[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) - Page 75

Created

Last reply

Replies

1k

Views

128.2k

Users

70

Likes

3.5k

Frequent Posters

wilddevil2010 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Enthusiast Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
Shiv is scared of his wife. Gud for him.

Rathan and Shiv's convo was both funny and sweet. Senna does have a good sense of humour but I prefer Gauri's.

Shiv's description of Shaan and Gauri's relationship was beautiful. Still more beautiful was d ST moment.

I luvd these lines
''All her feistiness,
her wittily sarcastic quips …
everything from her
eye-rolling to her knowing and quickening womb …
And he wanted all of it for all
seven lifetimes.."


Pls continue soon
P.S. Waiting for Shiv's reaction. D guy is in for a huge surprise.
chubzy thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
Wow m so excited abt d party!
-pixie- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
I cant wait for this party to start...Can we please have some Maan and Geet parts too...please please...the show is starved of romance...now I need to look elsewhere for my fix😆

Double dating with the ex! Gauri continues to surprise me...

I absolutely loved all the updates and especially Shiv's confession- that was very beautifully done!
arabianpaki thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
I love how all the siblings are such at ease with each other about anything and everything! They're more like best buds than siblings...

oh man, now I miss my siblings ...

amazing update =]

538783 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

I cant wait for this party to start...Can we please have some Maan and Geet parts too...please please...the show is starved of romance...now I need to look elsewhere for my fix😆


Double dating with the ex! Gauri continues to surprise me...

I absolutely loved all the updates and especially Shiv's confession- that was very beautifully done!


well... you know my Maan and Geet are a bit more advanced in their romance from the days of their first night... just a warning... 😉
538783 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arabianpaki

I love how all the siblings are such at ease with each other about anything and everything! They're more like best buds than siblings...

oh man, now I miss my siblings ...

amazing update =]


Isn't it great when you have such closeness with your siblings? One of the best things in my life and I thank the good Lord everyday for it :)
saomom thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Hulloooo....*peeps in*


anyone remember me????


'Bout time you came back! Almost sent a search party.


@Devi - loved the update. Love a man who can admit he's head over heals for his wife. <sigh>
Cytherea thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Devi! Excellent update..I'm guessing both the guys and the girls are partying in the same place..I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please continue soon..Your FF is seriously addicting..I keep tuning in to see if you've updated or not !!
Krishnaluv94 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED IT! There are no words to explain how beautifully you write!!! Haha, Maan and Vicky are at the bachelor party too! Can't wait for the actual party....sorry, i was daydreaming, back to the update. Ha, Shiv's scared of Gauri. I wonder if we're gonna have some party crashers???

Edited-
I just went back and realized that I hadn't read the first part. This is going to be interesting. *grinning evilly*
Edited by Krishnaluv94 - 14 years ago
-pixie- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sridevi27

Whatever happened to Pixie? I mean, Shradha? Occasionally, we should keep tabs on the president of the Doe's ;)


I was away on vacation for two weeks....driving across the breadth and length of Rajasthan....but I am back now 😆

EDIT: I seem to have missed some amazing conversations...mosquito bites, melons, girl talk🤣

PPS: Devi, I read all the disclaimer tagged updates in the car on my phone and my husband would look at me and keep asking me...whats wrong! Little did he know😆
Edited by -pixie- - 14 years ago

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 5 months ago

The Palace of secrets Season3 Part 1 Long ago Heavenlybliss and Salley had asked me to write something like the movie Bhool Bhulaiyya.This SS is...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: jasminerahul · 5 months ago

I am planning to write a friendship story. I will choose the love interest of Paras Kalnawat and Karan Kundra according to the choice of the...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Saumya96 · 2 years ago

Hello everyone ☺️ This is Saumya ❤️ I have completed the five long threads of my FF "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story Following are the...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".