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Posted: 14 years ago
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Remorse
PART 3



Geet- don't hurt me maan. I have no intention to come in front of you. I am sorry.

Maan- look at it from outside because poor girls like you will never have anything.... Oh! Hold on.... Are you here to melt one of this rich guy? ... You are. He mocks her....
Maan laughs... And walks off. Like she is a filth. A mere dust. Have no right in him. No right. If course that was right. She never had no right on him. Never. Geet walked along the empty street. Tears rolled down her eyes. Was she that ugly... Was she that same-full to the society. Sometime she feel like she wanted to end her life.... Just end this misery. She feel in love with a man who hates her to the core with out any reason...

Maan walks in to the show... It was almost finished. Sam stood at the back with crossed arm.
Sam- you are late! YOU R LATE.
Maan hugs her- sorry jan. I will never from today. Had a important meeting. He hugs her tight.
Sam- do you like my dress? I love it. The Designer wasn't wearing any good cloths her self. Her hair was covered up. Can't believe Designer Nowadays.... I want her to work for you. Pay her double the double. I want her to Designee my cloths. Her every Designee was so nice. She parses geets work.
Maan smiles- anything for you jan.
Maan talks to Kapoor- I want this Designer to work under me. I will pay double the salary.
Mr Kapoor- but she have 1 years contract with me. I doubt she will leave to. I mean I won't let her go. I am making so much profit & specially she doesn't want to show her self to the media... So at the same time I am making someone els famous with her Designee.
Maan laugh- cheating business.
Mr Kapoor- what could I do mr khurana if she her self want don't want to ear that money. Might as well I get some use of her. She is very good looking I have to say.
Maan roles his eyes- have you made a move on her? He laughs.
Mr Kapoor- no! No! Not like that. She is very good at being a model. But she is a bit religious.
Maan- it's time for you to get married mr Kapoor. Anyway send her to my office. 2moro.

Geet gets a call soon after maan leaves. She was shocked. She refused instantly. He hated her to the core. Hated her beyond. & of course If he called me for this he had some wrong intention to hurt me.
Mr Kapoor- he have good pay. A very good pay.
Geet- I have enough money to live. I won't. Tell him that & if you force me I will leave your work as well. She cuts the call. She had to leave from here. No matter what if both lives in the same town she will always see him & it will only give her pain. Nothing els. Pain. She cried that night. Her birthday night. Her Warst night. He hated everything. Everything to the core.

Next day....

Maan waited for this unknown Designer. Who was she? He wondered. It's been 4 hours. No one dare to keep maan sing khurana wait. How dare she. He calls Kapoor personally.
Maan- where is this Desginer?
Mr Kapoor- she have refused sir.
Maan- have you told her I will pay the double money? Have you told her? He shouts.
Mr Kapoor jumps- yes sir
Maan hangs up instantly. No one dare say no to me. How dare she. He snaps. Sam walks in.
Sam- have you managed to find the Designer?
Maan- she will only work for me. No one els from today.
Maan calls the Designer again- what is her name?
Mr Kapoor- Geet. Geet Handa.
Maan froze instantly. Her. That dirty rotten. That filth. Maan looks at sans dress instantly. He hangs up. He was angry now. No matter how much he throughs that girl way that filth comes back to make his surrounding dirty again. That poor b***.
Maan- I don't want you to were her cloths ever again. He shouts at sam.
Sam surprised- why? Why ... Be....
Maan snaps and walks out.

Geet was home alone. Everyone went to HP to see Darji.. Who was very I'll.
She was just crying. She have left his job looking for a new one. Every where she goes... Her life always somehow links with him. Her door bells ring. She wipes her tears. Her eyes was bright red. She decided to wash it off. Just for the sake of it. The bell was non stop buzzing. Seems like the person had no patient.
Geet opens the door.... She couldn't even fully open it when the person burgess in. Geet was shocked. The force was so strong that she landed on the floor. Her dupata from her hair came of. The heavy chil wind brushed along the door and hit her face taking the duppata way completely.
Geet looks at maan in shock. His eyes was full of anger. It was bright red. Like she could kill him with those eyes. Geet was scared. Petrified....
Geet- Ap.....?....
Maan- look... A dirt always with her dirty friend. You deserve to be on the floor.
He didn't even had to listen to his words... Water came out of her eyes.
Geet makes her way up- please maan go. She walks towards the table and picks her dupata up. Covering her self.
Geet- please go.
Maan holds her tight by her arm and spines her round with force.
Maan- how dare you Designee cloths for my sam? How dare you? He pushes her towards the coffee table. Geet was shocked with his behavior. He had no right on her. He had no right to behave like this with her & that to in her house.
She cuts her hand. Geet screams in pain. Blood was ozzing out.
Maan- that's what you deserve. A filthy poor girl like you. That's what you deserve. I mean you should consider your self lucky to Designee any cloths for khurana family. Specially for the future bride. I don't even keep a filth like you as a servant. & you Designee my Girlfriends cloths. How dare you.
Geet was in pain. She was bleeding heavily. She couldn't even talk properly. Wimping. Maan noticed the blood. He ignores. Why don't you die Geet. Just die. Maybe god will be little more kind to you then me. He laughs. He looks at the blood that was rolling along the floor now. You are nothing to no one. You are nothing to anyone. You are a filth. He smirks again.
She was in pain. Any minute now she will faint. Just waiting for the moment.
Maan- I pitty you. Love! He laughs. Look at your love. He is seeing you dying now. If you expect me to help you... I won't! Are you crazy? Seeing you dying is one of the most happiest thing in my life. I wanted to see you in road after my mum & dad told me to merry you. You made me feel sick. I would look back at the dog twice but not you.... And do you remember when you demanded you love me? He laughs & I humiliated you infront of everyone.
Geet was about to faint now.
Maan- hmm... By the look of your face... It looks like you will die. I will see You later If you survive. He laughs & walks off...

Next- geet in hospital



hay you all.. :D hope you like this one.. concept 3' i will update but not now' later' this just popped in my head. i just wanted to type it lol' pls do say what you think about this' & if you like it. :D

do you want me to continue or not :D

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12

sorry babe… thats why its remorse…. but you have to read along :D…
hope to make some happy part soon xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg..poor geet.
hate maan..wht kind of person he is?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shah10

omg..poor geet.

hate maan..wht kind of person he is?


ty darling… we wil know soon but for now…. a heartless person……. remember he have no reason to hate her :D xxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet should not give in easily when he starts to fell in love with her, he should be tortured as he tortured her.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: temorocks

Geet should not give in easily when he starts to fell in love with her, he should be tortured as he tortured her.......


very well said. he have no reason at all to hate her… just bcs he brought up in a good way he have the power….
have you read the poem… :D
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hint hint ;D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I want Maan and Geet to be together, but Geet should not give in easily, we should see the madness of Maan's love when he starts to fell in love with her, the stalker, the jealous, the anger of his love, etc....... ☺️
But I would love to see them together later on, getting married then their life after marriage ☺️
U understand?..........
Edited by temorocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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U better continue dis but wats wrong wid maan he is so disgusting...... I m feeling sorry 4r geet i mean how could he....... Geet better show some attitude...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yu better make her strong i know the the tittle means remorse but pls be mercy to Geet what did she do to him & Dadima she evil since started reading untill now im crying the way Geet been treated i hope anangel come to her rescue soonnnnn three parts sad emotional pls cont soonnnn pls turn to FF


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Posted: 14 years ago
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I love d poem in d beginnin very fascinatin .Lovd ths story, maan is behavin so rudly n insanely, wats hs problem! Felt sorry 4 geet. Keyama r u givin few more parts? Plz do cont soon, m eager to knw wat happens nxt.
Edited by chubzy - 14 years ago

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