awesome conclusion...and very passionate towards the end too......that "ek baar aur" cracked me up!!😆 Totally hot!! And ofcourse it was preceded by an equally sweet confession by both. Will you do an epilogue? Start another FF soon...👍🏼

Jazz...

I was missing your comments....

Yes, their milan has to be part.. as its after their confession...and it makes huge difference in love making if you know your partner loves you......and then they were in stress for so long...so that has to come out....

I normally have subdued love making scenes .. this time I let myself go.....

Epligue- I don't know how to write.. u know this is my first long story.. surely will put one as many requests have come.

New FF - very much.. I am excited by all of your support.

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

@goldenball

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Posted: 14 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: gawdygory

OMG !!! 😳

CONCLUDING PART WAS SOOOOOOOO ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

I guess another Khurana Jr. in the making !!! 😆

ANYWAYS ON A SERIOUS NOTE ABSOLUTELY BRILLIANT 👏 👏 THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST FF I've READ SO FAR ,

NICE CONCEPT, VERY GOOD FLOW OF STORY, PRECISE PLOT , LOVELY PORTRAYAL OF THE LOVE & PASSION BETWEEN MAAN & GEET & LASTLY YOU HAVE VERY WELL MAINTAINED THE ELEMENT OF CURIOSITY FROM THE BEGINNING TILL THE END 👍🏼 ⭐️ 👍🏼

Hoping to read a new one soon ..... 😉 LOVE U DEAR 🤗

Yes... i had to give all of you something to remeber before ending...

Plot excited me a lot when I had thought about it... I had a rough sketch with me when i started writting......but I didnot knew it will come out well...

.. thanks a lot for so much encouragement.

Edited by goldenball - 14 years ago

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 14 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: goldenball

Jazz...

I was missing your comments....

Yes, their milan has to be part.. as its after their confession...and it makes huge difference in love making if you know your partner loves you......and then they were in stress for so long...so that has to come out....

I normally have subdued love making scenes .. this time I let myself go.....we are not complaining...glad u let go...it was apt for the situation...you had perfect grip on the scene...after such a stressful scene...it was a logically passionate scene...that is why love your writing so much...you always write logically n sensibly imbibing all the romance, drama, emotions....without making it over the top.

Epligue- I don't know how to write.. u know this is my first long story.. surely will put one as many requests have come.

New FF - very much.. I am excited by all of your support. Waiting eagerly...