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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: Nehu_1

kind of!🤔 😆

Not "kind of", you ARE a hypocrite. And a big one at that :P

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 13 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

Not "kind of", you ARE a hypocrite. And a big one at that :P

Ok I agree but only when it comes to AN.😳 You know, you can be that when you're crazy for something or someone.😉 😆

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#463

Originally posted by: Nehu_1

Ok I agree but only when it comes to AN.😳 You know, you can be that when you're crazy for something or someone.😉 😆

@bold...aha! I know that very well, young lady *wags finger at you*

Sometimes with some people or some things, logic bas kaam nahi karta...I know, I know :P

Hota hai, hota hai *smiles an annoyingly superior smile* Par Nehu, ab in dono ko chhodke kissi insaan jo pakdo...in dono ka kuchh nahi hone wala! 😆

Par phir bhi, hypocrisy is hypocrisy...jao maaf nahi karti! :P

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 13 years ago

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pra19

@pra19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#464

Hello young ladies ,

Haa haa haa , I loved the little mini discussion my one comment has generated here . And this sounds like a very safe remark , but honestly , I am with all of you .

Mitzi , thanks again . You are very sweet.

Nehu and Rucha , good to hear from you guys and thank you for the kind words.

Khushboo , I totally understand why you love sadness . All my favorite songs , movies , novels , characters have an element of tragedy and I am always more attracted to anything that is sad or makes me sad . People close to me think that is an extremely unhealthy thing , but I don't care 😉 And my favorite romantic drama movie has a conventionally sad ending , but to me it is satisfactory in a way the happy ending would never have been . And as for AN FF's sad ending , I would definitely make it end sadly . BUt , the unfairness with which their characters were treated in the show , always changes my mind and probably that was why I ended up giving them a fairly happy ending . And the new FFs ending , at this point I honestly dont have an idea how it is going to end 😃. That is why I did not want to post it . But honoring dear Mitzi's remark , I think I will start it next week and in the coming weeks , try to wrap it up on my side.

And just for you Khush , here is something I had written a long while back . And now that I think of it , these verses fit this wrting challenge's theme as well (I'll explain in the end how )

One wish is all I want
One life of satisfaction is what I wish
Some things never change
That change is what I seek

I feel helpless , I feel shackled
If I could be of some use , of some help
I would do what I want to do
I could make you what you want to be

But I am stranded
In this world of static
With no more capacity
Than that of a featherless bird

Tears is all that I have for company
Tears that cease to flow almost everytime now
But what use are the tears
When all they do is dry

What will happen of us
Of your dreams and my wishes
I don't know
Only if I knew , I'd have some reason to live

(I think this would be from A's POV when he is back with his wife and realizes he cannot leave her .He cannot be with be N . He knows how much hurt he has caused N and cannot do anything to make her feel better. He cannot leave his wife and he cannot stop loving N. )

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#465

Originally posted by: pra19

Khushboo , I totally understand why you love sadness . All my favorite songs , movies , novels , characters have an element of tragedy and I am always more attracted to anything that is sad or makes me sad . People close to me think that is an extremely unhealthy thing , but I don't care 😉 And my favorite romantic drama movie has a conventionally sad ending , but to me it is satisfactory in a way the happy ending would never have been . And as for AN FF's sad ending , I would definitely make it end sadly . BUt , the unfairness with which their characters were treated in the show , always changes my mind and probably that was why I ended up giving them a fairly happy ending .

@bold...my point exactly. There's a different kind of satisfaction in tragic endings...they just sort of make it seem complete in a way happy endings can never do. Everything being all hunky dory in the end is just too...I dunno, mainstream. It happens with people. You fall in love, you get together, fight, argue, get married, live a good life or whatever. Mostly, that's the case. I like something different in literature or art. Brings out a different side to life, ya know.

@underlined...haha I do that too 😆 But they can't say that I'm a pessimist 'cause I'm quite famous for being hyper happy all the time 😆 I'm a true sadist, but despite all the sadness that I love, I'm not at all a pessimist so it's all good 😉

@italic...aah yes, that somehow disturbs me as well when I'm in the flow and preparing to give them a sad ending as well...feels like they've had enough injustice done to them, they deserve some happiness. 😳

Originally posted by: pra19

One wish is all I want
One life of satisfaction is what I wish
Some things never change
That change is what I seek

@bold...I love it! Irony...😃

Originally posted by: pra19

Tears is all that I have for company
Tears that cease to flow almost everytime now
But what use are the tears
When all they do is dry

What will happen of us
Of your dreams and my wishes
I don't know
Only if I knew , I'd have some reason to live

@bold...that's a lovely line...so harsh, it's almost enticing to me 😳 Yeah I'm weird that way...you can make faces :P

@underlined...aha. Perfect. No promise of togetherness, just a promise of love that really doesn't do much to ease the pain. Speaks of separation, of the hurt but it doesn't solve anything. Just infinite longing, a yearning for release, but still trapped somewhere between logic and practicality, and love and turbulence of emotions. Just goes on to say that everything is not always okay in the end...it's not a fairy tale.

Sometimes there's a different kind of pleasure in the pain you experience. It hurts you, breaks you, tears you apart, but somewhere somehow it still gives you the strength to go on...A grave satisfaction as you know your heart's broken, perhaps beyond repair, but you still feel, still love with all the broken pieces, with everything you have. And you know you're not finished. Because somehow you get the strength from the pain itself.

And that's life.

Excellent. I love it! ⭐️

Edited by Khushboo_AN - 13 years ago

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 13 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

@bold...aha! I know that very well, young lady *wags finger at you*

Sometimes with some people or some things, logic bas kaam nahi karta...I know, I know :P

Hota hai, hota hai *smiles an annoyingly superior smile* Par Nehu, ab in dono ko chhodke kissi insaan jo pakdo...in dono ka kuchh nahi hone wala! 😆

Par phir bhi, hypocrisy is hypocrisy...jao maaf nahi karti! :P

@red see, so you got my point. And you know what, this is something that annoys me a lot. I don't like being helpless but then there's nothing you can do. You love them way too much that nothing else seems to hold importance.

@purple 😃 lol

@green Sigh! Very True but this fact is indeed hard to digest. Dil kehta hai Mere Abhi-Nikki ayenge. *Rakhi's tone (from Karan-Arjun)* 😆

@brown lol, kabhi nahi ho sakta. Jo qualities muje chaiye wo kabhi ek insaan me nahi ,milenge mujhe.😆 Plus ye sab sadistic baatein sunke muje darr lag raha h, what if meri story ki b trajic ending hui to. 🤔 Ahem! Ignore that, the fact is I'd have to work really hard to find someone who can tolerate and accept me for what I'm.😳 I know I'm not perfect and I can't change who I'm. You getting what I'm trying to say?

@bold Excuse me, who said I was sorry? 😛

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#467

@Pra That poem, you wrote, is fabulous. I really loved it. I'm not a poetic person but got the feelings hidden in those lines so easily. Very beautifully written.

One wish is all I want
One life of satisfaction is what I wish
Some things never change
That change is what I seek
My fav. lines. Beutiful! I think every person at some point of time in his life must have thought that.

But what use are the tears
When all they do is dry
true true true! Very powerful lines. 👏

What will happen of us
Of your dreams and my wishes
I don't know
Only if I knew , I'd have some reason to live
I can't say much, sadism zindabad! Lovely!!!

You really deserve an applause for making someone who doesn't understand poems love the poem so much.👏

PS One wish is all I want
One life of satisfaction is what I wish (I wish for the same only *sigh*)

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 13 years ago

#468

Originally posted by: Nehu_1

@red see, so you got my point. And you know what, this is something that annoys me a lot. I don't like being helpless but then there's nothing you can do. You love them way too much that nothing else seems to hold importance.

@purple 😃 lol

@green Sigh! Very True but this fact is indeed hard to digest. Dil kehta hai Mere Abhi-Nikki ayenge. *Rakhi's tone (from Karan-Arjun)* 😆

@brown lol, kabhi nahi ho sakta. Jo qualities muje chaiye wo kabhi ek insaan me nahi ,milenge mujhe.😆 Plus ye sab sadistic baatein sunke muje darr lag raha h, what if meri story ki b trajic ending hui to. 🤔 Ahem! Ignore that, the fact is I'd have to work really hard to find someone who can tolerate and accept me for what I'm.😳 I know I'm not perfect and I can't change who I'm. You getting what I'm trying to say?

@bold Excuse me, who said I was sorry? 😛

@bold...I know exactly what that feels like. Trust me. 😳 And it ain't the best feeling in the world 🥱 'Cause sometimes, the extent to which you can go to see that person happy and the kind of things you're willing to overlook or forgive does tend to scare you.

@underlined...I'll give you a solution to that: let go of that thought. Simple as that. The moment you give up that fixed idea of your Prince Charming, you'll find someone to love with all their imperfections and if you're lucky, they'll love you back with all of your flaws as well.

Also, the best relationships are the ones you didn't see coming or didn't plan, ya know...there's a lot more fun in something when you didn't predict it or ask for it to happen but when it does, you find that you really couldn't have hoped for something better. Perfect people don't exist. If you're looking for one, you'll have to give up all hope, I'm sorry to say :P

You'll find that someone. And if you're in love with Abhi, I'll say that there're 9/10 chances you'll get someone who isn't like him 😆 And that's the fun of it. You think you're in love with Abhi and maybe you are, but then this completely different person comes along and sweeps you off your feet without your even realising it 😆 And when you do understand it, it's a hell lot of fun. Let go of those fixed ideas jana...warna zindagi bhar dhoonte hi reh jaogi 😉

You can decide what kind of personality traits you like in people, but you have absolutely no control over who you end up falling for 😉 😳

Itna socho mat...enjoy kariyo...go with your instincts...koi na koi pagal toh mil hi jaega! 😉

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mitzification

@mitzification

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Posted: 13 years ago

#469

Pri please update if you can !

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 13 years ago

#470

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

@bold...I know exactly what that feels like. Trust me. 😳 And it ain't the best feeling in the world 🥱 'Cause sometimes, the extent to which you can go to see that person happy and the kind of things you're willing to overlook or forgive does tend to scare you.

@underlined...I'll give you a solution to that: let go of that thought. Simple as that. The moment you give up that fixed idea of your Prince Charming, you'll find someone to love with all their imperfections and if you're lucky, they'll love you back with all of your flaws as well.
Also, the best relationships are the ones you didn't see coming or didn't plan, ya know...there's a lot more fun in something when you didn't predict it or ask for it to happen but when it does, you find that you really couldn't have hoped for something better. Perfect people don't exist. If you're looking for one, you'll have to give up all hope, I'm sorry to say :P
You'll find that someone. And if you're in love with Abhi, I'll say that there're 9/10 chances you'll get someone who isn't like him 😆 And that's the fun of it. You think you're in love with Abhi and maybe you are, but then this completely different person comes along and sweeps you off your feet without your even realising it 😆 And when you do understand it, it's a hell lot of fun. Let go of those fixed ideas jana...warna zindagi bhar dhoonte hi reh jaogi 😉
You can decide what kind of personality traits you like in people, but you have absolutely no control over who you end up falling for 😉 😳
Itna socho mat...enjoy kariyo...go with your instincts...koi na koi pagal toh mil hi jaega! 😉

@red Exactly my point.

@underlined Why did you have to mention that?😡 *sigh* I already know that.

@italics well I've lots of things to say about that but then this thread would definitely get finished with our never ending discussion.😆