FF-REMORSE-~maaneet- THREAD 1 - Page 18

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

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Geet is a muslim in this FF before anyone ask me againxxxand Modelling Big NO NO. she is religious. she is not changing a bit for maan. thats all i am saying. :Dxxx

Weeks have passed. She sarted her special Designee for sam while shoran sing paid a visit to Geet. He liked her instantly. Fell in love with her. Love at first sighed.... It was Geet. It's always her. But he wanted to wait. Wanted to save enough money for there wedding. To give her a good life while Geet wanted to do this sams job.... Save enough and leave enough for her parents & for rajjis wedding. She wanted to save enough so they don't have to work for money again.

shoriaha moved to deli as he found a better job. 40 000 rupy a month. He is a engineer. Geet was happy that she was about to merry someone hardworking.
One evening shoria & Geet went for a walk to talk....
shoria- it's weird... It's only been a month & we are very good friend. Geet smiles. Nowadays it's only him who made her smile. No one els.
Geet- thank you.
shoria- thank you for what?
shoria- to make me smile.
Abhi- I want our engagement to take place soon.
Geet smiles & nodes- but the marriage. Please if you can delay. You know I want to save money for my ...
shoria- it's completely alright Geet. I am really happy with this decision. Geet smiles....

Next day Geet walks in SAMs house. It was a huge bunglo. She covers her hair nicely and walks in.
Sam- oh you are here at last.
Geet- why? What happen? Sam was really nice compare to maan. Sam hated geets clothing sense but always forced her to were something nice. She never criticized her. Like she was from a poor family.

Sam- it's my birthday today. I want you to be dressed. Nicely. Maybe for today... I know you never take your dupata off but please for today can you dress up. Geet smiles faintly. She was indeed very nice person...
Geet nodes- but I am not going anywhere. I will just dress up & show you & then I have to leave. Do you remember it's my Darjis birthday in 2days. My whole family Are going. I have to.
Sam nodes.

Geet smiles & walks in to sams closet. She took out a blue with light pink work, slware kamize. It was stylish. She hesitated for a minute just incase maan comes in. But it's not his usual time. She decided to change. She had no intention at all. She just wanted to wear the dress then take it off before maan comes in.
Geet wore her dress. She still looked simple. The scuff over her head. She wore a nose ring which was glittering with the light. No make up. Nothing. Just simple. Except a glitter well designed expensive cloths. The room was dark. Everyone must be in the party already she thought. Suddenly two strong arm hugged her from the back. Geet froze on the spot. She started to take deep breath. She didn't expect this. She tried to protest... Seems like the person didn't like that. She tried to turn and push but in return his hand covered her mouth. Stopping her to talk & turn round. He removed The dupata from her hair and kissed her nape. Geet froze. Her eyes widens in fear. She tried to push him way with all her force but in return he pushed her hard against the wall. Tears rolled down geets eyes as his hand started to travel round her waist and slowly making it's way to her curve. She moaned nonstop. Trying to y'all for help.... But that just made him more angry.... He ripped the dupata off... Started to give her shower kisses on her back... The flesh some how tasted perfct for him.... His kiss started to get wet. He bit her shoulder.... Geet protested his every kiss. Trying her best to free her self... But in return his hand went her dress...... Stroking her curve. Geet tried to punce him off with her hand in shock. He holds both of her hand tight. She was trapped between the wall & the person.... He quickly unzips her. Geet started to panic. His hand traveled to her curve & started to play with them while his lips kissing her neck threaly.. Biting re earlobe... Kissing her cheek.... Geet was helpless. His body started to push her against the wall harder. She shivers in pain.. And then in one jerk he spines her round.... Only think both could see was one another eyes. Geets eyes twinkled with fears while maans shocked & surprised.... He was still holding her mouth while Geet shaking. Trying her best to push way. Pleading to leave her...
Maans reflex pushed her to the balcony under the moonlight. Geet was trying her best to free her self...
Geet- please let me go.... Please. She pleads.
Maan holds her tight- how dare you wearing sammeras cloths? His nail started to dig in her arm. It was bleeding. How could a person be so cold? How could a person be so lifeless. With no feeling. Geet screamed in pain.
Geet- please let me go. Please.... She managed to whisper out. Please.
Maan- so that's why I pay you. Hu. So behind her back you could steal her cloths? Filthy people like you can only steal. He snaps. You decided to show your filthy true self then Hu. Very good. Must say. Empty house steal anything as possible.
Geet closed her eyes in pain. She just wanted to go home. She wanted to leave his sight. Geet again pleads- please let me go!.... Please.

Maan wanted to kill her. Berry her to the ground. She makes him feel sick. Since there childhood she have been a mere dustbin. Nothing els. A dust.
Maan- you are sick. Don't you feel ashamed? I call you all this names & like a beshram you still come in-front of me like a prostituted! Give your self to me. Geet closes her eyes in pain. He thinks of her like this?.. Tears of blood was coming out. Maan was holding her just above the balcony.... If he frees her she will fall defiantly. Never to see 2moros morning again. He jerks her. Reaffixed his nails.... This time Geet scrims louder in pain.
Maan- if you want I have few Servants who will easily sleep with you. Would you like me to give you the details or shall I tell them to come round yours? He smirks... Will pay you good.
Geet started to cry louder. Her ear seems to die way. She couldn't take any more words from him. Nune. She wanted to hide somewhere. His word was more painfully then anything els. It strike her heart like a thousand needles. Perching. Breaking. Geet wanted to scream louder. Complain to Allah why her? What's her mistake? What she have done to deserve this? Geet cried & cried.
Maan- I could kill you easily now. Soon as I free you.... He smirkes.... Geet didn't have any believe any trust to look at his eyes. She didn't have any energy to face his angry. She didn't. She couldn't. No. Possibly no.
Maan- but I won't! As you are a important figure to my sam... With those disappointed words he throughs her to the floor....
Maan- can't believe people Nowadays. Where do they find in a gurbadge like you....
Maan walks out. Geet sat there crying. She hugged her self tight and cried endlessly. Her dupata was no where to be seen. Maan have through it somewhere when he stroked his hand along her curve.... Geet started to feel sick.... There was once when she always wanted to be his forever. Just his.... She still wasn't sure why that hope still there.... Like every place he have touched. He have curved his name on it. Why? She cried louder'.

Hay You all' :D ty soooo much for all the lovely comments'. i hope you all like this part 2' PLS do leave me some analytic comments' love to read what you think about our maan & geet' maybe some idias how he should be punished :DxxxxxxxxxPLS Do Press The LIKE BUtton

hey u r making us feel sick abt maan..................it was his mistake that though she was protesting he was taking control over her and pushing himself over her and dares to talk like this to geet..............i just hate geet now as she is not able to face this demon with much more arrogance and confidence.................

god i really pity sameera who has got such a boyfriend who doesnt even give a damn thought about her designer god i would really have slapped him

o my poor geet...make her strong na......nd that maan ..errrrrr...i feel like kicking him.........do continue soon .....nd if psbl pm me..

Originally posted by: preethia

hey u r making us feel sick abt maan..................it was his mistake that though she was protesting he was taking control over her and pushing himself over her and dares to talk like this to geet..............i just hate geet now as she is not able to face this demon with much more arrogance and confidence.................

Oh god. Im dying. Here. Y he hates her. Y.plz give me a reason.that much hate. Does past have some reason???... Oh poor geet...when she be rich...and maan poor.hehehehe great na.hehdh atleast aage ka soch kr khush hojati hu.

Another really good part :D!!

It was so intense.. Sameera is nice compared to Maan she even gave Geet her clothes!! And Maan 😡 so rude, he is sooooo mean to her!!

My hatered for Maan is gng on increasing