MG-FF:Out Of Darkness-2 *Thread - 2* - Page 17

Originally posted by: ninand

again loved the glimpse into the intricacy of each character and their individual perspectives which direct their actions...

That Naintara is forever mindful of what each relationship needs to be nurtured , specific to the people involved in it, and that shes clear and observant to a fault... I am liking this intriguing character better and better...

up until now hers has come strongly to the fore, the one I would look to hold the story together and take it forward... and surprisingly this new take just adds to the dramatic element of the story and strangely enforces the 'Maan-Geet' ness of it... they still remain the center of it thru it all...

looking forward to the next update eagerly..

Originally posted by: preethia

gr8 part..................but i think kirty is making a mistake she needs professional help asa doc she shud b knowing this hen how can she decide to let nt handle the situation....................

moreover as a husband maan has the right to know abt her so atleast kirty shud confide in im all her details and help him to make geet normal and increase her confidence and trust in him...............pl cont soon

Originally posted by: ManEetkiDeewaNi

That was amazing...i loved it...you are an amazing writer

i understand the whole Geet past part but now i want to know what is causing this behavior in Geet...

and who actually knows about the abuse that geet had to endure???

i loved it....and when they talk about Maan possessiveness i can kind of already see it in Maan...but i can also see the love growing in him to so that is a good sign....

Geet is so frail...i hope nothing else happens to her.....

i love your story...can you please add me to your PM list if you have one 😃

Originally posted by: sindu555

awesome update ...

Maan was adorable ..

but the part i loved the most was the conversation of Naintara and Kirty regarding Maan .. they way Naintara wants her brother to love and care for his wife , be possessive about her with out harming her individuality was awesome ... i never thought i wud ever love Naintara ... but now I do (all thanks to your characterization of Naintara)... she's awesome ... balancing everything and everyone in the family .. despite going through the trauma of loosing her only child ... and the way she takes care of Geet like her Pari is amazing...

btw when are you planning to reveal the mystery of Kirty's and Geet's relation....

thanks a ton for the lovely update hun!

continue super soon 😊 ..... greedy me 😈

TC & God Bless

love

Sana

Originally posted by: 9staroneserials

Wow.....wat an update....................I hav no words....but only this........................I wish i had it in me to make u world famous writer by my comments😆.............yaar.....ur writing is just simply awesum........Ur writing reflects ur clear thoughts.......and with dat ur personality too, dear..............plz continue soon..................i lovd every part of ur update...............& i am madly waiting for d next part.............Hey, by d ways....do u hav a specific time or schedule for ur updates.....i mean some writers hav a specific time of gap within their updates.....Do u even follow such a rule or wat????? well, if u follow den, plz tell me u update ur part after how many days of d previous part????? I hope u update d next part faster dan d last time plz....................i am so excited abt ur next update.....................

Originally posted by: egrat94

out of darkness seems to be a very serious story. The issue of child abuse should be taken very seriously. But abusers dont realise what they doing to the child psychologically. Never thought anyone writting a story of geet in those terms. Good storyline.will be glad if u can include in in ur pm list.

Will wait 4 d next part.............

Originally posted by: sweet_chilly

great part....

like u sed u got inspired by the book perfect victim..i googled it and was shocked that how someone can be so cruel..and it's a true story...my heart goes for the gal..but atleast she did found her mate and is happy now....😳