||Abhi Nikki Writing Challenge 2|| - Page 43

@Pra:
Dont get me wrong, i am up for all the romance, passion does define AN but being married is huge thing. In my opinion N wouldnt let reality away just this time esp that she gets to know about it when she was all dreaming about spending time with her. He has kept her in dark for whatever selfish reasons and i somehow cant accept it.

But this next part of yours I like. Niki is willing to understand him, she cant promise about anything and in her shoes that seems right. A's past can be torturous, painful or anything but he shouldnt be hiding it and she has right to be angry on him.

Hey i loved how you explained A's music taste and related it to his nature :) Very interesting. With the latest part it looks like A has something to tell her. I hope things get better and N can forgive him for hiding the facts before.

Please dont take my comments seriously as till date the marriage track is something that has put me off. It just wasnt A to hide those fact till getting N involved with him. So you can say i am biased there and my comments always come from that point of view :)

I would say very bold attempt here. Trying to make things right that have gone horribly wrong. *fingers crossed* i hope at the end of your fiction i can forgive A for hiding the facts :)

@Pri...ouch. Amazing.

Hello guys ,

Hope all of you are having a good Saturday . I am a little unwell with all these stupid headaches 😭 since the last few days and could not come online . But , its good to be back and read all the updates and comments .

Firstly Rucha, Jyothi and all others , thanks for liking the update.

Pri , hey not all . No offence taken . I think its perfectly fine for anyone to disagree in parts with some parts of what another person has thought and written . Its perfectly normal to disagree and if we did not find it normal , we wouldn't be here talking ,writing and arguing over these two fictional characters who cant seem to agree with just about anything on this planet 😉.
Jokes apart , I see where you are coming from . I agree , marriage is a really serious thing to hide from the woman you claim to love so dearly. But let me assure you again , he had solid reasons to do that , as you will get to know from the remaining parts . And his intimacy , well , I'd like to forgive him just once , you know for losing his control and getting so close to her. He is a man after all , of a certain age (Ahem !!!) and at a certain stage. But , to his credit , he did apologize later. And all this while , he has been in perfect control , doing just what she wanted him to do , maintaining the distance and all. And Nikki dreaming about him and all , well , we don't really have a control over dreams (I for one don't . All my life , my dreams have been so strange and unrealistic that I don't even remember them once I wake up ), so the same goes for Nikki and like I said last time , she is angry with him , but still not so angry that she is not able to understand that he has some issues and he really needs someone with whom he can unburden himself . Glad you could see tht from the update.
Enough ranting ,now about your update , glad to see a part from you . Really liked that interesting twist , though now I am so very curious to see how you are going to end this story . Do update soon.

And my dear Khush , wow , those two comments are simply fab .
Let me just say thank you and no your long comments on the other FFs are almost as entertaining as the FF . They are funny and insightful and a little dreamy and a well , you get the point 😃, am sure all here agree .
AN are brilliant character study material , no doubt and if I must say this , I am a lot like Abhi (pretty complex I guess , not at all easy to understand) . And I completely agree with your point of how they managed to hold on to sanity despite all that heavy dramatisation.

About your demands , ohh I am all for them . It only means that you are able to understand and appreciate my writing . But I am not really having any story line now . If I do , then maybe I can see if I can bring something out of it .And you people are amazing . I have never been much of a social networking person , but here I am on a public forum related to television nonetheless , typing these long comments . And its all because of you guys who make this thing seem so much fun and meaningful.

Ok , now about the other comment . Oh I am glad I got you all worked up with my description , though I never really thought in that direction . You know he is so sad that my heart went out to tht poor fellow even as I was writing those lines . But if I have transported you to heaven , then so be it . Enjoy your time there 😉.
Abhi's mom is a sweetheart and she says thanks for the hug :). And she does have a very important part in all that happened in his past even if it was totally unintended . I am glad you like her character . So , without any more ado , here is the next update .

Wow pra awesome update loved it cont soon

Originally posted by: pra19

Ok , now about the other comment . Oh I am glad I got you all worked up with my description , though I never really thought in that direction . You know he is so sad that my heart went out to tht poor fellow even as I was writing those lines . But if I have transported you to heaven , then so be it . Enjoy your time there 😉.

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awesome Abhi divorced her...*phew* n It was that simple..then what was that he was waiting for, all this while? 😕