The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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Yashfeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

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PART2-
CUTE PART..........hmmmmm gunjan is smarter.........i m excited about mayur's meeting........
hey i m reading d whole ff at once so i m comenting on each part as i m finishing it......

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Yashfeen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

PART 3-IMG!Mayur meeting was so cute........i love her character so sweet & cute......
PART 4-lovely update........the scenes were so cute nupur & mayank hv bth fallen in luv.........i luv mayank's thoughts about d bird......love them

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Auroni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

It ws sooooooooooooooooo romantic...I think the most romantic update of this ff till date...😍😍
I ws so lost in the part where mayank almost kissed her...This ws heavenly beautiful..😍😍😍.U've written that part so beautifully...The feelings wr clearly visible in their eyes and ur words...Loved this part to the core...🤗🤗
Also the wedding part ws wonderful...I ws imagining nupur in those white gown and mayank in black suit..🤪🤪.And then their wedding...Hayeee...😍
Genuinely this part ws the best...Im enjoying every bit of it...
Cont soon...Now cant wait for their confession...

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: Auroni.92
It ws sooooooooooooooooo romantic...I think the most romantic update of this ff till date...😍😍
I ws so lost in the part where mayank almost kissed her...This ws heavenly beautiful..😍😍😍.U've written that part so beautifully...The feelings wr clearly visible in their eyes and ur words...Loved this part to the core...🤗🤗
Also the wedding part ws wonderful...I ws imagining nupur in those white gown and mayank in black suit..🤪🤪.And then their wedding...Hayeee...😍
Genuinely this part ws the best...Im enjoying every bit of it...
Cont soon...Now cant wait for their confession...

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for loving this update😊

i hope, u like next update too😊

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: yashfeenadil
PART1-OH! i luv d 1st part it was so nice......mayu's thoughts about nature was cute.......

Originally posted by: yashfeenadil
PART2-
CUTE PART..........hmmmmm gunjan is smarter.........i m excited about mayur's meeting........
hey i m reading d whole ff at once so i m comenting on each part as i m finishing it......

Originally posted by: yashfeenadil
PART 3-IMG!Mayur meeting was so cute........i love her character so sweet & cute......
PART 4-lovely update........the scenes were so cute nupur & mayank hv bth fallen in luv.........i luv mayank's thoughts about d bird......love them

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for loving this FF😊

i hope, u'll like next update too😊

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti
Wow

lovely updates

cont son

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for loving this update😊

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Thank you so much for linking this story.😊

salma009, supriyamnfan, Bhawna_arti, valiyah27, mayur-ki-diwani, preethi_m18, kirti123, love.mayurarti, Alisha-MJHT, Auroni.92, DhanakZ, Nirvrithi, mahakmev, jiya_angel, ridi_onasis, itzMYattitude, samiralovemayur, ronojoy_ria, -Faria-, swati05, Nikita-Sharma, -moona-, maria-soniarti,

Thank u so much guys for pressing the Like tab and also urs precious comments.😊

here is the next update........i hope u like it........😊

so, tell me how it is..................waiting for ur comment😊

Love

suja❤️

Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

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fiza ahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#229

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yupiii

jaldi kero im dying to read...warna meray mental status k tu tum ko pata hai na😛😈

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very long n uterly boring part ....i tell u ...such stupid moments ...n angry young man....n these stupid cold winds dont know how to fly ......

oki dont get shocked .......u have made fun of my mental status so itna tu banta hai

yeah maynk mjhy se zaroor maar khay ga.....i thought ab bola ab bola...but he stupid idiot ...wht else assurance he wants ....a girl hugged him ...let him huged again let him kiss.......pagal..n she doent love me....errrr

this was an awesum update...beautiful part ....the fight ...was cool.....n thn after tht was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😍......y it ended.....

i hope nupur made a decision to confess first kyun mayank k kuch nhi hosakta ....

than her father ....oh so uday bhaiya might got married to sum1 from big city thts why he hates people frm ther....hm

but uterly beautiful update ....really gr8

continue soon

n if u have forget ur an os , an ff and an short story are dying to get ur attention.....mein chuti per hoon islyan i want u all to work day n night ....😉😆

lov ya .....

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#230

It was mindblowing update...loving it....by god luved mayur each scene.....first i was scraed ut wen mayyu cam ...so nupz dad is upset wid udya...well i hop he 4give dem soon....waiting 4 more mayur scene's...

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