The Feather of Blue Bird [MN] # 1[NTL:pg 1]

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Khushboo

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

nice update dear......

do cont soon.😊

Edited by khushisati - 14 years ago

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

yaar ye mayank ka problem kya jey........bol kyun nehi deta ki he loves nupur......i hope ki nupur hi kuch kare.........aur agle update jaldi se kar de na.........love u

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

OMG OMG – mayur were alone on the empty road at night.

Hayeeeeeeeeeeee what a romantic environment-perfect for our mayur

Hai ALLAH goons were attacked our angel oops maynks angles NUps

By God Mayank was fuming in anger and he has beat them very badly

Wah wah superb Mr. Mayank………Ye huye na baat

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww Mayur scene was so dreamish .

The hug and kiss just magical- totally Mayurish

Yr buddhu Mayank –why didn't he say that , he loves Nups

R a kuch tou bolo- sadu kahika

Oh ho so uday is nups bro but nups dad didn't accept them

Why????????????

Whats the reason behind it?????????????

Suja it's a really very beautiful update

Fantastic

Loved it to the core

Do update next part soon

note:sorry for commenting late.actually i m busy with my study and will b busy next 3/4 days...

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itzMYattitude

@itzMYattitude

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

finally read it

sorry for being late

awesomeeeeeeeeee

amazinggggggggggggg

superbbbbbbbbbb

rockinggggggggg

really great job dear

*thumbs uppppp*

goons scene was really well written

was really sweeeet

loved that one completely

n al the other scenes just supeerbbbbbbb

last one too really well written

do continue sooooooooooon

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

the up is good

toh mayank nupur aur pranjal after enjoying the whole day headed towards their respective houses

where pranjal and nupur are carefree about the time mayank was really tensed

the duppata scene and the goons fiassco are just like films

mayank ka nupur ko bacchana wahhhhhh

i loved it their hug

its really nice

plz cotn soon and pm me

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed
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yupiii

jaldi kero im dying to read...warna meray mental status k tu tum ko pata hai na😛😈

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very long n uterly boring part ....i tell u ...such stupid moments ...n angry young man....n these stupid cold winds dont know how to fly ......

oki dont get shocked .......u have made fun of my mental status so itna tu banta hai

yeah maynk mjhy se zaroor maar khay ga.....i thought ab bola ab bola...but he stupid idiot ...wht else assurance he wants ....a girl hugged him ...let him huged again let him kiss.......pagal..n she doent love me....errrr

this was an awesum update...beautiful part ....the fight ...was cool.....n thn after tht was awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😍......y it ended.....

i hope nupur made a decision to confess first kyun mayank k kuch nhi hosakta ....

than her father ....oh so uday bhaiya might got married to sum1 from big city thts why he hates people frm ther....hm

but uterly beautiful update ....really gr8

continue soon

n if u have forget ur an os , an ff and an short story are dying to get ur attention.....mein chuti per hoon islyan i want u all to work day n night ....😉😆

lov ya .....

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment😊

Thank u so much for liking this update😊

Fiza, u shocked me........kya comment hai............by god!!!!!

awwww.........u didnt like mayank??? bechara, koi usse pasand nahi karta!!!😭

shayad nupur v pasand nahi karegi!!!

i knw......i knw........i hve so many pending FFs n os........yaad dilane k liye sukria😃 ............i'll sure update soon.

just wait n watch n read..................n comment after reading😆😉😛

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn
It was mindblowing update...loving it....by god luved mayur each scene.....first i was scraed ut wen mayyu cam ...so nupz dad is upset wid udya...well i hop he 4give dem soon....waiting 4 more mayur scene's...

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.😃

Thank u so much for liking this update😃

ur wish ll going to fulfill very soon.........more mayur scene on the way.

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

Originally posted by: mahakmev
amazing loved it

Originally posted by: kirti123
wow loved the part
😊
mayur are really adorable
hope they confess soon

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti
Nice part.

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.😃

Thank u so much for liking this update😃

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#249

Originally posted by: jiya_angel
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wow.... awesome update👏
Mayank is such a gentle man... love him....

and Nupur is so mature😃

thnx for de pm

Thank u so much for ur lovely comment

Thank u so much for liking this update.

bt u r the one, who deserve whole credit to this update.......to correcting my grammatical mistakes.😊

thanks u so much Jiya😃

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#250

Originally posted by: maria-soniarti
Sujal

wow Beautiful update yaar🤗

i loved Mayur scenes...

you write every scene very beautifully...

do continue soon