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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#821

awwwwwwwesum pprt
Update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Eagerlyyyyy waitin
Thanxx for d pm

Edited by tehzeeb25 - 14 years ago

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anum ghouri

@anum ghouri

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#822

ok that was 'HOT😉 loved it..
each and everything was written so well THUMBS UP for that👍🏼
keep it up!!

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#823

WOW !!!!!!! simply WOW !!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 pl continue soon :))

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yongshin

@yongshin

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#824

part was worth a wait...

OMG after reading this i m in heaven...can t wait for more

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#825

hiiiiiiiiiiiii

awesome update

loved it totally

loved ArSh

sooooooooooooo much passion

loved da drunk shilpa

loved da song

mindblowing

cant wait 4 more

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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Zahra

@Xiahtic-5

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#826

Riduuuuuu 🤗 i am so so so sorry yara i knw i am editing my comment after one week but yaar i have reason seriously will tell u whn we talk okay but again yaar so sorry

Now juz shut up how can so you say you are worst writer mean see how much people are loving your ff your concept seriously even after thhis you are thinking like i am so disappointed at you now listen to me carefully you have a talent of writing you are the best writer yaar

Coming to the part hayyee i have no words to tell you how much sizzling this part was full of romance and hot scenes of ArSh man this was definitely the hottest part i have ever read the way you potray their feelings and all that it is fantastic yaar bloody hell this was awesome part i am in love with it and i can't tell you how many tym i read this part hm well i can like this since last week before going to sleep and after waking up i used to read the part everyday that is how much i love this ff this part was surely wonderful.

Armaan character is wht i am loving in this you know why because you have given different avatar to his character and i am so loving it the way he is obssesed by her how he feel abt her whn he touch her how you describe it i must say it is great

Shilpa character is very naive and i can clearly see where your mind is coming from abt her character yes totally different one i can say at the start she will feel this way but in all this she is getting more obsessed with him

ArSh story is going great yaar i love their bedroom n dinner talk finally they both know that the other one is engaged and man i love their expressions whn they got to knwo ooh jealousy is in the air why do i have this feeling that Muski said things bcz she wanted to knwo their expressions anyways but i must these two scenes was amazing i specially love the line where he held his hand and said let the world see whom u truly belong to

Coming to the song hayyee memories yaar great great memories do you know that Shona herself chreo that song yh and waow this is so KaSh song zara zara touch me oooooooooooooo i am so inlove with it. You definitely are going to give me a heart attack man that song description on ArSh was HOTTTTTTT that was so sizzling yaar really you wrote in details wht they did in the song haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lalalalallalalala man i can so imagine KaSh on it bcz they are the only one who can give expression n do this scene man you rocked the song

☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
This happened to me while reading the part and also after it man so so hot

Now don't say anything to me i have very good reasons okay now plzzzzzzzzzz dont be lazy like me and continue the next part soon na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz you are my baby Ridu na and you will listen to me na you love me na and if u do continue the part extremly soon okay luv u

Edited by tzahra - 14 years ago

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angullgrl91

@angullgrl91

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#827

omggg! awesome part!!

i was waiting for so longg for you continue! LOLL

cant wait to see what happens in the morning!

continue soon! and thanks for the pm!

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#828

Hey Rida, ur all part till now were just awesome... talking about this part it was just superb.. this is the first time i am commenting and just want to say that u r an awesome, superb and excellent writer...

plzz continue soon and dont forget to pm me ur 4th os as i would like to read it..:)

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arooshi

@arooshee

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#829

just wow girl
it was hot ,sizzling
song sequence was just fab
continue soon
dont forget to pm me

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#830

ok i c finally the beast mght change into a human...

frankly i thought shilpa wd do some childsh act aftr getting drunk and he wd FEEL for her...but..alas...the beast only knws how to lust...crap....

acha lstn...plz maki the story lil dynamic..i mean enugh of lusting...the story shd move along W*H lust...frm the past few epis all thts happening is their obsession towards each other..

its tym the story takes a turn..otherwise it mght get monotonous......thats what i felt...

newaz it was ...well...a looooooooooooooooooong one..thanx...it wasneverthless highly sensual....