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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#771

lovely update.....

loved maan's pov....

continue soon....

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Shalve

@Shalve

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#772

superb....awesome.... what will happen next... please update the next part soon....

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#773

oh yaar reet..............i just loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved

loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved

loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved

loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved loved

this update..................

i just comp enjoyed this update...............

thanks for clearing it that geet heared guru only when he shoved her into the car..............

right first thing first.....................thanks for such a longggggggggggggg update..............love u for that....

geet thinking abt all the possibility and then her instinct abt chief-maan-guru...........awesome......no words u just explained so detailed abt everything.............

maan's monologue abt everything.................first time maan was thinking abt it in diff angle and that he wanted her no matetr wat and the stupid mistakes which he did that geet got her way to know that he is the chief..............yeh aank micholi ka khel kab khatam hoga in dono ke beech.............

i seriously hate dev😡 now to the core.............how dare he.............chief kya main kud usko tapka doongi agar woh geet ko apne darji ko lekhar emotionally blackmail karega shadi ke liye.....i am sure thats wat he is trying to do trying to corner her with this so that she wont say no..........but yeh geet handa hain aur agar uske samne uske chief aa jaye ek baar woh sab kuch bhoolkar uske bahon mein hogi.................

enjoyed maan's remembrance with all their meeting and how he cudnt stop himself from getting closer to her...........he cudnt hold himself after their 1st meeting and he can never leave her too he will b always there to protect her from anything and everything.............u hv written it so amazingly.....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

arey yaar adi pehle geet se ek baar to poocha hotha.............agar woh chief se pyar karthi hain toh woh kaise dev se sagai kar sakthi hain...........poocha hotha toh sab ki dil toote toh nahin hothe......

uff geet jhalli kahin ki jab sab uske aagey peechey ghoom rahe thei tab sab ko baga diya aur jab chief kudh phone kiya toh apne gussey ki aag mein ussey bhi baga diya.....aur koi raasta bhi nahin tha chief ko contact karne ke liye.............ab sab kuch khatham ho gaya hain...........nahin sab kuch tab khatham hoga jab maan uff chief chahega lekhin ab tak toh maan ne tujhe jaane ki ijazat di nahin...............

i am sure maan will definitely come to the party uske bina uski geet ki b'day party kaise hosakthi hain...............adi dev ko kidnap kar lo aur chief geet se sagai kar lega.........waisey bhi masquerade ball hain chief mask pehna hoga geet ke alawa koi aur nahin pehchanega.........sagai kya directly shadi kar le aur geet ko baga le ja..................

jab woh cheek cheek kar apne pyar izhar kiya tha tab kaha tha infactuation hain aur ab bhagwan se pooch raha hain ki kya usne pyar kiya budhu pagal kahin ka...............

arey yaar reet jaldi se agla update kar do...............bahut intezaar nahin hoga mere se.............

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Amina

@KreyaArshiLover

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#774

Thanks so much for maans pov, but you could add in the NeXT part too i am Feeling tht i have stress you i am feeling very bad. But amazing i loved the update

Amina

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#775

😃wat an update reet........... full of drama...suspense.... n pain😭.... loved maan's prologue..... how he explained his feelings was awesome😃...... i hated it when dat stupid dev planned geet's b'day😡.... i wanted maan to do dat 4 her.....but dats wat is making the story interesting i guess..... att first wat adi told maan jst broke my heart..... i was lyk ab kya hoga😕..... but thnx to chotu.... our maan's rescue squad😆

waiting 4 the next update..... n hey thnx 4 clearing my doubt!!!!

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Riddhi

@RiddhiB

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#776

hie..loved the update..each part..
specially the dance part was fab..<3 <3
Maan was like totally pissed off at the sight..but still..i loved it!!
cont. soon

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#777

I GUESS A LOT OF PPL ARE HOLDING THEIR BREATHS FOR AN UPDATE THAT LEAVES US BREATHLESS.....😆

reva😃

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#778

i m really speechless reet...............d way u described maan's pov is superb....................i think u shd think abt writing novels................nd dat too strictly luv stories nd i m damn sure that they would be bestsellers😊....................

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: my_maan_geet
i m really speechless reet...............d way u described maan's pov is superb....................i think u shd think abt writing novels................nd dat too strictly luv stories nd i m damn sure that they would be bestsellers😊....................

completely agree

they will sell like hotcakes.....

reva