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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Kasurbest

Hey dear thank you soo much for the PM...
and so happy to seee one more story by you...
eagerly waiting for the next ud now...
ud soon :-*

No problem and Thank you dear. I guess for this oneyou're going to have to deal with irregular upds. 😛😆 I promise..I wont make you wait too long.

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

hey please add me to ur pm list


sounds interesting!

please lots pf AR scenes!

Will add you to the PM list dear. and Thank you. I'll try to put in equal number of AK and AR scenes.😳

Originally posted by: malluangel

heyo! loving it already!
lmao angad is def a pillar compared to poor kripa 😆 poor little thing haha
cant wait to read more! def pm me dude!
-Aish

Thanks!! And yes...Angad is definitely a pillar..hehe.

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

thank you for that lovely gift :)

Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi

Happy Valentines day Love!!!! Tongue
such a great valentines gift sweety!!! Embarrassed Embarrassed Embarrassed
i was hoping you'd write more just before i went to school
nd after i come back, u have posted the part!!!! ⭐️ ⭐️

as for the ff, the first part was amazing.
very nice intro of angad and kripa.
loved it. 😊
so kripa is gujrati girl in this one! quite unique i must say😉 😃
😃angad seems very excited.
for the last scene, i m sure he bumps into kripa! Embarrassed Embarrassed
let's c how they start off their journey...
so, this ff is based on AK AR. cool. no other coups. might be gud. lets c 😊

do add me to your pm list.
and thnx for the first pm
love you tons katie ❤️
take care.
all the very best for this new ff dear
👍🏼

I'm glad you liked my idea of a V-Day gift😉 I thought we shopuld give Kripa Sharma a break and bring in Kripa Patel..lol So Far, I dont plan on adding any other main couples...revolving a story around to MAIN couples is trciky enough...i dont know if i want another leading couple...i might add in small supporting couples here and there.😊 You're already on the PM list hun.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

hiiiiiiiiii

lovely part
happy valentines day
n thx for yhis gift n pm
plzzadd me to pm list
thx
dhruvika

Hey! Thanks! I'll add you to the PM list. :)

Originally posted by: nidha1983

cool add me in ur list

Will do. Thanks for reading.
Thanks. Glad you liked it. :)

Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

Hey! 😃

So first of all, thanks for the PM,
And second of all, i'm loving the concept of this FF.

Kripa sounds like a really cute person. Seriously. I've always loved the bubbly her... if you know what i mean. 🤔
Anyhow, Angad..is well...hot. 🤣

And Dilip's character is funny but also interesting. Always irritated and snapped at people? ..Wow.
And no romance between the two Khanna's huh? Pretty sad if you ask me.

But i liked Kripa's mom. So emotional..*shakes head*

Umm, yeah so add me to your PM list..err i'll send you a friend request...but aren't you in my buddies list? Or not... i dunno.
Oh and i am waiting for that update of your other ff...umm...Beete Lamhe? Yeah that's the one. Update that..=)

-Jot.

PS. Canadian huh? I approve cause i'm Canadian too. 😆

Hey..thanks! I totally know what you mean...I like the bubbly kripa too.😉 Angad is always hot..hehe. Dilip's character will actually play slgihtly important role......later in the story. Kripa's mom is very senti..tears drop out of her eyes at anything happy..lol. Surprisingly, you werent on my buddy list..but now you are. so you're already on the PM list. :) Beete Lamhe is actually done. Beete lamhe and Koi aap sa are completed. Hershi and I are still working on Bepanah.
P.s: haha....makes two of us. I'm canadian too. You from Toronto?

Originally posted by: vidu87

HEY AWESUM START

THNX 4 D PM
BUT MA NAME IS NT IN D LIST
PLZ ADD ME 2 D PM LIST

Thanks! I'll add you to the PM list hun.😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanks for pm

great to see u back with another ff
superb start

Thanks! A lot of my readers wanted me to start something again..lol...but I bet they didnt know it would be so soon.😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33

heyya

verry nice part

plss do update at bepanha also

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
looks good
add me to the pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start add me to ur pm list :)
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#36

Originally posted by: arshbest

heyya

verry nice part

plss do update at bepanha also

thx for the pm

continuee soon

sakshi

Thanks! We're trying to get the next part of bepanah done. hope to have that completed for you soon.

Originally posted by: 26javey26

looks good
add me to the pm list

Thanks hun. will add you to the PM list.

Originally posted by: Cutiepie_KSG

awesome start add me to ur pm list :)

Thanks! i'll add you to the pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
Hey guys. Thanks a lot for your amazing comments and all the encouragement. I've written the second chapter already and I'll post it in a few hours. I just have some house chores and other things to take care of and then I'll come and post the part and send out the PMs.
Love you all,
Katie
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
itss soo good im lovin it already lol
plzz continue soon nd add me to ur pm list =]
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: *princess*15

itss soo good im lovin it already lol

plzz continue soon nd add me to ur pm list =]

Thanks!! glad you like it. You're on the PM list😊.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Previous Part: Page 1

Part 2: Buds of Friendship

He looked down to see a beautiful pair of hazel eyes with a hint of green. Fear and confusion was clearly visible in them. He couldn't help but smile at the innocence spread across her face. She finally looked at his face and instantly got lost in the chocolate brown depth of his eyes. The moment their eyes met, the time stopped. To them, everything around them was moving in slow motion until'

"Can you love-birds go and romance somewhere else? I have a flight to catch."

Both parted in an instance and made for the old grumpy man.

Kripa looked at Angad sheepishly. "I'm so sorry...I was actually looking back to see if my mother was still crying...I am so sorry."

"No no...Don't be. It's my fault...I was lost in my own world...I'm sorry."

Both picked up their bags and approached the security check. Angad made a sweeping gesture towards the door with his hand. "After you."

Kripa smiled. "Oh. I will take forever. I have a lot of stuff to put in the bin. Go ahead..."

"Ladies first"

"Oh come on...go...you'll miss your flight otherwise." Kripa insisted.

"I don't think I will."

While the two were busy deciding who will go first, a woman walked in between them and stood for her checking. Angad and Kripa laughed and Kripa at last gave in and went before him.

After the security check, both apologized once again and parted with a handshake.

-

"Proceed this way sir, seat number A106." The pretty airhostess guided Angad.

Angad thanked her and proceeded through the business class, browsing for his seat. He found his seat and groaned internally seeing a lady seated in the window seat beside his. She was so busy looking outside; she didn't hear him sit down in his seat. He noticed she had her seatbelt fastened already. He smirked and shook his head. He decided to go to the washroom before the flight took off.

Angad came back and sat down to notice the girl still lost outside. He put on his seatbelt and rested his arms on the hand rest. A few seconds later, he felt another hand cover his. Surprised, he looked at the fair, tiny, and soft hand covering his big one and then he looked at the girl to whom the hand belonged.

He smiled wide seeing the same pretty girl he had bumped into earlier. She had her eyes closed tightly. As the plane moved faster on the runway, the harder her hand gripped his. He slowly turned his hand taking her palm in his and entwined their fingers together.

Feeling the tingle down her spine, Kripa opened her eyes and looked at their hands. She pulled her hand back, gave him a quick glance as she blurted a "sorry" and turned back to the window. When her brain processed the image of the person she'd just seen, she turned around in a whiff.

"Hi!" Angad beamed a smile.

"Hey you!" Kripa smiled back.

"Hey me!"

"No...I mean...what are you doing here?"

"Lets see...playing soccer!"

"Ha-ha. That was so funny that I forgot to laugh." Kripa rolled her eyes.

"Please stay seated and keep your seatbelts fastened. The flight is about to take off."

Kripa stiffened and closed her eyes. "Oh God! I'm gonna die, I'm gonna die, I'm gonna Die!"

Angad was amused. "Scared of flying?"

"No...I...I just hate the moment the plane breaks contact with the runway!"

"Hmm...By the way. I'm Angad. Angad Khanna."

Kripa looked at him and smiled. "I'm Kripa. Kripa Patel."

"So where are you going?"

"I believe this flight goes to Amsterdam Mr.Khanna."

Angad raised his eyebrows. "Please...Call me Angad. And I know this flight goes to Amsterdam...I meant your final destination."

Kripa nodded once. "India. Delhi! How about you?"

"India. Mumbai. Do you live in Toronto?"

"No...I don't but I do."

Angad was puzzled. "What?"

Kripa couldn't help but giggle at his expression. "I study in Toronto...I am originally from Hamilton."

"Oh" Angad said Fascinated, "I study in Toronto and live in Toronto as well......you have a boyfriend?"

Kripa hated it when strangers asked her that question. She wasn't ashamed of admitting the fact that she didn't have a love life history but when she didn't know someone and they asked her about her love life; it annoyed her...big time. She frowned at him. "Aren't you getting a bit too personal?"

Angad moved closer to her, bringing his face closer to hers and Kripa compensated by moving back. "You know what?" Angad said suppressing a smile, "we've taken off!"

Kripa gasped, turned around, and looked outside to see tiny houses and buildings out of the window. They were pretty high up from the ground. She smiled and turned around to look at him. He simply smiled and winked at her.

Kripa was sort of embarrassed. "Thanks...and...Sorry."

Angad shrugged. "It's okay...now we're together for six hours...might as well become friends."

"Friends?" Kripa raised an eyebrow.

"Okay fine...how about flight buddies?"

Kripa contemplated for a second and then shrugged. What the hell. Why not? "Okay."

"Great...how about I start...you know who I am...I study at the University of Toronto...St.George Campus...in management. My family consists of my parents, a cousin sister, and exactly three best friends..." He looked at her gesturing her to give her introduction. He couldn't quite figure out why she smiled the way she did but he didn't interrupt her.

"Alright...um...I study in the University of Toronto, St.George campus in the Radiation Therapy program...I have no siblings and I have exactly three best friends...I enjoy dancing and I play the guitar."

"You're at the St.George Campus? How come I've never seen you??" Angad asked.

Kripa: we must have passed each other at some point.

Angad shook his head. "No...I think not. I'm sure we haven't. If we had, I would have remembered such a beautiful young lady."

Kripa: Thanks for the compliment...

Angad shrugged. "I wasn't too subtle with that, was I?"

Kripa giggled. "No...Anything but subtle."

Just then, the air hostess interrupted. "Would you like a drink Ma'm? Sir?"

Kripa nodded. "Coke please...two ice cubes."

Angad: make that two.

The air hostess served them and walked off. Angad looked at her and smiled making her raise her eyebrows.

Kripa: what?

Angad shook his head as he chuckled. "No...Nothing...it's just...you're so particular about the number of ice cubes in your coke."

Kripa shrugged and joined him in his laughter. "Always have been. And you know'Aw Crap!"

Angad looked at her amusedly as she shuffled around trying to find something. She finally pulled out a cell phone from under her and looked at the screen. A few seconds later she groaned, put her cell in her bag, and put the bag away.

Angad: Parents?

Kripa nodded. "Mom actually. She's wondering if I'm alright...as if I'm some kid. I must have missed the text earlier because I was rushing to check in. My dumb phone continues vibrating until I check my missed messages and calls.

Angad: Time to get a new phone and...All mothers are like that...that's why I turned off my phone the minute I got through the security check. Fathers don't really worry so much.

"Are you kidding me?" Kripa widened her eyes. "My father's probably worrying sick over me! If it weren't for his business conferences, he would never let me travel alone."

Angad nodded understanding and started at the ice cubes in his glass. "My father's always busy with business too."

The edge of disappointment in his voice instantly told her that the topic was sensitive for him. She obviously didn't probe further. After all, they only knew each other, for a few minutes. She was quiet startled with what he said next.

"He's always irritated with my mom...he stays long hours at the office to avoid her." He took a gulp of his coke as if saying that one sentence had parched his throat.

He looked at her, her eyes wide, jaw dropped, expression terrified. It made him chuckle. "Why are you looking at me like that?"

Kripa: you've known me for what? Ten minutes? 20 minutes? And you're telling me about your family conflicts without hesitation?

Angad: well, I find it easier to talk to complete strangers. I mean...so what if you know my secrets? Chances are very likely that you don't know the same people I do....I don't have to be worried that you'll tell my secrets to anyone....even if you do...doesn't make much difference...when am I ever going to see you?

"Mr.Khanna...do you always talk so much?" Kripa rolled her eyes.

"Please, call me Angad." He said, not bothering to answer her question.

"Okay An-gad!" she said his name in two distinct syllables. "Do you always tell every stranger you meet everything about your life?"

"Hmm...Not really. Only when I get the vibe."

"The vibe?" one of her perfect eyebrows shot up. "What vibe?"

Angad sighed before replying. "You might think I'm creepy but when I meet someone, I get these vibes...they're basically the green light for me indicating that I can trust them...call it a sixth sense if you wish but the people who give me these vibes usually meet me again...most of the people who gave me these vibes, in the past, are now my friends."

Kripa rolled her eyes at him thinking this must be a new way to pick up girls these days. "And I, out of all the people on this plane am giving you those vibes?" She took a long sip of her coke.

Angad eyebrows rose up in amusement. "Yes...in fact...stronger than I've ever felt them."

Kripa smiled and shook her head. "Mr.Khanna...how many girls have you tried this on?"

Angad raised one eyebrow again and cocked his head to the side, looking at her. "You don't believe me." It was more of a statement rather than a question but Kripa shook her head anyways.

"Even if I do believe you...what are the chances that we'll ever meet after this?" She looked at him as if she'd won an argument.

"Actually, chances are pretty high...especially considering that we're both at the same campus." He shrugged.

She laughed and his breath caught for a moment. The sound was wind chimes and silver bells. "Well Mr.Khanna...Being on the same campus has not helped for two years."

Angad looked at her for a long minute as if trying to figure something out. When he continued staring, Kripa raised her eyebrows questioningly.

"The vibe tells me we'll meet again..." He said coolly.

Kripa shifted in her seat uncomfortably under his stare, making him chuckle. He decided to lighten the mood and rewind the conversation.

"So you didn't tell me what your boyfriend's name is."

"I don't have one." Kripa smiled.

"Beautiful, Smart, friendly, and Single....Rare combination." He smirked.

"You've already concluded I'm smart and Friendly?"

"Vibes, remember?"

"Oh yes...of course...the mysterious vibes." Kripa rolled her eyes.

Kripa became comfortable with talking to him after a few minutes. Both chatted away as if they were childhood friends. They told each other their most embarrassing moments, which was tripping and falling on the subway for Kripa and getting his shorts pulled down during a soccer game for Angad, their likes and dislikes, their favourite movies, music, colors, cars, sports. They realized they had a lot in common. They didn't even realize that six hours of flight had passed and they were about to land.

After they stepped onto the airport at Amsterdam, they had to part ways. They simply shook hands and parted with a "Nice meeting you."

Next Part: Page 10
Hey guys! That is part 2! A big thank you to everyone who 'liked', commented, PMed me for the first part. Its been a gret encouragement. I hope you'll all continue to like the story as it progresses. Feel free to criticize/suggest/comment. Thanks guys. Love you all!
p.s: Remember..all you have to do to be on the PM list is add me to your buddy list.
Love,
Katie
Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 14 years ago

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