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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#161

awesoemmmmeee part

loved it, soooooo romantic

continue soon

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459718

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Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Fizza amazing update hun, the romance bits were super sweet....totally adorable..actually to think about it any scene with MN is tooooooo adorable!😳😆😆

Sajan was also cute, but i loved that shilpa aunty because the third person buts its okay romance ke liye bahut time hai!!😆......Samrat and Mayank talk was nice!😛

Superb update but thora chota tha?? what say!😆

Sajjal

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

So romantic part

I love it

I really love your writing style

keep it up cont soon

Thanks for Pm

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Fizuuuuu i agree with faria...Like nupur said, 'Bas itna sa hi romance'... And u remember na what mayank answered 'are jaogi nahi to surprise kaise dunga', yaad aaya...So we want that surprise vo bhi filled with romance...Itni si baarish mein mann nahi bheega...And i know u can bhaagaofy us with cats and dogs rain...😆😆
Par jitna sa hi tha bohut cute tha...Specially the second stanza..😉😍😍
And i loved the ending...Mayank ne to samy ko apni teasing se hi maar dala...😆
Now i want a grand shaadi of mayur with full of romance and less sajan...😆😆..Dnt mind...

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#165

wonderful update...luved mayur scene..wish v could gt sum scene in mjht .... 👏

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aswathy

@sreevijayan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#166

very sweet update dear..

loved it..

pls continue soon........................

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#167

😊lovely part

loved the song

loved mayur scenes

continue soon 😊

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

lovely. wish it was long.

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drmaha

@drmaha

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

oh God .......wht a update....😊
but fiza its too short update.....😔
song squel was awsome.......but the song scene should have been more longer.........😉
whn will u update nxt part.......?
i think hum tum aur bhi aachay se define karoo means mun tum k scenes hnay chayei aur bhi......, kch interesting,funny.....etc........