|ArSh FF|Saviour...|Part 9 Comp.|Page 89| 4/7/12

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Hi guys...i know u all must be ready with ur chappals n tamatar to through on me...that i didnt updated other fics n came up wid a new one...but kya karon yaar...they r guests at my place...so not getting tym to do anything at all...so sorry for this...will update them soon...

ok coming to the point after my long bak bak...here is the intro of my new fic...

Saviour...

Disclaimar: all written is just completely fiction...anything related to anyone living or dead is certainly coincidence...so plzzz do take it seriously...

Warning:the contents of this fic are my thoughts so it should not be copied to anyother website...or in anyother fiction...i have my other fics content got copied but didnt say much but this tym i wont stop my self for taking action against the one who did this...

Intro...

Mumbai sapnon ki nagari...jahan har kisi ke sapne sakar hote hain...har koi apni hi duniya mein masroof (busy) hai...kisi ko kisi ki koi fikar nahin...koi jiye mare kisi ko is se koi lena dena nahin...har samay har waqt har koi bas apni manzil tak pohnche ki jaldi mein hai...

isse shahir Mumbai mein hai ek jagah...jahan har koi tayar hai dosre ki madad ke liye...ap bhi chal kar dekhna chahiyen gae...tu lets go...

We can a beautifully architectured building...the area around is fully covered wid flowers n grass...on one side their is parking area...n the other has basketball court...

the main entrance of the building is beautifully build making it more exotic with its huge n large glass...main people are running here n there...men n women are going in n coming out...a completely different atmosphere is there...

the lobby n reception area is furnished wid orange shaded couches n the gal behind the desk on reception is busy guiding people were to go n also taking phone calls...

men n women wearing white coats r running here n there dealing wid people helping them...the pungent smell of medicine is making the atmosphere more that of the hospital...

that's wat it is...hospital...SANJEEVANI...

the men n women in white coat are the doctors who r running to help ppl...n to give them proper medicine...

today the climate is bit cloudy...n seems like its gonna rain soon...all the doctors busy going their duties n soon its tym for them to leave as it already 8 pm n they should go home to come again next day for their dutoes...we can see someone standing near the entrance of Sanjeevani...wearing black long shoes n pants...wid black overcoat and a hat...he is looking for someone...but when he see four ppl coming out of Sanjeevani...he hid himself behind the car n keep his eye on them...

the four ppl came out...3 gals n 1 boy...they exchanged pleasentries...biding gudbye...move to their respective cars to go home...2 in one car n the boy n gal in another...

After the left the man come out n took his cell fone calling someone...

the bell ringed n someone picked the fone...

its completely dark n nothing can be seen...the person was sitting on a rocking chair n was rocking it back n forth...

Man in black at Sanjeevani : Sir gals just left from here may be going home...

Boss: ok gr88...keep ur eyes on them...i want them at any cost...did u get that "he shouted...

Man: y...ye...yes Sir 'he answered afraid from his masters anger...

Boss: Shashank Gupta now i will see who is gonna save ur daughters from my clutches "n laugh an evil laugh"

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so this is it guys...but im confused...

should it be ARSH or AR...

so plzzz help me...n give ur votes...

Poll... Poll for ARSH or AR

take care...

loads of luv...

anu...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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INDEX:
intro...scroll above...
Part 1...page 7...
Part 2...Page 12...
PART 3 A...Page 22...
PART 3 B...Page 30...
PART 4...Page 43...
PART 5...Page 50...
PART 6...Page 57...
PART 7...Page 68...
PART 8...Page 77...
PART 9...Page 89...
Edited by anumeha_rajat - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro.Anu..
loved it.
congrats for new ff.
plz cont. soon.





Everyday
I write you love letters in my mind

when I am with you, I can never find

the words to tell you whats in my heart.

even though I don't always share my feelings,

I hope you know my heart is full of love for you.



thanks for pm.
love
ritu
Edited by janu1610 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro.. looks interesting.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oo sounds interesting
plz continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro
continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amaizing Intro, the part was greatly written. Congratz on your new FF PLEASEEEEEEEE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEE MAKE THIS AR FF/ no Arsh hehee sorry ONLY AR! UPDATE sooooooooooooooooooon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro update soon................n i want it arsh ff..........................

thx 4 d pm
luv
kj
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiiiiii
awesome start
loved it
intresting concept
cant wait 4 da 1st part
con soon
plz do pm when u update
thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice intro
to be honest make it AR cos i cant read arsh plzzz AR.

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