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Posted: 13 years ago
Khush ,
Sometimes there's a different kind of pleasure in the pain you experience. It hurts you, breaks you, tears you apart, but somewhere somehow it still gives you the strength to go on...A grave satisfaction as you know your heart's broken, perhaps beyond repair, but you still feel, still love with all the broken pieces, with everything you have. And you know you're not finished. Because somehow you get the strength from the pain itself.
And that's life.
I loved these lines that you wrote, this is exactly what I think pain does to me . You really think deep for your age (I remember reading on some thread that you are underage 😉) . Very Impressive , I must say.
Thank you so much for all these wonderful words . This one's specially for you , all the way from Bangalore 🤗
Nehu , thank you so much sweetie .
And for the other things you mentioned , as "Mata Khush" says , just go with your instincts . I will try my best to give you a FF with a practical ending , if not very happy happy.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear Pra , please start ur ff soon and dear thers a lot of fun in AN's sepration , pining and crying but no fun without a happy ending so give all heartbreak pinning etc... and the fun moments too ... but a happy ending ... ok not too happy with marraige and Nikki being pregnant ehhehe hate those kinda stories
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nehu_1


@red Exactly my point.

@underlined Why did you have to mention that?😡 *sigh* I already know that.

@italics well I've lots of things to say about that but then this thread would definitely get finished with our never ending discussion.😆



@bold...Honey mentioned that to me some time ago...and I've seen how right she was 😆 You always get what you really really want from the heart, yes, but they don't always come in the packages you expect them to 😉

@blue...haan ji zaroor let's continue this in the AN FC 😃 Waisse bhi woh jagah toh khaali hi padha hai, koi toh jaata nahi wahan 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Khush ,
Sometimes there's a different kind of pleasure in the pain you experience. It hurts you, breaks you, tears you apart, but somewhere somehow it still gives you the strength to go on...A grave satisfaction as you know your heart's broken, perhaps beyond repair, but you still feel, still love with all the broken pieces, with everything you have. And you know you're not finished. Because somehow you get the strength from the pain itself.
And that's life.
I loved these lines that you wrote, this is exactly what I think pain does to me . You really think deep for your age (I remember reading on some thread that you are underage 😉) . Very Impressive , I must say.
Thank you so much for all these wonderful words . This one's specially for you , all the way from Bangalore 🤗
Nehu , thank you so much sweetie .
And for the other things you mentioned , as "Mata Khush" says , just go with your instincts . I will try my best to give you a FF with a practical ending , if not very happy happy.


@bold...aah, thank you thank you *takes a bow*
Yeah well that particular brand of pain that charms both you and me so much...it offers a kind of release, I don't know what it is...there's something in it that burns a hole through you - and the hurt you feel in there, despite tearing you apart, makes you feel a lot more and thus by default makes you feel more alive. Do I make sense here? 🤔 LOL

@underlined...and this one's returning specially for you, all the way from Calcutta 🤗

@italics...🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mitzi ,
Will definitely try to start the new thread over the weekend . Though I really hope I live up to all your expectations (keeping fingers crossed) .
Khush ,
Oh yes , you make all sense . Heartfelt pain can sometimes be much more beautiful than happiness . That's why probably I am never able to cry tears of joy 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mitzi and all,
Have started the second thread , link will be put on AN fiction thread 3 . IF is not allowing me to post a link without having 25 posts. So this is a jugaadu 26th post.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pra I think I have read your ff about ten times now ... its soo deep that I can come and read any part and seriously enjoy myself brilliant stuff !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys and Pra , I know you all hated the married track and so did I but I feel Nikki is the kind of girl who still agreed to be with Abhi cause she felt life was too precious to bother about such issues , sply cause she felt she trusteed Abhi enough to be with him inspite of some elusive wife .
Now those stupid creatives ruined even that futher by the melodramatic psycopath wife ... and that was totaly unwatchable ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@mitzi i am in india right now.. ha thiough of writing on my flight but was too tired to write anything.. i dont think i can update before second week of jan because thats when i return and woulf be hopefully settled.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mitzification

Hey guys and Pra , I know you all hated the married track and so did I but I feel Nikki is the kind of girl who still agreed to be with Abhi cause she felt life was too precious to bother about such issues , sply cause she felt she trusteed Abhi enough to be with him inspite of some elusive wife .

Now those stupid creatives ruined even that futher by the melodramatic psycopath wife ... and that was totaly unwatchable ...

Mitzi , oh yes . I feel the same too . I know what he did was wrong and she saw that too. But then she did love him and would continue to do the same . It was a matter of time till she would realize that and forgive him .
There had to be a solid explanation though , for his actions . Because he was someone who on all other occasions was so brutally honest . And this particular thing stuck out like a sore thumb and nobody even bothered to come up with a decent explanation.
This was my idea behind writing this FF . Its a very tough topic , but not completely impossible . I am glad after having your initial reservations about it , you finally see where I come from 😊 And thanks again for your lovely words . It feels nice to read something nice after spending a lousy day.

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