MG FF Innocence...LOST note@145 n Link to thread 2 - Page 75

Originally posted by: ..Sadiie..

OMFGGG!!!!!!!!!OHHH...EEEMMM...GEEE!!!!!!!!Like OMG!! OMGGG!!!!!I Read all the parts and pressed the like button on ALL. Whooaaa...thanx a looottt...this is where the real achievement of a writer lies when her stories are appreciated 😊 😊Oh My Freaking Days!!!

Damnnn Why Did I have to read it all?!!!!!

You left it at a cliffhanger!! Damn damn damn damn damn!! Naaahhiii!!! She faints and then the pre-cap "What do U want?" "You" OMG OMG How The hell am I Gonna survive!! Part updated...so no 1s gonna die 😉 😆

And if that wasn't enough, U give a teaser that's making my heart flip!

Okay the story 😆 Completely In Love with this Story. Innocence Lost, At first I thought It was hinted towards Geet, I sorta started realizing Its Maan...I mean What happened to Anvesha, what he did to his Mum...At a young age you can't blame yourself, If things are going bad obviously you'll lose your innocence. His mum was a bad mum, his sister got raped and died, he's up for revenge right. Yet when he saw Geet he saw the same Innocence that was snatched from him. He is selfish by keeping her even when she calls him a murderer and all 😆

But somewhere I feel as though he's not selfish... Maan is 1 hell of a complex character. He's selfish and he's not, he's good and he's bad...he's a character who personifies the time of Twilight. Honestly when I was going through a lot of stories when I was not a writer...I would just hate Maan's char in most of them n pity Geet!!! Which made me write a story where I would portray him and Geet as more close to real-life. My biggest inspiration was Shakespeare- a man who wrote plays, stories etc which had protagonists who can never b completely loved or hated 😊. I loved Reet's writing in 'Love with the enemy' too.

..Idk what I'm saying !

Damn I Wanna be in Geet's place!!!! 🤣 🤣 You're the nth no. person 2 say so 🤣

He managed to distract her a lot of time 😆 If it were me I wouldn't fall for it 🤣

Damnnn I love this!!!

CANNOT Wait to read what happens next! I Am Loving This Maan! Obsessed Maan I call it 😆 And I.Love It! 😃 😃 Glad u liked

Do Continue Soon

I was supposed to read Pact with the Devil and ended up reading this 😆 Koi gal nahi...will update that too 😊

Btw Hi I'm Sadiie 😛...nice 2 meet u Sadiie...m shreya a.k.a shelly😊

xx

Originally posted by: spvd

part 27
nice part...
Geet this time has shown her courage and her anger and strength...
cont soon dear...

PS - thanks for posting on the FF Daily Updates thread dear...