MAYUR FF..Weaving the Magic..Part 15 on pg 85

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nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#101

sry for late comment......
part 2
it was awesome..........this mayank was so adorable.....nd when he talked to himself.......i just loved that.........actually i do it when i become confused....
part3
wow........what a cd collection mayank has......loved it......nd what is the meaning of jis ki jaan ki qeemat nahi hai, us k sapno ki kia qeemat hogi!"......
waiting for next part.............love you

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zarfishanzahid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#102

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
mind blowingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg

thx alot for the pm luv u muuuuuuuuuuuaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#103

yaar u have imense talent mashAllah...again n awesum story

its geting highly intresting

poor nups....she is soooo inocent.God knows wht is behind her last line

...n maynk is such a gr8 person...

i m loving it

gr8 update

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shweta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#104

I love it when anyone is on a writing spree😛............I loved the update

But i'm shocked reading the last line...what does she exactly mean??

Continue soon like as usual..

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

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Posted: 14 years ago

#105

mindblowing update Mehak!

so Nupz thought that she is getting married to a 50 year old budha 😆

i loved the last line

''jis ki jaan ki qeemat nahi hai, us k sapno ki kia qeemat hogi!"👏

waiting eagerly for the next update

plzzzzz continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

Edited by Favouriteofall - 14 years ago

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umaima

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Posted: 14 years ago

#106

ufffff last lines took me away.....well dis is da reality of our society....

very well written.......👏

luv u loadzzz......

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kirti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#107

loved the last line

fab part😊

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SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#108

First of all Yay!! U started another ff!! I was waiting for this. Second, so sorry for not commenting till now. Was kept busy with an assignment for uni but I had read all the parts. Now that I'm done with my assignment, will try to catch up with the comments soon.

Part 1 – Great update!

Wow! I liked how u described Nupur's little actions at the beginning…it really helped to understand the character and her background. To me, she seems like a little child…all her actions, excitement were so cute and innocent.

"She was married..it was her wedding night..her husband had entered the room.." – this was a bit of a shocker…coz I didn't expect it to be her wedding night…

Part 2

Excellent update! Mayank admiring her beauty, then apologizing to her was so sweet!!

Mayank staring at her – Well who could blame him when he has such a beautiful wife? And Nupur getting conscious of that…normal considering they were strangers AND married.

"per ap se ziyada nahi" – Reminded me of the date anniversary night ….

Mayank talking to himself was so CUTE!!

""per main kia karoon", he looked in the mirror

"I cant help it when she smiles"." – Awww…………cho chweet!!

Part 3

Another awesome part! I felt so bad for Nupur at the beginning…she was trying to tell him she didn't do anything when there was no need of her to do that.

Nupur talking about love and shaddi after that…it shows how she wanted to fall in love b4 marriage…It is a dream of every woman to marry the man she loves….I feel so bad for her.

"shaadi k baad pyar nahi ho skata" – Aww…Poor Mayank. He loves her so much and it's like he is asking for a chance of fulfilling her dreams…

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago

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Mou.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#109

very nice...vcd player explaining was totally cute & i loved the way nupur described hindi movies..but why she said her life has no value? why she got married to a unknown guy whom she was not even aware of his age? its strange!!!!!!!
update fast!!!!!!!