Hamari Adhuri Kahani (RP):Part 2,pg.6(28/03) - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
it sounds totally interesting
but plz try to update it regularly
nahi to sabhi RN or Rp fics ko update hue mahino ho jaate hain aur jab finally koi update karta hainto story kaha hain kuch idea hi nahi hota
it really interrupt the flow of fic
plz try to update this regularly and dont mind me its just my feelings
sumtimes i got so irritated and frustrated waiting for the fic to update but that dont happen

but nice concept
and do continue it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
loved it mana
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
hi
the up is really good
so raj ke mon raj ko uske birthday ke din uske roke ke liye lee jaata haai aur becchara raj woh itna irritate ho raha haai par yahan toh dulhan khud exam mein busy haai
anyways lets see ke aakhir in dono mein kya hua hoga jo yeh dono ek dusre se allag ho gaye
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

The title is very interesting and it seems that Rohit and Tejal's story is not a happy one for now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

I hope unki adhuri kahani puri zaroor ho!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rohit is busy in a project and happy to be busy so that her thoughts would not trouble him!!!!!

He seems to have a depressing past and he is so sad!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

When her beautiful face appeared in his thoughts, he smiled!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Akash and Shruti are his subordinates who fought a lot and he found them adorable!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shruti is mad about Akash talking to Saniya!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Rohit has to handle them like school kids and explained to them the importance of trust in a relationship!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally the project was submitted and they had come to Shimla for it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shruti finally asked him about the picture on his desktop!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

So Shruti also had a little crush on him!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Rohit started telling Akash and Shruti about the girl he loves, Tejal!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Akash and Shruti could feel his pain and Rohit felt that they would understand him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Rohit loves Tejal so much, so what went wrong in their relationship??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Great casting for Raj's mom seeing that you got Bollywood's current favourite mom to play it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

His mom is too funny and she is actually taking him to Delhi on his birthday!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Uska mom uska roka karwane laayi hai and now his only support, his dad is not supporting him!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Rohit said he loves someone else to avoid this from happening!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

But his mom is no less and checked his mobile, wallet, laptop, diaries, etc to see whether he has a girl in his life or not!!!!😎 😎 😎 😎 πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

His mom is too much aur bete ka past present sab pata karke rakha hai!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Poor Rohit did not have any excuse left!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Rohit's mom is really super cool and was very understanding when she found ke unki honewaali bahu exam dene gayi hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rohit is upset that he is getting married to a girl who he hasn't even seen!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Finally he got to see Tejal's photo!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Waiting for his reaction and Tejal's entry!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
nice beginning......

Loved it....

waiting for more.... cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
Lovely beginning!!
So story would move on in flashbacks..not bad! I loved it!
And Akash and Shruti concept into Raj..Naina...I mean Rohit and Tejal's story..
Idea is very nice..I am looking forward to this FF..
Cont. soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
amazing concept. loved it.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
Mana...

Tu padhai kar rahi thi...right.....par madam to yahan updates aur nayi fics likhne me lagi huin hai....

Not that I am complaining though....because it is a good option...... we anyways love reading about Rp...the more, the merrier....

So continue soon...

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19

Wowww a new FFπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ … a treat literallyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ€¦& RK ko apni tarah doctor bana diyaβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† the first part is niceπŸ‘πŸ‘β€¦ njoyed it … so coming parts will be FB..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Rohit's mom surpriseπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†β€¦.was good a nice bday surpriseβ€¦πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›.he almost got a heart attackβ€¦πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† hope rohit ko ladki pasand aajaye…waiting to see his reaction.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ .lets see if its love at first sight…& also want to know what exactly happened in past that love story adhuri reh gayi… & they got separated.πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

& did rohit confessed his love or like rajveer he is yet to confess..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Continue soon will wait to see how their love story progresses & how lovers will meet again & complete this adhuri kahani πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20
loved d start and also d concept.....

gr8 going.......

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