Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 - Page 19

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Posted: 14 years ago

Happy Valentine Day🤗🤗🤗

Thank u so much for ur precious comments.......😃🤗🤗

here is special update....i tried to write Romantic update😳☺️....i hope u liked Mayur scenes

Part 7

Nupur came downstair....she was blushing becaz of their meeting...she knew he loved her..but she wanted his confession..Hum jante hain Mayank ap bhi hum se pyaar kerte hain...per hum ap se woh teen lafz sun na chahte hain.....she tought...

after sometime Mayank was also came downstair to meet Gunjan....they all were busy in talking with eachother but Mayank and Nupur steal glancing at eachother all the time....

on the other hand Gunjan noticed them...she wanted to give them some time to spend together but how ?She knew Nupur,s brother were narrow- minded...if they know about them...they will never allow them to meet eachother..she tought sometime and an idea struck in her mind

oh GOD....gunjan shrieked

shilpa aunty,Mayank and Nupur who was busy in talking looked at her with shocked

Shilpa aunty.....kya hua Gunjan

Gunjan...maa woh mujhe yaad hi nahi raha...mujhe apni friend se milne jana tha us ne mujhe subha phone kiya tha aur main bhool gaye...mujhe abhi jana ho ga

Mayank tu Nupur ko ghar chor aa...main ye hi se apni friend ke ghar chali jati hoon

Mayank...Gunjan...main Nupur ko ghar chor don ga....he said

Shilpa aunty hugged Gunjan and Nupur and kissed their forhead...Nupur beta ati raha karo....she said with so much love

Nupur...ji aunty she said happily

Mayank was looking at her lovingly...he was so happy that he get some time to spend with him...he wanted to tell her...how much he loved her..

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Mayank and Nupur came towards the car..He opened the front door for her...she sat down in front seat...She was so nerveous but at the same time happy becaz she was with him...she loved his company,she loved him.....

Mayank was looking at her instantly....and she knew he was seeing her so she kept her eyes down....he knew she was too shy to say anything so he had to break the silance himself...

Nupur...he looked at her

ji...she looked up and saw in his eyes.

Ap hum se naraz hain kya?Mayank asked and looked her

Nahi hum ap se naraz toh nahi hain....She replied..she was confused at his question per ap ne aisa kyun pocha...she asked

she wanted to know reson...

Mayank smiled at her confuse expression...is liye ke hum kitni der se ap ki awaz sun na chahte the per ap hain ke hum se baat hi nahi ker rahi

she smiled....woh...hum....aise hi ...ap bataye hum kya baat karain....she said and looked in his eyes

hmm toh ap hamain yeah batayen ap ko kya kya accha lagta hai...Mayank asked

hamain ice-crem achi lagti hai,barrish main bheegna accha lagta hai..and .i loved dancing and singging...she told him excitedly and he was silently listening her talking...she was so innocent and he loved her talking....he wanted to listen his voice...

hamain bhi baarish bohat pasand hai...he said with smile

ap ko bhi baarish pasand hai....she said happily

he nodded her head....bohat zayada....

she was so happy with him....they were talking with eachother...she told him her likes,dislikes...he was silently listening her...

suddenly their car stopped with jerk....

lagta hai kuch problem ho gaya hai..bahir ja ker check kerna pardhey ga..they came out of the car.....Mayank was busy in checking the problem and Nupur was watching her when rain started....

he looked up but she was not there....he turned and looked straight......Nupur was enjoying rain...she was jumping and dancing in the rain....she was looking beautiful and Mayank lost in her....her wet hair,her eyes,her innocent...she was looking an angel...she was her angle...he loved her so much,,,he never took interest in any girl....but Nupur she was special girl who stole his heart in one meeting...he loved her shyness,her innocens,her talking.....he was madly,deeply in loved with her...he could not control himself....

he walked towards her...and bent down on his knee infront of her

she looked at him with surprise

he forward his hand towards her......

can i dance with this beautiful girl?he was looking at her with so much love

she smiled and nodded her head and put her hand on his hand...

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..

he stood up...and pulled her towards him...she felt his hands on her waist.her hands were around his neck..she felt his breath on her face....he was looking at her with so much love and passion....they slowly danced...they were so closed to eachother....they were lost into eachother...


Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Ek Dhum Ke Mein Nishano Pe
Chaloon Rukoon Ishaare Pe..
Tu Kahe To Khwab Ka Bana Ke Mein Bahana Sa
Mila Karoon Sulaane Pe..
Hoo…Tumse Dil Ki Baathe Seekhi
Tumse Hi Yeh Raahe Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Mein To Jee Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Ke... Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya...
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

he twirled her...and pulled again towards him...she collapsed with his chest....her hear beat increased....he leaned and kissed her cheeks.she tightly clutched his shirt....she closed her eyes....she wanted to feel this moment....he kissed her eyes....and looked at her..her eyes were closed....he smiled

Dil Kahe Ke Aaj Chupa Lo Tum Panaahon Mein
Ke Dar Hai Tumko Kha Dunga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar Laga
Ke Dar Hai Mein To Ro Dunga..
Hooo Karthi Hoon Saugaate Tumse
Baande Dil Ke Waade Tumse, Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kyan Hua..
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda


he cupped her face ....they were looking into eachother eyes.....she could see love in his eyes...

Nupur..i love you..i really love.i want u in my life...u r my angel..u r my love..she smiled at his confession ...tears were flowing in her eyes...these three words she wanted to hear from him...finally he said these three words....she was so happy...he was waiting for her answer...

i love you too Mayank....he smiled and hugged her tightly....finallly they confessed their loved...they huggged eachother so tightly.....they wanted to feel their togethernesss....they wanted to captured this moment in their hearts forever...

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..

she pullled herself back....she blushed hard...Mayank leaned and kissed her forehead ...he wanted to remove all her pain...

he kissed her eyes....he promised to himself that he will fullfill her all dreams..he carresed her cheeks and kissed ..he put his lips on her.....he wanted to tell him...he will be there for her always.....he loved her so much...she responeded his kiss.....they shared their first kiss.....They were together

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here is update....i tried to write more bettter...i hope u all liked it...plzzz do comments and press like button if u liked it

ur comments means a lot to me...

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Posted: 14 years ago
Its Simply Beautiful..........Just Awesome
Sooooooooo Romantic
Do Continue Asap !!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
aaa i feel so sad that nupur will suffer such a bad tragedy that's why am afraid to read ur ff.because i can't see something bad happen to mayur 😭😭 but i loveddddddddd it osooom😳
Edited by mahakmev - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

very beautiful update dear..they r soooooo cute................................

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Posted: 14 years ago
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ thnku so much for giving us such a romantic truly v day special update
i loved ths update..thy r so much into each other ...i hope koi dkh na lay
n ya BTW..ur title is mine favt gazal....lovely
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aweome Part Maria..
Very Romatic..
Loved their Rainy Confession...
and thnx for the pm Maria...

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Posted: 14 years ago
soooooo sweet update
loved their scene in mayank room....they r sooo cute
cont soon
Maria. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

soooooo sweet update

loved their scene in mayank room....they r sooo cute
cont soon

heyy next part is on pg 25..check it😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow
lovely confession'
just loving mayur scenes here they are really smooth and very beautifully written
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
it amazing update maria luved it deyt confess so soon...wow!!!...not bad at all...hoevrything go well..next to..😍

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