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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago


***REMORSE***
part 4

hay you all' thank you so much for the comments & like button :) here u go another part' one more coming up' its a bit shocking' ':D
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Geet was about to faint now.
Maan- hmm... By the look of your face... It looks like you will die. I will see You later If you survive. He laughs & walks off...


After he leaves geet managed to call the hospital.... She fainted.

It's been a week. Geet was in hospital. Her family still in HP. Unaware about everything.
She opens her eyes slowly. Trying to get up.
Dr armaan- no! No! Don't get up.
Geet- where am I?....
Armaan- we found you nearly dead. You were so lucky. I have tried to contact your home but no one is peaking up.
Geet- yea. Everyone back in HP. Please don't call them. My Darji is Ill already. I...
Armaan- it's ok! It's ok! Calm down. How did this happen?
Geet- actually... Au me... She was Hesitating. Who would believe that maan sing khurana have done this to her. Who would believe that maan sing khurana knows a mere garbage. She sighed. I fell over.
Armaan wasn't convinced but that was enough truth he guessed.
Geet- can I leave. I don't think I have enough money to pay for the...
Armaan- no! It's ok. Don't worry. Some well wisher already have paid for you.
Geet laughs... Well wisher & for her. Most unlikely.
Geet- I don't have well wisher. More like enemy. She laughs.
Armaan confused- enemy? A sweet girl like you could never have enemy. Geet smiles.
Geet- thank you. Some stranger for the first time ever been nice to me.
Armaan pats her hand. Now rest. Your wound are still not healed. Geet smiles.

It was 1am. She have to stay in this hospital a day more & after that she needs to go out for a job hunt. Any job is good enough. Her life was a mess. Keeping her self way from maan will be the best thing to do. He wouldn't even care twice if I die.... But my family does. They need me. I am the only old one to look after my old parents. If I die then what will happen to them. Through out the night Geet kept thinking. There was no clear reason for maans hatred towards her. He just hated her. It was odd. How could a person be so cold towards poor people. & his family leaves no chance to taunt them. She sieges. It's time for life to move on. Yes he hates me. Physically & mentally... But now it's time to move on. I love him & from that love I wish he have a happy life.

Tears rolled down geets eyes. She wished not to see him ever again but somewhere she still wanted to be his. Just his. Forever.

Back in HP Darji have found a reasonable boy for Geet. He have a good job. Middle class family. Enough money to look after her.... Maybe not enough to fulfill all her wishes but enough to make her happy. shoria. He is called shoria sing.

Geet was discharged the next day. She thanks Dr Armaan & disappears. Geet walked in to her house. The broken glass was there with her blood. She cleaned everything. Went to kitchen to make her self some food but everything was rotten. She had to through it way. She looks in to her safe. She still had enough money for 6 months. A good news. 6 months to look for another job. Geet took some money out and walks towards the shopping bazar.

Bazar was crowded. Full of people. Middle class and poor of course.
Geet- adab chaca ji. Geet smiles.
Chacha- adab beta. It's been one week since I have seen you. He smiles.
Geet- ji chaca ji. Just too much work. Ap kaise ho?
Chacha- good betia. What do you want to buy today.
Geet smiles & gives him the shopping list. She walked along the street. Walking. Good way to save money. As she was about to enter the house a big car stopped. Geet looks at the car. She knew instantly who it was. she started to panic. She just came out of hospital! She had no intention to go back again. She ran in to her house & closed the door. There was a knock. A knock! Geet started to shake. She was still holding the shopping basket. She puts it down and slowly opens the door. And there he was standing with his girlfriend. Tears already building up. Maan smirks seeing her in pain. Bit annoyed to be precise to see her alive.
Geet was shaken.
Sam- at last I managed to find you. She smiles. She was rather nice to be honest. She walks in without a invitation.
Maan- what a tatty house.
Geet- please. Could you leave.
Sam- we are not here to leave. We are here to offer you a job. My personal Designer.
Geet- I am sorry mam. I can't. I... I have a job.
Maan cuts Geet in the middle of her sentence- don't lie. We know you have left Kapoor.
Geet- no! Mam I still can't do your job. Geet was scared to hell with maans calmness. That's not like him. Since young whenever they met even in-front of someone he wouldn't stop physically abusing her.
Geet- please mam.
Sam- 2lak rupe a month. She snaps. Geet looks at her in shock. 2lak rupe! Max she earned in her lifetime was 20 thousand rupe.
Maan- good pay. One condition we... I mean specially me don't want to see your face from today on. Come round sams house or go anywhere with her but soon as I am there... I don't want you to you there at all. It taking me a lot of courage to talk to you f...
Sam snaps- stop being so rude. She won't when you are there. Fine. Now go. I will see you any minute.
Geet faintly smiles. With tears.
Sam- ignore him. He is always hot temper. Geet nodes.
Sam- so shall I say it's conform. Geet nodes again.
How could she say no... After all it's her love who asked for something for the first time. How could she possibly say no.
Sam- I want you to start from next month. Geet nodes.

Weeks have passed. She sarted her special Designee for sam while shoran sing paid a visit to Geet. He liked her instantly. Fell in love with her. Love at first sighed.... It was Geet. It's always her. But he wanted to wait. Wanted to save enough money for there wedding. To give her a good life while Geet wanted to do this sams job.... Save enough and leave enough for her parents & for rajjis wedding. She wanted to save enough so they don't have to work for money again.



Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

yayayyyyyyyyyyyyy me firsttt...........

maan is such a 🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
how can geet still love him???😭😭😭
but me stilll intrigued to see how they get married!!!!!😳
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow. Bechari Geet. When do I get to see Maan beg towards Geet?
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow loved it
i think the well wisher is armaan and god i really hate maan does he have some decency no way i dont think so he has any and god now this shoria singh
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Posted: 14 years ago
I wish i culd kill Maan
Armaan feels she is sweet n he dosent
He is such a ewww
Loved Geet's love for her parents
Lets c wat happens aage
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pushpi

wow. Bechari Geet. When do I get to see Maan beg towards Geet?


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i only started the story.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. Armaan is sweet.. hated maan's attitude.. cant wait for the next one..
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Posted: 14 years ago
liked it... 😛

oh gosh but why is maan so rude ...pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update....................but didnt like the fact that geet accepted the job bcoz maan asked her but who paid for her bills............

when will maan's attitude change...............

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