MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
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haww i m too late
🤗OMGGG kinzuuuuu u changed ur dp😲...😆congo for changing it 😆..and the update was GREAT👏....now its all cleared why is nupur was behaving like his....and i m loving tihs innocent nupur awwww she is soo cutee...and the way mayank was handling it ....awww i m lovnig this new love story...its amazing...and nupur thought she is married with a 50 yrs old man lolx😆......and the last line😲..what does she meant by that "jis ki jaan ki qeemat nahi hai, us k sapno ki kia qeemat hogi!"...
awwww...lovely update....and thnx alot 4 pm 🤗
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haaye meri mehakti chehakti mehak........ 🤗 lovely part yaar.... 🤗 lol i jus loved the VCD part..... 😆
n yeah, this ff is quite different... waitn to watch the magic gettin weaved....
the last line was very sad..... 😭 poor mayank, he got a shock of his life wen she said she wasnt ready for the wedding..... 😔 par no worries kyunki haule haule ho jayega pyar..... 😃
thx for the pm... 😊 waitin for the next part....😊 n gosh, u write fab, jus outta dis world....👏
n yeah, i loved the change in the font style n size from the usual one.... keep it up gal... 😊
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iiiiiiiiiii loved it mehak sachiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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aww... mahek!!!🤗
terrific update!!!!!👏
luvd my complex & dreamy nups.. mayu.. tryin 2 understand her!!!!😳
but d last lyn....* jiske jaan ki keemat nahin, uske sapnon ki kya keemat hain... * left me puzzld... now!!!😕
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey! just read the 2nd and 3rd part together..
just awesum!
loved the conversations between mayur!😃
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lovely os and thanks for the pm
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mehek u r awsome......😊 the way u portrate both of their expression it was wowwww.......😊👍🏼
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PART 4:

"aisa ku keh rahi ho?", mayank was shocked at her answer, "aisa hi tu hota hai, jin k pass pasie nahi hotey, un ki tu jaan ki bhi qeemat nahi hoti", mayank felt a sudden rage in her voice, a deep silence in her eyes, he noticed that she was trying hard to control her tears, by opening her eyes more wide.

"nupur dekho..", mayank didn't knew what to say,"choriye na, main thek hon, ap mujhe batiye ap k pass koi hindi movie nahi hai", she had managed to stop tears and mayank looked at her carefully, her smile was a genuine one, she was not forcing it. Mayank's heart was caught in a fist, he couldn't tolerate the pain he saw in her eyes but as she wanted to change the topic so hr also did, "nahi, koi hindi movie nahi hai", nupur's face fell, "per koi baat nai, main le aaon ga kal, kaunsi psnd hai ap ko?"

Nupur got excited , "ummm..mujhe, ahhh..sharukh ki, nahi per us ki koi nai movie nahi ayi", she started thinking, this was the first time she was offered something, she wanted to make full use of it, "akhsay ya saif..nahi..ranbir", she was not able to decide,"mera khyal se Imran .."

"main sab k le aoon ga", mayank 's sudden solution left nupur is shock.

"sab ki?", she was not able to believe but mayank was very normal,"haan sab ki!"

"in sab ki sari movies tu 100 se bhi ziyda hongi", she informed him, being very scared, that now may be he will cut down the list, "500 se ziyada bhi hongi tu le aaon ga", he had this genuine smile on his face and nupur was left dumbstruck, she was very excited but she managed to control her happiness and uttered 'thank you", ina voice full of gratitude and excitement.

"koi baat nahi", mayank's eyes were so love filled that nupur was left numb to react, she again lowered her eyes, but this time she wanted to look again, something penetrated her heart, but she didn't look again

"nupur", he took he name with so much affection and tenderness, that every time she had to take moment to react to her name, she wasn't used to all this, she wasn't even used to listen her own name, in her home, no one was called by their names..

"nupur", mayank broke the path she was taking to her past, and she turned

"gi?"

Mayank took steps towards her , looking in her eyes, and this time she didn't lower them, he gently held her hand, it was so soft and delicate, and slipped a ring in her finger, looking back in her eyes,"ye ap ka wedding gift hai, u are beautiful nupur", nupur unconsciously looked at the ring, admiring the huge stone and the curves, while mayank being so close to her, could smell the fragrance of her hair, he was holding her hand, his other hand was about to grip her waist when nupur jerked her hand in excitement, "ye diamond hai?"

This was the second time mayank's spell was broken by nupur, he took a few moments to encode nupur's words into meaning, while she was busy admiring the ring, "haan diamond hai"

Her smile increased, "wow!", she brushed her finger over the ring and pulled it out of her finger!

Mayank was dumbstruck' SHE TOOK OFF HER WEDDING GIFT!!

Nupur started observing the ring very carefully while mayank was again staring at her , in disbelief!

"bht achi hai", she looked at him, mayank was very disheartened, he didn't like the ways he pulled the ring out of her finger, but he tried to smile.

He turned towards the bed, and brushed away the petals with a tissue, he really was hurt at the way she took the ring off, with such a sudden jerk.

"suniye", mayank turned and nupur was standing holding the ring in her hands, "ye phir pehna dijiye"

Inspite of trying mayank wasn't able to hold his disappointment, "khud pehn lo"

He again trued towards the bed, brushing all petals towards the center, creating pile in the center,

"pehna dijiye na", she was still standing there, "plz"

Mayank turned towards her, "utari ku thi?"

"mujhe diamond dekhna tha",she opend her eyes more wide," sorry"

She pouted innocently, and mayank couldn't remain angry, he took the ring form her hand and held her hand, and this time instead of taking a step towards her , he pulled her towards himself!

She almost collided with his chest, all this was so sudden, nupur couldn't even react, she just looked at him, mayank made sure there eye-contact wasn't broken, and he slid in the ring in her finger again, "dobara mat utarna!"

Nupur lowered her eyes and nodded, a strange blush taking her over, mayank left her hand, and she came back to sensed and nupur took a step back, while mayank sat on the bed, "ye lo tissue. Tum bhi apni side se petals saaf kar lo", nupur nervously took the tissue and mayank sat on the bed, doing something on the mobile, nupur also brushed all the petals towards the center, heaping the pile, and sat down, controlling her beats

Maynka placed his cell phn on the side table and lied down, taking the comforter over him and nupur was still sitting, trying to gain strength to lie down, "ab kia hua?"

Mayank 's voice gave her the strength, "kuch nahi', she lied down beside him slowly, taking the comforter over her, and mayank smiled, "good night nupur", his smile was beautiful, it really made her nervousness go away, "good night",she replied , sounding more normal the she expected

Mayank turned towards the opposite side, just in order to make her feel comfortable, nupur also turned towards the other side, closing her eyes, both of them lying, facing the opposite sides.

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tu bhi chaley, main bhi chalon..hongey kam ye kabhi fasley

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He was totally in love with her, but she had so many other things to fascinate, that somewhere he was left behind.

It was now he, who had to cover the distance, take the first step every time, and she would follow,

and destiny knew they will...WEAVE THE MAGIC,

because all that was separating them was... a heap of rose petals...

Edited by -Mehak - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is something really different - quite paradoxical to say but it's mysteriously innocent - She is innocent but a puzzle which neither he nor I am able to solve ... the ring portion was quite symbolical - she is not somehow witnessing the love and he would have to make her witness it ... The heap of petals is like a barrier of roses which he needs to cross to bring her near him ... I am still mulling over the whole story - I guess with some more updates I'll understand it in a better way ....
P.S - The last lines were the golden portion of the update - beautiful ...
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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