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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank u all for all ur lovely comments guys loved reading them 🤗thank u all for giving me so muc support updating next part for u all njoy
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CHAPTER-8
Geet Meets Dev
Hope is a pleasant acquaintance, but an unsafe friend.
Geet was tired and all she wanted to do after the long flight was to take a shower from hot water and doze off to sleep...when she reached the outhouse she was surprised the outhouse was pretty big and was decorated really well she had a look around but was too tired to explore her new home so she went straight up to her room....the room was really well decorated with red curtains and a huge bed...she didn't see her bags anywhere though she saw a huge almirah and walked towards it slided the doors open and.....was surprised to see all her clothes arranged and kept properly
she was happy but was wondering-kisna kara hoga ye..when the phone rang and she picked it up and heard dadi on the other side...
Geet beta outhouse mein sab thik hai na koi kami toh nahi hai..
Geet-nahi daadi sab thik hai bahut acha hai...thank u
Dadi –Aap phir shuru ho gayi hmm chalo humne toh sirf ye batane ko phone kara tha ki humne aap ke bags se sari cheezein nikal ke arrange kara di hai aap ko sab mil gaya naa
Geet (was smiling she was happy to see so much love for her)-Ji dadi mil gayi
Dadi –thik hai beta toh hum phone rakte hain agar koi jarurat ho toh call kar li jiyega (puts the phone down)
Geet takes a shower and changes in to her night suit and sleeps
Next morning 8:00 A.M
Everything was calm and peaceful the morning seemed like a bliss to Geet she woke up with a bright sunlight kissing her face she got up and inhaled the fresh air...
She went downstairs to make some coffee for her when she heard a knock on her door
She opens the door to see someone standing with a tray in his hand and wearing khurrana mansion's servant uniform
Servant-Dadi ne aapke liye chai bheja hai
Geet- ohh rakh do aur jao
Servant-unho ne kaha hai jab tak aap pi nahi leti mein yahi rahoo
Geet-kya...maine kaha naa rakh do aur waise bhi mein subah coffee leti hoon chai nahi(in an irritated tone)
Servant toh mein coffee bana deta hoon keeps the tray pushes Geet a little and goes straight to the kitchen..
Servant-coffee kaha hai
Geet suprised-tumhe pata hona chahiye
Servant-koi nahi aapko nai pata toh chaliye dhoondte hai
Geet (shocked & annoyed)-mujhe nahi pinni coffee tum jao yaha se
Servant-aise kaise (still looking for coffee)finally mil gayi
Puts a pan on stove puts milk and water
Geet was highly annoyed but was happy that he will make coffee and leave so that she would be able to get ready
Servant-cheeni kitni
Geet-ek chamach
Servant-bas ek
Geet- just put one spoon ok and don't ask questions
(the landline rings and she goes in living room annoyed)
Pagal kar diya hai mujhe (picks the phone)
Helloo... Geet
Geet realises its Maan
Maan –Hellooooooooooo
Geet-Haan Maan(still in an annoyed tone)
Maan-kya hua tum pareshan kyu laga rahi hoo
Geet-ji aisi toh koi baat nahi hai bas wo servant
Maan(shocked)-servant..kaun servant
Geet-jise dadi ne chai leke bheja tha
Maan(even more shocked)-kya nahi toh dadi ne toh kisi ko nahi bheaja...wo to tumhara wait kar rahi hai breakfast ke liye
Geet-kyaaaaa (lil loudly)
Maan-Geet tum daro matt mein abhi aata hoon(cuts the phone and runs)
Geet goes back to the kitchen and sees that the servant was still there playing with kitchen knife ...(servant sees Geet)
Servant-bas 5min and the coffee will be ready
Geet (wondering is he planning to kill me with the knife arrey kahi coffee mein toh kuch nahi hai...)
Servant(walks towards Geet the knife was still in his hand )
Geet was nervous she moves a step back and grabs the belan in her hand(prepared to face him )
Servent Ma'am do u want something to eat too...
Geet-nahi kuch nahi chahiye,coffee bhi nahi
Servant-arey kaise nahi aap humari mehmaan hai aur coffee (goes back) to ban gayi hai
Geet to herself
Kya soch rahi hai geet paka coffee mein kuch hai kuch kar kuch kar
Servant comes near her with the coffee in his hand and geet was scraed kya karu kya karu she turns back suddenly and the servant loses his balance and the coffee falls on Geet's hand
Geet screams-ouchhhhhhhhhhhhh
Maan who has now reached near Outhouse hears Geet's scream and runs inside he sees Geet on ground and in pain...and the servant was holding her hand......
He holds the servant from back and turns him towards him so that he can knock his senses off
Par stops....
Dev tum yaha kya kar rahe hoo
Geet(still in pain)-Dev kaun Dev ye wahi servant hai ye tab se muje pareshan kar raha hai
Maan(turns towards Geet)-Geet ye servant nahi mera dost Dev hai He is a partner in KC.
Geet-Kyaaa...Then (sees towards Dev)what is he doing here and aise kyun kaha servant hai and pata nahi kya kya
Dev-burst out in laughter haha..haha
Darr gayi naaa...haha
Geet (little angry )-nahi mein nahi darri
Dev-acha(smiles this time) pehle toh I am sorry actually dadi ne tumhare bare mein bataya tha iss liye mein yahan tumse milne aa gaya par
phir socha aise hi mila toh tum mujhe yaad nahi rakh hogi iss liye ye naughty plan banaya and now I can bet ki tum mujhe zindagi bhar nahi bhulogi(gives a flirty smile to geet)
Geet (smiles too)-hmm toh ye baat thii..par tumhare naughty plan ne mera haath jala diya (makes sad face then and smiles)...
Dev holds his ears and says sorry to Geet
Both Geet and Dev start laughing and Maan was seeing everything and for some strange reason he didn't liked Geet's laughing and enjoying with Dev....
Maan(wapas in his attitude tone)-Ho gaya tumhara Dev toh chalo dadi bula rahi hai tumhe
Dev-mujhe ok thik hai chalo (walks out of the door leaving Geet and Maan behind)
Maan was about to say something to Geet when Dev enters back and holds Geet's hand and says Dev Singhania naam yaad rakhna
(turns and says out aloud) by the way you are cute Geet...
Geet was shocked and blushed when Dev called her cute but she also noticed Maan's irritation but didn't get it why he is irritated....
Geet was still feeling the burning sensation on her hands,
Maan notices it and gets some Ice from the refrigerator he holds her hand gently and starts applying the ice so that the pain goes away
Geet was touched to see his concern and care for her
Maan-Geet does it still burn
Geet-nodes for a no
Maan-stupid Dev ye bhi koi mazak hota hai(still applying the ice on her hand)
Geet-koi nahi he didn't burned my hand intentionally....
See it's completely ok now(shows her hand to him )
Maan was now more annoyed he couldn't bear it
Maan-hmm good (gets up all of a sudden)
Then you must get ready and join us for break-fast soon
Geet (was shocked again)-hmm will
Maan (walks towards the door but stops before exiting)-Geet waise aaj tumhara Khurrana construction mein pehla din hai
Hope you won't be late on the very first day...
Geet was shocked and she couldn't understand Maan's mood abhi toh thik they abhi kya ho gaya
And itney rude kyu ho gaye...
"Hope you won't be late on the very first day"(murmurs to herself and goes to her room sees the time and screams)
Geet late ho gayi tu..get ready idiot
Precap-First day at khurrana construction
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93
Awesome update
loved it
amazing part
lolz dev as servant.hehe
awhh loved how maan cared for geet
and put ice in her hand
hehe loving the jealous maan
WOW geet at KC
cant wait
update soon
thankz

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Posted: 14 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

Awesome update
loved it
amazing part
lolz dev as servant.hehe
awhh loved how maan cared for geet
and put ice in her hand
hehe loving the jealous maan
WOW geet at KC
cant wait
update soon
thankz

thank u 😃 now that bring's a huge smile on my face will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwww awesomeeeeeeee it was realllllyyyyyyy
cool d way dev scared geet god
i thought it was a stalker

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rsroopali

wowwwwwwwww awesomeeeeeeee it was realllllyyyyyyy

cool d way dev scared geet god
i thought it was a stalker


Haha glad u liked it 😆 Stalker next time
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97
awesome update ayu...please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
awesome update
loved it
dev came as a servant
hahah
love maan not liking their closeness
aww loved the way maan cared fro her hand
cant wait 4 da first day at KC
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!
maan was so jealous!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update.. liked dev's prank n maan's jealousy... continue soon n thanx a lot for the om..

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