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Afrin

@_Afrin_

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#801

res........
BTW do PM me the 4th OS plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz........................😉
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OMG Rida it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooo hottttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!
I am still blushing yaar...................☺️ 😳.........................
lol anyways the part was awesome............................awwwww both were so jealous when muskan revealed about Riddhima and Sid......................u showed their vulnerability beautifully..................
now Arman moved one step ahead.....now he at-least know He only doesnt lust over her...............he want her in every way..................and he thinks that she only belongs to him...............though indirectly this is and indication of love beyond limits..................
and nice song selection....................it was the best for the situation..............purane yaad taja ho gaye.................😍😍😍...............(now I have to watch this song of KaSh again😍)
I loved the way u r developing this story.......................
now waiting for Arman's next move................ohhh I love this whole concept of angle with devil....😆
cont super soon...............................thanx for the pm......................
luv
Afrin

Edited by _Afrin_ - 14 years ago

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Neha

@Neha_J

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#802

Wowwwwwwww
Gosh u made us wait so much for this part !!!!!!
But i can say the part was much more worth than the wait, finally things have started to fall at right places.
I hope both of them realize their love for each other and Armaan's obsession turns into love hopefully soon.

Till now you have explained both their POV's brilliantly as demanded by their respective character, whether it was shilpa's vulnerability,her confused state of mind or Armaan's obsession.
Continue soon and do pm me the OS as well [ 4th part ]
tc

lots of luv,
Neha

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517780

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#803

rida, i love u

i love u too much

ur ff is fantastic. ur way of writing is beautiful

u have expressed each and every feeling of armaan and shilpa beautifully

their jealousy, their feelings for each other

they so want each other but circumstances r not letting them

zara zara touch me ,kash song

awesome song

i cant wait for armaan mallik to make shilpa his

plz ccontinue soon

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tulsi agarwal

@spicyheart

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#804

omggg i loved the part

it was super hot n sexy

wonder wats armaan gonna do

do continue super soon

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#805

WOW WOW WOW!

Im left speechless, this part was just beyond the limits of anything..LOL

Truly beautiful..mezmirising..hot..romantic...PASSIONATE..and just PERFECT! Youre doing a great job at expressing their emotions as well as their actions...im glad that they are finally admitting to themselves that they need each other..though it'll take some time to confess but atleast the initial stage has been passed. And finally both of them know about the others situation, so now the story will get even more interesting :) And im actually liking Armaan now, hes finally falling for her innocence and not just lust :) So hurray! Youve done a great job with this part and continue soon!

And also, thank you sooo soo much for writing this ArSh ff...it takes me into a whole new world of JUST KASH <3 Miss them and LOVE THEM <3

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anjali

@katsmeow

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#806

hey amazing part yaar i guess sab khe jhatke forced u to wrte sooo much bt i luved it dooo wrte quicker & longer😆 im glad armaan realized zat he is nt jst lusting for shilpa plzzzz cnt soooon im dying to read further & haan thnks for the pm

luv u

anjali

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shaaz_91

@shaaz_91

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#807

hey

wow.......well dis was worth waitin 4 sooooo long
it was wonderful n beautiful n hot n passionate n wat not
finally armaan realised his feelings apart frm lust
cont soon

tc
shaaz