MG-FF:Out Of Darkness-2 *Thread - 2* - Page 18

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hey Angel! For me, this was the best update you've done so far. Very cleverly you cleared about Maan's behavior ideology from Naintara-Kirty's conversation and we know there's someone else involved from Kirty's mind dialogues. I really really like how Naintara will act as a buffer between these two and will be the first to understand and settle Geet. She's kind, mature, and knows exactly what it takes to nurture a relationship to become true and strong. I'm not sure about Maan anymore because now it seems like he's going to be too flabbergasted about her behavior and past and won't understand her as readily (atleast initially he wont)

Cant wait to read more :-)

part 17 was an important part because one got a deeper look into Maan's character.... As for Naintara.... well, many of you might not like it but she is actually the main character in this story and you are right she is the buffer between Maaneet.....

PS: You are right in analysis of Maan.... 😉

Originally posted by: chubzy

Very nice n intriguin update! Plz let us knw d secret which kirti knws. The way maan has high expectations 4m hs wife m afraid he may become eithr too possesive n take hr fear as her submission or he may become frustatd n impatient if he cnt get hs desird responce 4m hr. I hope maan to hv patience n tat he shld treat geet as a human n not a nonlivin accordin to NT

Maan will struggle but Naintara is there to nudge him in the right direction when the time comes... 😆

Originally posted by: smj1977

so much she has gone through

😭

hey

will you cure her?

will you make Maan's love heal the injuries inflicted on her?

you have told that she is intelligent

good with languages

even home remedies

hard working

good at accounts

and many more ....

will she be ever able to overcome the wrath she had gone through?

Yes, Geet will be "cured" but it will be a long process and it will be presented from a psychological perspective.... meaning lots of therapy sessions and theories will be discussed in the parts....
The love and care from her new family will help her heal from her past abusive life....

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

ok so u took the trouble to shed some light on maans character...

over possessive over protective...not love but possesion??

Nt is grt .....ek taraf geet ki bhalai...ek taraf use kosna..

poor geet,,,,

plz jaldi update karna is baar....😳

Kosna? NT ne Geet ko kab kosa? 😆 NT is darling in this ff..... 😉

Originally posted by: creddy

Wonderful part....love how Naintara is observing maan and trying to bring down his ego.....can't wait to see maan's reaction when he gets to about Geet's past...and how he is going to help her...and who are those people that are looking for geet through kirty.....hope they are +ve and not like geet's father and brothers

The ones who are looking for Geet are positive characters.....

Originally posted by: punjabi.princes

awesome FF

con't sooon

add me to pm list plz

Added to PM list. 😛

Originally posted by: serenelove

Hey Angel,

I came across ur FF & it left me speechless.

Gosh, your stamina must be quite strong to write such story with giving the elaborative view of every character and synchronizing them.

Geet has endured so much & she is still trying to cop with all of this.

Please add me to your PM list.

Added to the PM list. 😛

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Update was sweet

Sumwhr NT's thnking is ryt

Maan is over possessssssssssive abt her

Kirty shuld tell them truth they will help her warna they wont

Bechari Geet

Loved Maan's care n concern

I am afraid Kirty is going to do things her own way.... meaning she won't be telling anything about Geet's abusive life to Naintara or Maan...

Originally posted by: sukanyaangel

wow u r such an amazing writer!!!! Just read d whole ff in one go & d only word dat escaped my mouth was WOW!!! Plz add me to ur pm list....plzzzzzzzzz......n do continue soon..... 👍🏼

Added to the PM list. 😛

dat was gr8..........any recent update????