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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it..... Par dev ko geet se dur rakho...
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Posted: 14 years ago
ur ff is awsum dude...
continue soon, and
culd u plz pm me ?? 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: srupithipi

ur ff is awsum dude...
continue soon, and
culd u plz pm me ?? 😊

Thank u will add u 😊and am working on the next part so u will get it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing progressing Ayu 😃 👏
Yeh Dev bhi na 😆
Maan is getting jealous. Good point 😉
Poor Geet. She cant cope up with the moody Maan 😆

Cant wait for the next part.
Thanks.

Love

Humera 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Amazing progressing Ayu 😃 👏
Yeh Dev bhi na 😆
Maan is getting jealous. Good point 😉
Poor Geet. She cant cope up with the moody Maan 😆

Cant wait for the next part.
Thanks.

Love

Humera 😳

Thank u 😊 I am glad u liked it.....
it's coz of u all i am able to write so huge Clapapplause to u all ppl for motivating me and loving me
Ayu
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww Ayu you are too cute 😊
You derserve it hun coz you are doing an awesome job

Love your concept 👏 😳

Do update soon dear.

Love

Humera 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Looking forward to jealous Maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter-9
First day at khurrana construction

"The beginning is the most important part of the work."

Geet was late! It was her first day in KC and she was damn nervous she was regretting every second she wasted in the morning which resulted her in being late but when she rewinded all the incidents back a smile appeared on her face how Dev came in and played a prank on her and how Maan took care of her hand (she gently touched her burned hand) she still can feel his touch there she smiled.....

She reached Khurrana construction and was admiring the grand building which ostentatiously declared that we are the best she made her way through in when she noticed huge frames with pictures of khurrana's hanging on the corridor of the office It was the first time Geet saw Maan's father picture it was not even in the Khurrana mansion she notices the name Mr Vikram khurrana written in Big bold words...she noticed that Maan has got his masculine looks from him...she moves further to see Maan's photo hanging and she saw how elegant he looked like a Adonis but his eyes had the power to hypnotise any human soul and she felt it on her too she touched his name Mr. Maan singh Khurrana from her hands she was lost in her world when she heard someone from behind-

Geet seth Ma'am coffee ya chai 😆

(Geet turns back) Dev tum ho

Dev-Hmm main hoon aur kaun hoga,kabse tumhara intezaar kar raha hoon aur tum ab aayi hoo

Geet(surprised)-oh sorry par muje nahi pata that koi mera intezaar kar raha hoga(s miles)

Dev-uff tum bhi naa Geet sari batein yahi karogi ya andar bhi chalogi

Geet-haan mein toh bhul hi gayi chalo chalo

Dev-Maan bahut gusse mein hai pata nahi kya hua hai subah se sab pe cheekh raha hai

Geet( remembers he was little upset in the outhouse too)-hmmm,aur mein bhi late hoon

Dev(laughs)-acha toh tumhe pata chal gaya ki Maan ko late aane wale logo se saqt nafrat hai

Geet(was nervous now she didn't knew Maan itna punctual hai,she prays in her heart hey babaji aaj bacha lena bas...)

Geet enters the office as soon as she enters... she sees people dedicatedly working on their desks so this the Khurrana construction she said...

Yes ma'am said a voice from behind

Geet turned back...it was a guy who had a geeky look he wore spects and laughed in a strange way

Geet smiled and said Hii

Hello Ma'am.....I am Adi and i work here Maan sir told me about you..I am here to welcome you and help you

Geet –thank you Adi I am glad to meet you

Adi-Ma'am I will like U to meet Pinky also who is our receptionist

Geet-sure (puts a hand forward towards pinky who was standing behind Adi)

Hello Pinky

Pinky(stammers a little)-he..lloooo...Ma'am (and shakes geet's hand feebly Geet smiles)

Adi-Maan sir aapka intezaar kar rahe hai chaliye mein aapko unke pass le jata hoon

Geet-hmm.... Dev tum bhi chalo na

Dev-na bahi subah se uska mood aise hi kharab hai mein nahi ja raha abhi...tum mujhe call karna when you are free ok (leaves)

Geet wonders is everyone so scared of Maan

Adi leaves Geet right infront of Maan's cabin

Adi-Ma'am aap andhar jaiye mujhe kuch kaam hai (leaves)

Geet (nervous)-why is everyone scared of Maan is he that angry (enters Maan's cabin)

Maan was going through some files when she entered he looked really angry and irritated he slams the file down on his desk in anger when he notices Geet

Maan-Geet tum come in have a seat

Geet looks at him and sits on the seat

Maan-so how has your day turned out to be...I hope you had fun(sarcasm dripping from his every word)

Geet(was taken a back but she just said )-it has been good

Maan(even more irritated)-oh that's good...guess Dev played another prank on u (gives a wicked grin)

Geet was loosing her patience what was wrong with him she just entered KC it's her first day here and Maan is being so rude........

Geet-I am here to work Maan not enjoy pranks or joke(gets up to leave) if u will tell me where my cabin is i will like to start working

Maan was taken aback no one has ever spoken to him those ways in KC...

Maan-Your cabin is right next to mine...turns his back towards her and please close the door after you leave

Geet was hurt she left his cabin immediately shutting the door behind she tried really hard to hold back her tears but it was getting difficult with every step so she rushed to her own cabin...her tears were now unable to hold back so they started pouring out of her eyes drop after drop she sat teir on her chair trying hard to think what she did to make Maan so angry was it her or something else..................did he really cared how dare he mock at me.....I know what work means to me I am here just to fulfil my dad's dream and not to play around and have fun..she banged her fist on the desk on anger and it hurt her ouch she winced in pain

Maan who was sitting in the next cabin heard it he went towards the window he opens the blinds to see if everything was fine with Geet

He saw her resting her head on the back of the chair tears still pouring down her eyes....Maan felt guilty what was her fault he thought he was angry on shasha her head architect for making a huge flaw in the design of his new building...he was really angry on his behaviour...it was her first day Maan how could you hurt her closes his eyes in pain...

Precap-

I will apologise...I will make it up to her....😲😲😲

Hope u all like it and if u do plz do comment and hit the like button guys...😊😊 i love reading ur comments
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
maan angry
geet crying
cant wait 4 d next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
marvelous update pls cont soonnnnnnn sorry late comment busy my dear Happy V day

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