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Water. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Read first 3 parts...
They r like...WOW...amazing.
Let me go read other ones...
I loved the astrology joke...haha
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read this chapter 20.
Is dis a dark story?
I am not happy with the way Maan is lying to Geet..
Rite now she is pregnant...and her condition is delicate...he needs to be more concerned about her and the baby...
she still has approx 8 -9 months before delivery...and in this time frame if she finds out...the truth...she mite even miscarry.

I m not happy with this Maan at all😭

He knows how much Geet trusts him...more than her life..and yet..the remorse juss scratches his heart and goes away...

Will this Maan change at all?
Is he going to pay for his deeds?

Edited:
I read all the chapters...Chalo I m happy Rajinder's past is revealed...and it sucked that Rhea and the baby had to die...
Maan killed Rajendra out of anger...
I m scared of his obsession of Geet...
he goes wild whn he is with her...whether if it was before marriage or after..
I find this actions, or shud I say sexual acts juss a bit too much.
Is that all he cares about...I mean it starts from there n ends there as well.
Is he not concerened about Geet and her emotions?
Does he not respect and her values and her character?
Too many questions for u.
Please answer them.

Thanks...
Pls. add me to PM
Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
Is it a completely dark story??????...will he ever have any remorse for his deed???
eager to know the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

I read this chapter 20.

Is dis a dark story?
I am not happy with the way Maan is lying to Geet..
Rite now she is pregnant...and her condition is delicate...he needs to be more concerned about her and the baby...
she still has approx 8 -9 months before delivery...and in this time frame if she finds out...the truth...she mite even miscarry.

I m not happy with this Maan at all😭

He knows how much Geet trusts him...more than her life..and yet..the remorse juss scratches his heart and goes away...

Will this Maan change at all?
Is he going to pay for his deeds?

Edited:
I read all the chapters...Chalo I m happy Rajinder's past is revealed...and it sucked that Rhea and the baby had to die...
Maan killed Rajendra out of anger...
I m scared of his obsession of Geet...
he goes wild whn he is with her...whether if it was before marriage or after..
I find this actions, or shud I say sexual acts juss a bit too much.
Is that all he cares about...I mean it starts from there n ends there as well.
Is he not concerened about Geet and her emotions?
Does he not respect and her values and her character?
Too many questions for u.
Please answer them.

Thanks...
Pls. add me to PM


OOO TERIII...too many questions 2 answer...


Ok so startin with the 1st-YES...this IS a dark story----a very dark one indeed...

Comin 2 MSL's char,well all I can say u is that not all the people on this world are the same...some have their good qualities surpassing the negative traits and vice-versa...and if Maan is like that,there is a VERY strong reason behind that (which will b revealed la8r).


All I can say is that I've made a char who can neither be only hated or loved----same is the case wid geet----may b she's not a murderer,but she has also lied 2 her family-the family who loves her to death and trusts her blindly----this only means that both r at fault!

And yes Maan doesn't kill ppl for money or for fun---he have never claimed a life of an innocent.

Maan-Geet relation---it is complicated...Maan is NOT just physically attracted 2 her-he loves her like hell...if that was the case-he had many opportunities,but he never used them 2 his advantage...


Will he repent? Well...u hav 2 wait and see...

Thank u for ur comments and I really hope I continue 2 entertain u with this ff

Love

Shreya
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Posted: 13 years ago
glad u r back...

loved the update...

rajinder is no more n every1 is sad...but geet was sad for a diff reason...

maan came...wonder what will happen next...

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
mandymore thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice prt.dey r toghtr again..
Water. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shelly_08


OOO TERIII...too many questions 2 answer...


Ok so startin with the 1st-YES...this IS a dark story----a very dark one indeed...

Comin 2 MSL's char,well all I can say u is that not all the people on this world are the same...some have their good qualities surpassing the negative traits and vice-versa...and if Maan is like that,there is a VERY strong reason behind that (which will b revealed la8r).


All I can say is that I've made a char who can neither be only hated or loved----same is the case wid geet----may b she's not a murderer,but she has also lied 2 her family-the family who loves her to death and trusts her blindly----this only means that both r at fault!

And yes Maan doesn't kill ppl for money or for fun---he have never claimed a life of an innocent.

Maan-Geet relation---it is complicated...Maan is NOT just physically attracted 2 her-he loves her like hell...if that was the case-he had many opportunities,but he never used them 2 his advantage...


Will he repent? Well...u hav 2 wait and see...

Thank u for ur comments and I really hope I continue 2 entertain u with this ff

Love

Shreya


Shreya,

Thanks for the reply.😛
M still sad cus it is a dark story😭

The way Maan is today - it is because of his younger sister right? He could not save her from the goons and she died.
N that is why his heart was fluttering when he heard about Rhea being a minor and he wanted to save her...
Geet lying to her family - well i still have to find out how she is no longer with them...but lying that she is in love? is that lying lying?

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 24
wow so nice part...
the low life what he deserved...
but no one else knows about his doings and Geet is getting blamed for what?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.


Shreya,

Thanks for the reply.😛
M still sad cus it is a dark story😭

The way Maan is today - it is because of his younger sister right? He could not save her from the goons and she died.
N that is why his heart was fluttering when he heard about Rhea being a minor and he wanted to save her...
Geet lying to her family - well i still have to find out how she is no longer with them...but lying that she is in love? is that lying lying?


YUP...u r ri8...but hiding the truth is almost equivalent 2 a lie...she cud have at least tried talking 2 them...her family wudn't hav slaughtered her-----after all they luv her so dearly---her happiness is what they want.

She was not at fault earlier bcoz she didn't plan 2 fall in love earlier after promising marriage 2 Rajinder...but what happened after that,she cud hav easily changed it---she shud hav faith on her parents.

What I am tryin 2 say is that no human being is perfect-Even Geet and Maan in the drama series r not shown as PERFECT human beings----and that is what I'm tryin 2 portray

I hope u understand😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

niceee
maan did d right thing of torturing him 2 death

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