HUM TUM, MJHT FF, CH:9, 23/3 - Page 18

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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww sweet song with sweet Romance...
superb.....
love Mayur
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Posted: 14 years ago

Oki thts second part to the previous one 'I was typing tht moment so didn't updated tht time..next part maybe 'it will b late 'cause now the weding starts n I want it to b heavenly'so I want to work on tht'..n write now im nt my self of writing sumthing 'so pls bear me '.

He droped bth of them at home n went to his

Shilpa: hello'kya haal hain..sab thik thak

Mayank: mein kya jang per gaya tha'mjhy kya hua hai..sab thik hai

Shilpa: tu tera chehra 1000 watt k bulb ki tarah kyun roshan hai'..

Mayank: guess

Shilpa: kya guess'ja ker soo ja..subha jaldi uth 'pandit ko la'.humain 12 bajay Nupur k ghar jana hai'.

Mayank: kya..kyun

Shilpa: shadi ke date fix kerny 'samhjy dulhy raja

Mayank: maa'tum ko kasa pata k samrat aur gunjan'.ohhh us ny tum ko phne bhi kerdiya'.mjhy khabi kuch nhi batay dayti 'nt fair'sadly

Shilpa: us ny batay k tu ny 'ek hi baat hai

Placing his head in her lap'.

Shilpa: tu khush hai'.

Mayank: he smiled closing his eyes'hmmm

Shilpa: dkh mayank'us ko koi takleef nhi hona chahy ..woh sab kuch choor ker teray pyar k lyan arahi hai'..us k khabi is baat k regret nhi hona chaiy

Mayank: array maa tum tension na loo'woh tu bachpan se us ghar k chorny k plan bana rahi hai'.

Shilpa: hits her'tu nhi sudharay ga'.dkh mayank

Mayank: maa'don't u trust me..or u dnt trust my feelings..tumhara beta hoon'pyar k mamlaay mein tumhary jasa '..tum ny baba k jaga un k baad bhi kisi ko nhi di..aur ani zindagi wasay hi jee jasa woh chahty thy ..hasty hooay'.phir mein kasay us k sath bora ker sakta hoon

Shilpa: mera beta bara hogaya hai

Mayank: per maa..mera tu socho..us nautanki ko mein 24/7 kasay sahoo ga'.mein tu gaya

Shilpa: she hits her playfully'.

Mayank: lov ya maa

Shilpa: uuffuuu'aj tu maa per bara pyar arha hai

Mayank: kya matlab ' moving his head up n looking at her..ap ko lagata hai mein ap se pyar nhi kerta'.mein kahta nhi hoo is ka matlab yeah hai'..

Shilpa: aayy'maro gi

Mayank: tab se maar hi rahi hoo'

Shilpa: humain buhat achy se pata hai'tu kahy na kahay'.acha ab ja soo ja'.asa lag raha hai tere bidai hai'aur mein abhi bolo gi 'latay rahy mayu'phir tjh se asay baat ho na hoo

Mayank: maaaa'. He said dramtically n hugged her'.n bth burst into laughter

Shilpa: so Nupur meri hoi

Bauji: bulkul'mjhy buhat khushi hai k Myank jasa larkay ny Nupur kopasand kiya

He just smiled n looked at Nupur was fuming with anger'he just touch his collar

Shilpa: array ap kasi baat ker rahy hai'mjhy tu yeah samhj nhi aata is sadu k Nupur jasi pyari laki kasay mil gai'

Now this was time for her victory..n he glared at his mom in anger

Shilpa: mein pandit ko sath lai hoon'.sadi k date fix kerlay

Bauji: bulikul

Shilpa: agar ek ke jaaga mein ap ki doono betiyaan apnu kerlo tu

Bajui: matlab'

Shilpa: mein samrat ke baat ker rhi hoon..ap ny kya socha us baray mein'.us ki koi family tu hai nhi so '.mein hi us ki taraf se

Mayank: aur samrat gunjan ko khus rekhy ga 'is ki guarantee mein lay ta hoon

Bauji: he stood up n went to gunjan

Are u sure of wht u want to do..

Gujan: she nooded in yes..

Bauji: thik hai'jasay yeah loog chahy

Samrat: was quite n bit sad ..he didn't trust him sum where

Mayank: dnt worry'woh tjhy nhi janaty'prove him u deseve her'he side hugg him

Samrat: he smile'.thnks bro'I 'll

Mayank: aayy..no bro wro'acha'humara relation wohi rahy ga..samjha'

Samrat: tu tjhy kya laga 'k ajanak mein tjhy bhaiya bolao ga'.chal'haat

KYAAAA''.

All shouted in course'..10 din'

Mayank: itna jaldi

Shilpa: whispering in his ear'tujhy buhat jaldi thin a'ab ker

Mayank: maa yeah tumhara plan tu nhi hai na'tum ny pandit ko bribe kiya

Shilpa: yahi sun na baki rah gaya tha'..sasural walo k samany maroo kya

Bauji: yeah tu bhuhat jaldi hai..

Pandit: phir 2 saal baad k moohrrat hai

Shilpa: itna intezar mjh se nhi hoga'.aur is ko koi bahroosa nhi mukaar jay ga

Mayank: maaaa'

Bauji beta tumhai koi problem tu nhi

Mayank: nhi'but ek baar Nupur aur gunjan se phooch layain

Bui: tum dono khud j ker poch lo'.wasay bhi ab direct shdi per hi milna'..humaray yaha tu ek mth pehly se larka larki ek dossray ko nhi dkhty'.ya tu din hi 10 hai

Samrat: whispering in mayank's ear'in k bus chaly tu shadi k baad bhi na dekhny day'chal uth ..dude'.mil ker aty hai'

Mayank: chal'warna yeah option bhi close kerday gi ..

Shilpa: han han jao'

They bth just rushed away fron there leaving there adults to talk abt the preparation

Mayank: gunjan ..samrat bola rah hai 'mil lo us se'

He said very seriously '.he cam upto her n stand facing the out view near the window

Nupur: kya hua itny pareshan kyun hoon'.

Mayank: bauji k lyan 10 din buhat kam hain ..tu

Nupur: KYA'matlab 2 saal'.sadly

Mayank: hmmm'.

Nupur: she knew how he felt he was planning everything so excitedly'. Koi baat nhi mayank'do saal hi tu hain'.dkhna pata bhi nhi chaly gay'..she puts her hand on his hs shoulder'.

Mayank: looked at her n smiled'.n grap her hand to twirl her around to back hug her'.

Ms Nupur bhushan ap is naam ko enjoy kerlain'..nearing to her ear'.kyun k dus din bad tu ap MRs.Nupur Mayank Sharma honay wali hain'..by God'

She twirl around

Nupur: tum tu na meri jan loo gay'..she hugged him..i m soo happy

Mayank: per mein buhat gaam mein hooon'meri bachelorship

Nupur: gai ..mayank shrama'gai'ap larkiyoon ko dekhn paap hai

Mayank: koi nhi extra marital affair bhi koi cheez hai'

Nupur: ghar se bahr nikalo doo gi ..n ur mom will me on my side

Mayank: woh tu abhi se hain'.congrats dear

Nupur: congrats to u too

Mayank: itna rooka soohka wish 'he lean down to kiss her'..she placed her finger on his lips'

Nupur: no romance till wedding

Mayank: thts nt fair yaar

Nupur: itni chaldi thi tu kisi American se kerty shadi

Mayank: gud idea'shadi k bad implement kero ga

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: romance wala dear

Nupur: blushing n pleading..maaayankk

Mayank: acha nhi taang kerta ya ha aao'..u want anything special in arrangements or anything in weding 'oye how u want ur room to be..aur jo kuch necessities u want ..list banao aur mjhy ya maa ko day do..taky u wont hai any problem

Nupur: mjhy kuch nhi chaiay ..aur baqi sab mein anty ko bata doo gi'.

Mayank: asa kya hai jo tu maa ko batao gi

Nupur: mayank tum mjhy phir se taang ker raho hoo

Mayank: acha'.gunjan se baat kerlo 'woh shayad thora daari hoi hoo'us k lyan yeah sab buhat achanak hai..

Nupur: tum itny sweetu kyun ho

Mayank: technical fault ho ab kuch nhi hosakta

Nupur: sadu

Mayank: ab tum deicde kerlo mein kya hoon

Nupur: sardu sahib ( I hope I spelld right)'..tumhara tu promotion hogaya ,,,sadu se sadu..sahahb

Mayank: Nupur..ab tu mjhy tang ker rhi hoo '.

Gunjan: itna sab itna jaldi..

Samrat: u don't trust me'..

Gunjan: asa nhi hai..bs I though shayad tumhar family

Samrat: dkho gunjan meray itny achy moment ko spoil maat kero'mein un ko nh I bolao ga'I don't want her to b here

Gunjan: per ..

Samrat: bs pls gunjan..

Gunjan : acha thik hai ''.

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome update yarr..
u r so so good in humour..
seriously u have great writing skills..
love the part.and enjoyed the part..
mayu k to waqai promtion ho gya..lol
superb update dear..
eagerly waiting for their marraige...
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Heyyyyyyyy Fizaaaaaaaaaaa
u updated this ff so soon
By GOD- maza agaya
thnax a lot jaani

awwwwwww beautiful update
Shilpa aunty and mayak convo was awesome
i alwz lovved their mother-son relationship........
shilpa mom is the best mom of the world


haye mayur shaadi- wo bhi 10 din ki andar
yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i m very happy for my mayur
la la la la la la la

jaldi karo mujhe mayur ki shaadi main jana hai
fantastic update fizu
loved it so much
keep it up
Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Fiza
Beautiful update🤗
i loved Mayur scenes....
very beautifully written
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
just loved it..........love mayank-shilpa convo.........actually loved whole update..........
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Posted: 14 years ago

very very nice update .

lovely
truely adorable.
mayur and sajan ki shaddi in 10 days .
it gonna be fun to read the wedding parts of sajan and mayur
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Posted: 14 years ago
mayur marriage!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i wish this fulfills every bit of unfairness that was showed in the serial.
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Posted: 14 years ago
😊wow beautiful part
mayur scenes were cute
😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
reserved

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finally i am here to unres 🤣🤣
mai to page number hi bhul gayi thi jahan maine reserve kiya tha🤣
dekho marna mat...meri galti nahi hai...😳
par dekho maine promise rakhi aaj edit kar hi diya😆

ok now coming to the updates
it was awesome..!!!.....just so so romantic😳😳
hayye mai to mayur dream land mai kho gayi thi...😍
mujhe MJHT ki khuda jaane wale episode ki yaad dila di api..!!😳
hayye...mere samne pura scene chalraha tha...😉

mayur and sajan getting married..
hayye...kya baat hai...😳
yea FF na mujhe har pal mjht ki yaad dila ta hai...😃

pls pls update soon
and also ardhangini...mujhe to uske next part ke sapne arahein hain🤣
continue soon😳

love
tasfia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago

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