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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet
10 more mins

okie....still waiting dear...!!!😊

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komlika

@komlika

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

im 20 🥳..........was silent reader of ur FF........but i guess not anymore

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: komlika
im 20 🥳..........was silent reader of ur FF........but i guess not anymore

ab ye to hona hi tha...!!

mama jaha...baccha vaha...heheheh😉

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Sadaf

@kyphfanz

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

i was about to sleep after a longgg day but i guess ill just wait a bit ;)

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puth

@puth

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet
10 more mins

quick question: Did geet his face now???

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gangesegb

@gangesegb

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

yupeee👏👏 waitingggggg..........

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: maanmeet_Reet
wait ..........2/3rd given .....wait for the rest ....!!!

will be back soon

just finished reading waiting for remaining part...........plzzzzzzzz plzzzzzzzzzzz update soon😉

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Rocks.Dhara

ab ye to hona hi tha...!!

mama jaha...baccha vaha...heheheh😉

whatz happening......oh my god mama telling bacha to read such ffs🤣

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Reet !

@Amour_Reet

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: puth

quick question: Did geet his face now???

no .........geet is not seeing his face ....!!!

sab kuch ek episode me kaise ho jaye...!!winks.....!

guys i had a plan to write around 300 words more....but i m drained out ....

aur nahi ho raha mujhse

puth dear ...i had mentioned about her exam ,...hav u seen that ..she missed her last terminal ..i m nt aware how many tests the LLb takes....lolz...forgive me....i m waiting for jazzerette

and any more question ?????

if u dont understand the meaning of the shlok i will edit this again ..

stiflling yawns !

love reet

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#130

well thank u a lot for this massive n awesome update

geet n aadi's cooking session was really nice aadi is full aware of the feeling of both maan n geet...........really like the way he tried to cheer up geet n felt her pain

n maan was looking so very irresistible wen geet came to him with food..........oh man...........my heart beat was escalating with every word of his description☺️........its so obvious geet cant help herself falling for him........again n again

poor su.........she do not look 30 at all..........aadi should check his laugh wen it is subjected to his lady love...........or else he may b in severe danger😆😆😆

n now for the most rocking....shocking.....awesome n gruesome part

u know wat I m not really a type of person who like to read only romance n crave for it

actually I m more into the intense n thrilling stuff n thats where ur ff has an upper hand

it was AWESOMELY AMAZING👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

the part where geet witnessed the cruel side of chief n her reaction to it was so realistic n heart wrenching that I cant express it in proper words

her immense love for chief despite his being a hard core criminal is very amazingly potrayed

she is so much in love with him that she can go to the extent of destroying herself inorder to purify her soul for commiting a sin of allowing a murderer to intrude her so very deeply

the kitchen scene was so much gripping

the way he pacified her n pleaded her to trust was too senti

chief is no less to geet.........the slok is wat I liked the most

I have watched Mahabharata a million times just to hear that slok part from lord krishna

n it did complete justice to the situation

n u actually deserve a standing ovation for it...........so here it goes.......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏..............assume that I m standing.........seriously..........

loved this update so very much

this is the best update till date

n hope to read more soon............plzzzzzzz dont leave us at the cliffhanger

love u

keep writing

n r u from kolkata medical college??.................u mentioned in the ff.........just thought of asking as I m familiar with the place

n yes I more thing......that dialogue of chief that he has a gut feeling of geet killing him.........it is literally haunting me now😲😲😲........plzz dont let that happen..........plzzzzz

Edited by shining_moon - 14 years ago