MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

COOOLL.. ok i am running out of words to praise u. all parts are better then one and other and still each one is best in its ownself.. great! and yes... ' jis ki jaan ki qeemat nahi hai, us k sapno ki kia qeemat hogi!'... AWWWESOMMEE..!! 👏 👏

and u described all the hindi movies in a very Kinza-ish style! 😛 😆

Loved it! 😊

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Jaee Dev Rathore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Updated my post on page 10 ...

And coming to this update - I am liking how they are diametrically opposite and hmm Nupur's last sentence is still stuck in my mind - the 50 year old thing was so funny but there was a different kind of sadness in it - I am not at all positive about her family ... Please continue soon because normally I tend to mull over what's gonna happen next in stories but here I just cannot think of anything ...

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Radha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

amazing part!!
loved it!!
plzzz dnt forget to pm me next time..
cont soon 😊

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Gul

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

wao Kinzu so beautiful

I really loved the last line

Jis ki jan ki kemat nahi Us ka sapno ki kya kemat hogi

Lovely update

Thanks for pm and cont soon

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Jessie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

Part 2 & Part 3

Both were awesome..👏.👏
So Nupur comes from small family??😕
I am in love with ur FF...It was so sweet...Nupur's innocence...aww..😍😍

But the last line shook me too..😲

Cont soon..😃😃

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Alisha2887

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Brilliant update Mehak.

Thanks for the pm.

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Naina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

you did it once again!!!....gosh im loving this story....the first 2 updates i was still wondering what to think of this one but the part where nupur is scared when mayank asked "kya hua" made me say i love this!.....i love the innocence....and the last lines by both of them....gosh im excited to read more!.......keep writing.....naina

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AmyArTiMayUr

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Angel...last line was superb😃 Kahan se laati ho yeh sab lines yaar??? you amaze me totally😃😃

Waise it was an AWESOME update...love Nupur's naivete and the way Mayank tries to be at a par with her and tries his best not to belittle her....😃

You know we always assume that everyone in the world is as knowledgeable as we are, but there are some ppl who dont have the luck to explore all the things we do.....

I am totally LOVING this ff, angel...cant wait to read ahead..im just waiting for the way Mayank tries to make Nupur adjust in her new surroundings....😃 and i want to know how exactly she ended up getting married to someone she dint even know the age of.....😕😕

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Zehnaseeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#119

Fab update as usual baji. I really want to know more about nupur's family background, and her personality.
Also want mayank to help her be more independent and self confident.
Thanks for the pm [>:D<]