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Sofna

@Sofna

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#151

O M G...................

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S P E E C H L E S S!!!!!!!!!!

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So Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz DON'T xpect ANY comments from me..........😆😆

I am going to go back to read n re-read that rollercoaster of an update u posted ..again n again n again...till u update Next 😃..

Thats All I can manage for now...... 😳..I'm sure it conveyed ALL my reactions...

U no Reet Thank You/ the person who compelled u to join IF, Watch, Geet, n grant us via yr Amazing wrritting skills n imagination such a fabulous FF.............

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Always Be Happy........😳

PS. Do u knw I never knew about yr FF...or wud hav knwn....as I had stopped watching Geet arnd Oct...n was slowly loosing interest in visiting the forum aswell.......It was by luck that i saw a post of a member asking for help for the names of a few FF's that she had started reading but had to leave midway.....When one of replies to the descriptions was it's titled 'In Love With The Enemy'......By Manmeet - Reet....i literally rushed to FF corner...found yr FF...N READ All the updates in one go😆😆😆😆......N i thank everydayafter reading yr updates that i actually visited the forum that day!!!

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sakadafi

@sakadafi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#152

Oh wow....what an update!!!!!

Having read many of the FFs here, this was the most visual & violent update I've read till now...the way u showed Maan for who CHIEF is....what it means to be heading a gang and pulling off what he does...it's much more than just pressing the trigger....and you portrayed it wonderfully!! 👏

Geet's reaction to the violence was natural and understandable. What she saw of the man she loved....ignorance is truly bliss but feigning ignorance is stupidity and that's what she did, as Maan also said. Her reaction to his statements again, made sense....she would hate herself for allowing herself to feel this way, for not being able to control herself......especially when she knew it all.

Adi-Maan relationship is strong and that is evident. The only one who truly understands what goes on in Maan's behind...the reasons behind his actions and the meaning behind his words. Really curious as to what the truth is...

Don't know but I have a feeling that this story is not gonna have a happy ending....regardless of him not killing innocents, can Geet really live her life with a killer?? I remember you saying earlier that it's not gonna happen like 'Wanted' which really makes me wonder about the truth behind Maan....

You really do write fabulously!!! Please do continue soon...

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234Diya426

@234Diya426

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#153

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#154

👏👏👏👏

mind blowing update

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#155

omg such a longggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg update.......................

i have never read such a perfect update..................................

altogether it was an awesome update..............................

i hope in the next update maan will tell her his true identity...................pl let the truth come out soon..............

thnks for the pm.......................

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#156

Awesome update yaar!! It was a roller coaster of emotions...One part I felt as if all is lost...next part hope rekindles. One part I feel disgusted of Maan...not because he killed though....and next moment my heart goes out to him How does Geet handle these emotional whirlwinds...must be so taxing on her.

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#157

OMG!! This was so beyond good and brilliant!!! I just loved the length of....so so so long...it was super duper long and I loved it!!!

The beginning with maan's confusion and where geet comes in with the food!! The reaction geet has when he kills the guy was so intense...her breakdown and when he tells her she made the mistake of trusting him....the kitchen scene has me on the edge of my seat!!

OMFG!!! Girl, you outdid yourself....thank you so much for this!! I loved the ending...the passion resurfacing and taking her to bathroom and the shower....I almost gasped when I read the part of him not wearing the mask when she enters....I was so excited but I guess that won't be happening soon!! fantastic writing!!

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my_maan_geet

@my_maan_geet

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#158

i m speechless dear...............really wonderful update reet.......

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DancinFireflies

@DancinFireflies

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#159

reet it was great.... but darling u scared me.... that one dailogue... he has a gut feeling she will kill him.... its a request plz dont turn this into a tragedy... why do i feel u will use these dailogues later... plz dont make it a sad fic... plz plz plz dont kill him in future coz i get a feeling u willl end the fic that way... plz we want a happy ending as in happily ever afters....😊

thanks for the update

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Ok i read a few parts again...

k...so now i can bet... geet will kill chief... she will... BUT she will kill chief not maan... now i get it why u asked us not to call him maan yet coz they are two diff personalities of the same person... somewhere behind the heart less man there is another person who has a heart that beats for geet... she will kill the murderer in him n once his mission will b accomplished he will come out as maan... so yeah she will not kill her love... now m not scared.... hope i'm right

NOW THAT m no longer tensed here's a proper comment....

the update was lovely n yeah i did cry for some parts... the voilence part was well sketched...n the kicten scene...well after reading the part where adi accuses maan of hurting her...it was expected... i did feel she will try kill herself but then i did not think she will opt for burning herself to death so it was expected yet unexpected... wow u used a verse from bhagwat geeta... did u like research it or u actually have it all memorised... btw cud u translate it as i have no idea whatsoever it means... yet it was a very smart move by you...

talking abt the confrontation... it was well written i mean yeah her reaction was natural n his too... so yeah enjoyed reading it...

Edited by .muskaan - 14 years ago