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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

Mulan... short but very impactful...

Beautifully written and all the best for your exam.. 😊

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

VERY VERY ROMANTIC PART.

LOVED IT . BUT IT WAS TOO SMALL. PLEASE NEXT TIME DO A BIT LONGER UPDATE .............. FINALLY MAYUR ARE GOING TO BE ONE....................... "BAAHAON K DARMEIYAN DO PYAR MIL RHE. HAI.......................
BAAHAON K DARMEIYAN DO PYAR MIL RHE. HAI.............................

JANE KYA

BOLE MAN....

BOLE SUNN KI TARAN,.

DHADKAN BANI ZUBAAANNNNNN..........

BAAHAON K DARMEIYAN DO PYAR MIL RHE. HAI.........................."

"AATE JAATE . HASTE GAATE.

SOCHA THA MENE MAN MEIN KAI BAAR .

WO PEHLI NAZAR HALKA SA ASAR ..........

KARTA HAI KYU IS DIL KO BEKARAR...

RUK K CHALNA CHAL K RUKNA......

NA JANNE TUMHE HAI KISKA INTEZZAAR.........

TERA VO YAKEEN KAHI MEIN TO NAHI

LAGTA HAI YAHI KYU MUJHKO BAAR BAAR.

YAHI SACH HAI .

SHAYAD MENE PYAR KIYA.

HA HA . TUMSE MENE.PYAR KIYA..........

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Ekta

@SandCastle.

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum update.........

continue soon...........

thnx 4 the PM & dnt 4gt 2 PM me.......

w8in eagerly 4 ur next update...........

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-NightDreamer-

@-NightDreamer-

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wonderful....one....but it was too short na....

waiting 4 ur next update.....!!!!

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

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Posted: 14 years ago

Very well update Mulan... A really nice and emotional one, I love that by one confession Nupur forgot everything and all...😳 Awesome...

-Laiba

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

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Posted: 14 years ago

awwwwwwwww soooooooo romantic 😳😳😳😳😳

Mayur just awesome

now the romance begins 😳😳😳

Update ASAP !!!!!!!!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey Mullan
i was a very short but very nice andsweet update
loved it dear

all the best for ur exam

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesum update mulan...👏

totally luvd it...

finally MN became 1 soul.... ☺️

but may i ask u... y did u update sooo hurriedly.....😕(i'm sorry if i hurt u)

luv ya..

tc!

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome update..........bt kinda short.............nxt time lamba update karna.

sajan scene was gud..........d emotion was really nice.......u brng out gujans emotion superbly.

mayur scene was so cute.

d emotion of mayur was really nicely written.

all over a super cute update.

hats off to ur writting skill.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

lovely update...

both sajan and mayur part was awesome...

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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