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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu5

written superbly i felt as though i was going through the pain poor geet vn will she come out that darkness in true sense plz bring her out fast



It's a long journey... there are too many demons from her past that she needs to overcome before she can truly come out of darkness....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: 9staroneserials

Plz update ur next part soon..................I just cant wait..................OMG Geet's past is so painful and cruel......................God help her............I want Maan 2 kill Geet's bros and father .....of course wen he knows about it........😡........i felt like crying wen i read her moments with her mother.................and her feelings wen brij hit her.....I want 2 read d next part as early asi can PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ......................update fast..........U r a fabulous writer..........I nearly felt myself in place of Geet.........OMG....ur FF has made me so impatient .....i am surprisd at myself for my eagerness😆.....I do not become impatient often...................Plz update fast...........................



lolz.... I am glad you feel so connected with Geet's character and are eager to read the next part....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

omg..poor Geet.. pls let her treatment start soon and she can forget these ...



Geet will recover from the abuse she endured in her past but she will never forget it...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

thanx for the update


it was well written...
as for the comments....mmmm i hope that it only gets better for geet now. process will be slow but it shud be towards her betterment.
she has met with such horrible experiences that her innocence deserves happiness. i hope she learns to c the reality infront of her ,not the reality of the past that she endured alone.



It will take time... but she will make a steadily climb the steps towards her happiness....
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Posted: 14 years ago
congrats for opening new thread
loved this story
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Geet has been through so much in her life at a very tender age.

The flashback scene just shocked me.
No one can truly understand what Geet has been through.
Those three horrible days have had such a great impact on her psyche.
How can her father and her brothers be so cruel to her? But sad to admit, there are still such people existing in this world. Disgusting!!!

Maan and his family are a ray of hope in Geet's life.
Its been two days since Geet got married and she's loved by one and all. They are too understanding. They aren't typical in-laws about whom everyday newspapers carries a story about torturing their daugher-in-laws, murdering them, pestering them for male-child, asking for dowry.
Very few people actually get a chance to get their life back after such painful pasts. And I am glad that hopefully Geet will be fine with Maan and his family's love, care and support.



Yes, there are people out there who find pleasure in inflicting such torture on others.... but then there are also few people out there that are like NT and her family who through their understanding, caring and loving nature give a new life to the victims like Geet....


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night

Freaking hell!!! That was just so agonizing and distressing.....I was disturbed just by reading it.....poor girl.....this incident has left some permanent psychological scars, I guess....now even if she recovers from her past, I don't think she will ever be able to forget this.....man....feel so bad for her. Thank God, Mannee was there.....he tended to her.....but was too late.....I really hate her other brothers and her dad! Can't wait to know the reaction of the Khuranas especially Maan upon hearing what she went through. You are an amazing writer! Everything is portrayed so nicely.....do continue soon



Maan and his family won't know anything for a long while....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sakadafi

What a horrible ordeal for the 8 year old....if an adult was stuck in such a situation for a few hours or a day that'd be a bad enough ordeal to torment them and here an 8 year old and that too for days.....I feel so bad for the poor girl...

Out of darkness....this chapter really gave a completely new meaning to your FF title......
Really wonder what happened to Geet when she saw Kirty....this character is getting more and more intriguing and mysterious.....what is the story behind her?????



I have written an outtake... which will give a little insight to Kirty's character and unfold a few mysteries...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Asha2010

How do you write such a painful update and then you stopped at some middle point, leaving stranded audience, please don't do this to us, I want some relief in her life, please do something, can't see her in more pain, it is too much to handle for me.


Sejal



the part was getting too long hence decided to split it in two parts....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

hi angel.....

finally aapke darshan dene ke liye shukriya!! u lazybum!!!😡
next time at least drop in a hi to say u alive!! samjhi?"??😡
coming to the update====
my skin is still crawling yaar!!! its just to horrible to contemplate!!
but geet is trusting maan or just grasping at nearby object!!!???????
whats the dr.kirty mystery???
"mannee" n "maan" are similar sounding......is that why maan didnt notice???? but he must kno his wifes brothers name na???
nt is confused between pari n geet...i hope geet finds her new "ma" in nt.....!!!



Hey! I am allowed to be lazy sometimes.... it doesn't matter that I am lazy all the time.... lolz... but will remember to send in a hey to you.....

Geet is only grasping to someone who was near her... she would have held on to Naintara if she had been the one holding Geet....

No, Maan doesn't really know much about Geet's family.... and plus only Geet calls her brother Mannee.... and Mannee wasn't present at Geet's wedding so Maan doesn't know about him, he believes Geet has two brothers Brij and Gurvinder......

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