[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread - Page 15

im speechless............awesome update..........cant wait to read more 😊

after reading ur update i realised i was holding my breath *pheww* u always manage to shut my mouth😳 n i become bankrupted wit words to appreciate u

amazing..supreb..

wow man im speechless after reading this update

awesome update

Hit the like button if you like it??? What !!? I loved it!!! Awesome! Can't wait for more!

reet whts dis dear...........i was in tears.......very emotional and heart touching.........i love chief soooooooo much and adi too.........he is a sweetheart............

geet's behavior was very much understood........she saw d scene where her love was covered in blood..........couldnt take it..........fantastic, fabulous and awesome update.............v waited for it and it was more den worth...........loved it to d core........superb dialogues, emotions.........adi's understands maan too well..............i knw geet's word not only hurt chief bt herself too........

i can understand maan's pain........pls update soon.......i dont want dem to part ways.........pls make d next update long too.............reet u r simply awesome...........

Wow that was truly beautifully written and this is the 2nd time I've used the word beautiful which means I'm taken aback with this update the intense emotions made me grip onto every single word form start to finish; from adi's POV where we get an insight on how his seeing things it shows his observant nature where he can piece together geet and maans behaviour tonknow what is happening from his view we get to see how geet is actually portraying herself at that moment and how maan is showing his concern for geet I really do like it when you put in aid's POV and when he said the onion line to her it held so much significance of how she's masking her pain and her tears behind the facet of the onion in other words the people around her and liked how he noticed little things like her eyes darting towards the door at very noise looking for him and not eating anything because he didn't and ooh you wrote the violence part really well and I had this feeling geet was going to watch all this to give them both a dose of reality but make them understand the the death of their love and hmm when maan had that flashback about sudhir revealed a bit about maans character which come in grey shades and the intense moment when geet couldnt take the violence no more and emotionally breaks down and hurls those painful words to maan make him realise that he can't see hatred in he eyes for him as love and care from her is his relief. But maan thinks that he should separate her full from himself so decides to give back some hurtful words which break her completely which result to her wanting to kill herself, it's adi's part again which I loved in this moment because of how he stepped up and showed maan the consequences to his ignorant actions and made him realise he can detach himself from gee and she needs to know the truth and that's when maan let's down his guard and decides to soothe gee and reciprocates as she was longing for this and surrenders herself to maan and the showers scene a the end was so symbolic to a new start to this relationship the old stains of tears and blood being washed away anyways a fantastic update and I really appreciate how much you wrote and hope this comments makes up for half of it 😊

omg that was bloody awesome