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Posted: 14 years ago
@jyothi: Thanks, already started writing, hoping to get it up soon
@rucha: *uptil now* haha, well lets see if she remains positive :) thanks
@Khushboo: dont know what to say apart from thanks :)
@mitzi: where are you these days? havent seen you asking for updates in long time :D
@Neha: Would wait for your comments :)
@Pra: thanks a lot. already writing next part, hope to get it up soon. Cant admire you enough for writing and completing your FF so fast. epilogue was as good as FF. Liked how their date isnt cheesy..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: anotheranfan


@Khushboo: dont know what to say apart from thanks :)


Why not? Write me another part...that's the proper way to thank me 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Jyothi , thanks again . Unfortunately this is the end . Glad you liked it all along.
Pri , thanks . Will wait for the update.
Nehu , thanks so much . Abhified !!! Loved that word . We are all so besotted with all that Abhifiedness , aren't we ? And BTW , 31 isnt that old really for someone so well settled 😊
Rucha , Oh I am so glad you liked it . I wouldn't have even thought of it if you hadnt brought up that idea . I had so much fun writing this part . My Thanks to you .
And thanks to all others as well .
BTW Khush , I see no comment from you . Kya hua ? Pasand nahi aaya ?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Rucha , Oh I am so glad you liked it . I wouldn't have even thought of it if you hadnt brought up that idea . I had so much fun writing this part . My Thanks to you .


aww glad u wrote it! 🤗

waiting for your other new fic :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
Pra me to waiting for ur new fic , this one i have read the last 3 parts ehhehhheeh sorry , will read from begning later , but yaar u start a new exciting fic from their confession in rajasthan and minus the married track ... :)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

BTW Khush , I see no comment from you . Kya hua ? Pasand nahi aaya ?


No jana I haven't managed to read it yet!

Will comment when I do! ^_^
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Pra , It was difficult to get to start reading ur ff because of the theme but once i started ... it was really good , I enjoyed every single update AN's closness and their pain . It really was a wonderful read and the whole story does make sense. I found the last few updates to be heavy and feel they could have been lighter specially the epilogue can be a bit more fun ... but its all constructive criticism pls dont mind it.
Sadly thers much to occupy peoples mind and viewership for AN ff's is low .. but I feel that we keep coming back to AN .. they are so eternal after all.
Looking forward to new work from you , Please tell me when ur starting ur new ff ... and hey if u need some inspiration ... go read Honey's ff's they are the best !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

Part 5

Once or twice she had tenderly asked him if everything was OK with him and he had replied that it was ."Do you want to go back ?" , she had asked once . "Of course not . I don't." , he said with a half hearted smile and she had her answer .

aww u painted such a nice pic of Abhi ... he is so sweet and mysterious

Yet she was happy that he was coming back . Happy to know that he would be somewhere in the same building that she was occupying . She needed his support and guidance . She definitely needed him around. But , to her disappointment , they hardly saw each other for a whole week .

Love AN's sepration and longing for each other

decorations too stunning to even describe . "You really have become a fine manager of resources Dr Nikita ." , Dr Shashank said to Nikki as she blushed.

Abhi flushed with embarrassment on being caught . And if he had to save some of his dignity , he had to introduce her to Nikki . "Sure why not?"

Both of them walked towards the gang and as he began coming closer , Nikki realized he was coming towards her . Suddenly she was nervous , fidgeting furiously with the free end of her sari.

😃

" It seemed odd that she was nothing like Abhi who was so picky with what he said , always talking as if he was being charged for every word he utters .

hehhe so sweet Abhi !

He was so unreasonable . What had she seen in this man anyway ?

hehhe just love this line .. poor Nikki

She is at that age where one sort of loses their reasoning capacity and need for rational thinking. "

Abhi at his sadu self ... love him for this !

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But he was already behind her , holding onto her arm through the fabric of the dress and stopping her from going any further . She shivered at his sudden closeness , her feet almost pressed to the floor for support .In the meantime , with his free hand , he delicately untangled the zipper from her hair . He bunched all her hair together and put it across her right shoulder . Then very casually , lowered the zipper all the way down , taking a deep breath as some of her bare back was exposed .His hold on her hand loosened as he slightly lowered the dress on her shoulder and through the gap created , placed her hand inside the very short sleeve . He did the same for the other hand , this time turning her hair onto the left shoulder . And then put back the zipper on . The sensations in her body every time he touched her were not lost upon him and yet with great control , he had resisted the crazy urge to caress her back or more so put his lips against it .

. "Nikki ." , his voice was incredibly husky as he held onto her shoulders and turned her around .

He had called her Nikki after God only knew how long . It still sounded every bit as sweet as it did before .

"Nikki" , he said again , by now completely overcome with awareness of how little distance was there between them . He could feel her heart beat rapidly as he touched her chin and raised it up , forcing her to look at him . She looked like a fairy in that sea green kurta , so heartbreakingly beautiful .

"You look lovely in this dress Nikki ." , he said , piercing her with his gaze .Suddenly she lowered her head and some of her hair fell on her forehead . He pushed those strands aside and at last unable to control himself , bent down and kissed her . It started off as a small brush of his lips , but soon he claimed her with desperation and hunger that had been bolted up inside him all this while . He loved this woman like a crazy man . And then there was surprise as her stiff arms went around his neck and she pulled him closer with a savagery that was too much for someone her size and frame. Her hands moved across his back , through his hair, as he passionately continued to kiss her , occasionally moving away from her lips to her cheeks , her neck , her lovely collarbones but coming back to her lips obediently .

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Pra I am sorry there are fewer people around to appreciate your work ... but its brilliant work trust me !!!!!!!!!!! eagerly looking forward from something new from u .
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Posted: 13 years ago

Mitzi , thanks for all those sweet comments . Sorry , I did not login to IF recently or else would have replied earlier . I am so glad you finally made up your mind to read the FF from the start , despite not liking the theme . And trust me , one heartfelt comment like yours more than makes up for a low readership. I wish I had discovered all these AN threads earlier though . Would have definitely been more exciting with all the almost live action.

And , I know , this FF ended up being a lot darker than I had intended . But let me tell you why . Call me a sadist , but , I wanted to end this one on a sad note and then write an epilogue like 20 years down the line with some semblance of a more satisfying ending . But , then , I just could not bring myself to do it and so had to come up with an alternative story line with a sound explanation for everyone's actions. So , all the seriousness and drama.
And now , here's the other update . I have started another FF on AN . The desire to write one was driving me insane and I knew I had to do it . And its amazing the idea is just what you suggested (telepathic I must say) , after the confession where A is NOT married . Its going on and I don't want to put it up before I complete it . So , maybe a few days more . BTW , one question . I guess I am supposed to start a new thread , right ? Because it will have around 15 (or more maybe) parts.
JYothi , Rucha and Nehu , my regular commentor buddies , how are you all doing?So , there you read it . I am working on that second FF.
Khush , how are you doing too ? Not seen you on any threads for a long time ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pra19

And , I know , this FF ended up being a lot darker than I had intended . But let me tell you why . Call me a sadist , but , I wanted to end this one on a sad note and then write an epilogue like 20 years down the line with some semblance of a more satisfying ending . But , then , I just could not bring myself to do it and so had to come up with an alternative story line with a sound explanation for everyone's actions. So , all the seriousness and drama.

And now , here's the other update . I have started another FF on AN . The desire to write one was driving me insane and I knew I had to do it . And its amazing the idea is just what you suggested (telepathic I must say) , after the confession where A is NOT married . Its going on and I don't want to put it put before I complete it . So , maybe a few days more . BTW , one question . I guess I am supposed to start a new thread , right ? Because it will have around 15 (or more maybe) parts.
Khush , how are you doing too ? Not seen you on any threads for a long time ?


@bold...why, why, oh WHYYY did you change the ending then? 😭 I'm a hardcore sadist myself and I've been CRAVING for some tragic endings to AN FFs...no one writes them, goodness knows why! I wanted to, but Honey never lets me Give me a sad ending, please!!!


@underlined...am good! Was stuck with a few personal problems for a while...life, ya know 😆 ah well all's good now. Anyway I'm busy these days, but do come here and there sometimes...never stay long, though. You'll find me on the AN FC often enough I believe. 😳

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