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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

it was totally a mayurish part.......

loved it to the core..the way there were pulling gunjan to samrat was sooo funny..
i was laughing reading their convo.....
and the beach scene was sooo cute..
aww....they kissed............and their convo shows the depth of their relation.....
awesome..pls continue soon dear,....
and yaaaaayy..am the 1st to comment..am so happy..
love ya..tc

after sooo long dear..gr8 to cya first here
thank dear ...i m always touched with ur coments
n do take care of ur self..ur special for us....
thnks for feeling the purity
luv ya 2
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys

Thnku so much for ur love at previous chapter…..

The bst is tht u found the romance pure n serene…..if at any point u all find me going out of the way pls stop me….

It's the first time I think I have added so much of tht ..so I myself nt sure of it .. n even I m nt tht gud at writng romance too much

Second thing I love u all for … is "u write , v love whtevr u write" ths statement of most of u made my writing worthy….u just cant imagine how I was feling reading ths …thnku so much …..

N HUM TUM is the title track so it will cum but later….

Today I have done sumthing I was too reluctant of doing messing up with KHUDA JANEY….

Updating ths n another chapter 2day n 2morow….thn the update may be delayed as I'll jump to Ardhangini than….

I hope u like it

Luv ya

FIza

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Posted: 14 years ago

CHAPTER: 6

He cuped her face n trace her lips with his fingers'.before capturing them with his in kiss'.he made it as passionate as he can'.to asure how blessd he felt to find her in his life'she responded it back reciprocating the same feeling '..broking aprt he kissed her forehead

Mayank: I love you Nupur'.i hope I can fill ur every dream

Nupur: ur my only dream mayank'

The rain start 'n they look up surprisingly'n chuckled'.true rain has always being there to celebrate there togetherness'.he smile n soft colloide his forehead with her'

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe hi Aake Rukhta HoonKya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai

Samarat bow down n ask her hand'she gave into his grip'n he pulled her towards him'.colliding her to his chest'she shyly put her n hands on his shoulder n he slided his on her waist'..

Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab SeTum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se

Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua

Mayank ask Nupur to dance through his eyes'she looked up in " I 'll see"'

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe hi Aake Rukhta HoonKya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se

Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..

Smarat'..through her away griping her one hand '.n twirl her round'n round '..he thn pulld her close n lean down trying to kiss her..to wch she run away out in balcony'

N twirl round in joy

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa HoonKhuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..

Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..

Mayank'lookd at her deeply ..n caught her waist n make her fly in air'she chuckled with joy'

He slowly slided her down'look in her eyes..making her skip her heart beats''

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi kDhum Ke Mein Nishano PeChaloon Rukoon Ishaare Pe.. Following gunjun out , he just couldn't take off he eyes from her'.she was busy enjoyin the GOD blessings'her eyes where close'couldn't see the passion cuming her way '. Tu Kahe To Khwab Ka Bana Ke Mein Bahana SaMila Karoon Saraane Pe.. She opend her arms to welcum the happiness'he slided his one hand around her waist n remove her hairs from shoulder to place his lips there'.she clutch hs hand Hoo'Tumse Dil Ki Baathe Seekhi Tumse Hi Yeh Raahe SeekhiTum Pe Mar Ke Mein To Jee Gaya.. She turn around to hugged him tight'he to embrace her in his arms'she move her head up a bit to catch sum air'he digged her head in her hairs to take in the fragrance of his love' Khuda Jaane Ke... Mein Fidaa HoonKhuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya...Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..

Nupur was dancing in rain with open arms'.mayank came from behind n slided his hand softly from her shoulder to her fingers n mingled his with her'.hugging her from back

Dil Kahe Ke Aaj Chupa Lo Tum Panaahon MeinKe Dar Hai Tumko Kha Dunga Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar LagaKe Dar Hai Mein To Ro Dunga.. He move his head inside her n kissed her ear lobe'down her neck'Karthi Hoon Sau vaaday Tumse Baande Dil Ke dhagay Tumse, Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kyan Hua.. She turn around n looked in his eyes only to find oozing love for her'she kept looking in his eyes'n slowly move fwd to took him in her arms.. Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa HoonKhuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda

Both of them where lost n quite'the only sound was of ther hearts ..wch was beating fast'.

RING RING

He ignore it'doesn't want to spoil there moment'

RiNG RING

It ring them back to there senses'he slowly broke apart' but nt complelty'with one hand he kept Nupur in his embrace 'she rested her head on his chest'.he took out his cell'n looked at the number.."maa"'.he clam down n caught his breath '

Mayank: haan maaa'tum thik tu hoona'

Shilpa Anty: mein tu thik hoon'tu kya ker raha hai

Mayank; mein'mein kuch nhi 'bs waoh

Shilpa anty: uffu..mera matlab hai..ghar wapas aajo..ab..nupur k bauji bhi pareshan horahy hongay'itni taeez barish bhi horahi hai..un dono k ghar choro aur wapas aay'

Mayank: han bss 'I m cuming..he hanged up'chalo ghar chalein'

Nupur: hmm'.samrat ko tu phone kero..ya msg kerdo

Mayank: very funny 'mein apni maa k PHONE ignore ker raha tha'woh mera msg dkhy ga'tang kerta hoon us ko

He dialed hs no..wch he pick up a bit late'he was in same position

Sami: hello

Mayank: kya hua'kya gunjan ny buhat mara'y ru sounding breathless'he laughed inside..n Nupur joined him..he signal him too low her volume'

Sami: nhi..mein tu..kaha '

Mayank: kya nhi'mein ..tu 'kaha'.bolna bhi bhool gaya tu

Sami: asay kuch nhi hai acha

Mayank: phir kasa hai

Sami: tu ny phone kyun kiya

Mayank: hoo tu beta'...mein ny apna image dhaaao per laga ker ap ki girlfriend date tak pochaci hai na'us ko sahi salmat ghar bhi jana hai'aur woh bhi mjhy layker jana hai..tu agar ap k romance khatam hogaya ho tu hum ajaain

Sami: kyun tum dono ko aur time chaiy tha??'.

Mayank: humari tension maat lo..apna batao'im cuming in 5 mins..bye..

Chaly..ghar ja ker maa ko bhi bata hai k ab sab set hai'

Nupur: hmm'mayank..woh kab tak

Mayank: kya kab tak..abhi ghar jana hai Nupur'raat zayada hogai hai

Nupur: mera woh matlabnhi tha

Mayank: tu kya tumhara yeahi rokhny k irada hai..

Nupur: uffu mayank'mein poch rahin hoon shadi kab tak..idoit

Mayank: tumhain kab kerni hai'he leaned down to look in her eyes

Nupur: she lowered her eyes n blushed

Mayank: abhi maat kahana'asai halat mein mein tum se shadi nhi kerny wala'pointing at her

Nupur: mayank''OMG'hum asay ghar kasay jay gay

Mayank: array baba ghar jatay jaty dry hojay ga'.aur itna tu tum ghar k andar jaty bhi bheeg jao gi..ab chalo..itni tension na..lo wasay I dnt mind u can stay at my house'gujan ko sami chor day ga

Nupur: tum ghar chalo

Mayank: kis k

Nupur: Maaayannk'

He droped bth of them at home n went to his

part 2
Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*edited*

oopsie I forgot that I reserved here
soorry fiza [holding ears]

ok... so back to the update
it was a total 😃😃😃😃😃😃 update
Mayu was shooooo shweet😳.... and Samrat😆

thnx for the pm...🤗
and wen r u updating?😈
Edited by jiya_angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaa
baas itna sahi romance
maine tou socha kuch der aur chalegi-lekin nehi
shilpa aunty ka phn ane ki kya jarurat thi???

But BY GOD- it was really really very nice
the song, dance , rain and our mayur - GOSH everything just perfect
i loved this update- i loved their sweet romance
Baat kya hai fiza ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ap itna romantic kaise baan gaye????

lovely update fiza
just fantastic
loved it so much
do update next part soon



Edited by -Faria- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update

thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


Fizaaaaaaaaaaaaa
baas itna sahi romance
maine tou socha kuch der aur chalegi-lekin nehi
shilpa aunty ka phn ane ki kya jarurat thi???

But BY GOD- it was really really very nice
the song, dance , rain and our mayur - GOSH everything just perfect
i loved this update- i loved their sweet romance
Baat kya hai fiza ji!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ap itna romantic kaise baan gaye????

lovely update fiza
just fantastic
loved it so much
do update next part soon



faruuu,....
yaar kya chapter 3 daafa parhti hoo..itni dair se wait ker rhin hoon edit kero....
sharm kerly..thori se hi sahi...aur kitna romance...meray ghar sharm mein sab kuch beeh jay gaa
thnku soooo much dear🤗..glad u liked it
im so relivd u found it perfect
n abt romance 😳😳 sab bata dooo😉😆
jokes apart kuch naya try kerny k mood tha...bs....but yeah kam buhat muskil hai yaar ....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

faruuu,....
yaar kya chapter 3 daafa parhti hoo..itni dair se wait ker rhin hoon edit kero....
sharm kerly..thori se hi sahi...aur kitna romance...meray ghar sharm mein sab kuch beeh jay gaa
thnku soooo much dear🤗..glad u liked it
im so relivd u found it perfect
n abt romance 😳😳 sab bata dooo😉😆
jokes apart kuch naya try kerny k mood tha...bs....but yeah kam buhat muskil hai yaar ....

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Baat baata de - main sun rahi hu
baccho log tum apna apna kaan(ear) bandh kar lo
main & Fiza kuch adult baate kar rahe hai.LOL
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

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Baat baata de - main sun rahi hu
baccho log tum apna apna kaan(ear) bandh kar lo
main & Fiza kuch adult baate kar rahe hai.LOL

tu aj sach mein maar kahy gi mjh se......
🤣EmbarrassedEmbarrassed
kash kuch hota batany k lyan
kya yaar raat k 12 bajay Gali mein aj chand nikla sun rahin hoon...
how romantic na
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fiza,
it was nice........par maan nahi bhara..........kitna chotu sa romance.......aur usme bhi half portion sajan ka!!😔
not fair.........thoda bada update likh deti to tera kya jata!!!🤣
bt d update was really nice.
song was really gud..........suitable to d situation.
u knw.......its a sweet coincidence that it was raining heavily outside n m reading ur romantic update.
wahhh.........maja aa gya!!!
by God........post valentine barish k sath Mayur romance ka maja hi kuch aur hota hai😉
bt Shilpa aunty was kabab me haddi this time🤣
sayank convo was very funny.
love entire update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.
par next time badawala update chaiye.......warna😈

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