Hamari Adhuri Kahani (RP):Part 2,pg.6(28/03) - Page 3

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm...short fic....in flashbak!! Yummy!! 😆😆 Thats actually my reaction yaar.....he he he ! 😆

flashbak me fic padhne ka ek alag maza hai....😉 though I knw...in the present state Rohit (my oh so lovely Raj☺️)....is not happy....in fact he is shooooo shad...😭😭....yet I am at least aware of that na...😳😆 hmm...😆

The very starting was intriguing...😃 I liked Akash-Shruti pairing in LS...😉...so its gud to find them....and Mana...yaar we actually hav sum common thoughts...😆...as I had been thinking of a fic where I had cast Mishal & Payal...😆 (though I might change that😆)...don be crazy !!! mere fic ki main casting Raj hai toh tu apne fic kisi aur ko hero banayegi kya?😛

Anyways...getting bak to my Rohit...😳😳....I loved the way Akash n Shruti respect him...its sweet....and Shruti having a crush...😆😆....that just made me laugh at the cuteness of it...😳😆😉

And now the flashbak....well....main date dekh ke hi uchhal rahit thi...😆😆😳...and well...wat a bday gift!! 😆😳 And kya Maa hai....wallet, phn....sab check kar liya...to knw dat her son is not into any girl....😆😆😆 maan gaye matashri ko.... she is soooo cool yaar!! 😎 And I can actually imagine none but Kiron Kher in the role...😳😳 thanks !

Lovely beginning....though wud be w8ing for Tejal's entry....to knw abt her POV...😉...do I smell anything fishy?? 😆😆 Donno....tumhe to pata hi hai....main kitni shakki hu...😆😆 So pls dont ignite the fire of doubt in me anymore....and continue soooooooooooooon!! 😃 yupppp !

Originally posted by: esha143

A nice n different concept Doc.....Well Written 👏........will be waiting for the 'aage ki story' 😉😆.....waise ek baat kahu....main soch rahi thi ki 'Laagi Tujhse Lagan' Serial jiss mein Mishal Raheja main lead hai,voh uss mein se temporarily gaayab kyun ho gaya....ab pata chala vo yaha tere iss fic mein jo aake tapak padaa hai.....toh uss ke paas time nahi hai shaayad serial karne ke liye.....hai na?😆... Character Sketch is also nice....waise bataaya nahi Rohit ke Dad koun play kar raha hai?

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

really beautiful................is tejal dead or r they just separated due to misunderstanding.....like rohit said trust se rust in a relationship.............hope to see an update soon...........

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

ab tujh se toh hamesha main ek weird concept hi xpect karti hun...kya karun...tujhe achhe se janti jo hun...achcha..??hmm...ab agli baar koi sidha concept uthaungi...tujhe galat saabit karne keliye...😉😆 😆

short fic...ka idea achha tha...aur jaise ki tune mujh se kaha tha...ke is fic ko tu apne sare fics me se BEST bana kar rahegi...toh tujh se umeedain badh jati hai...!!! ayeeeeee !! maine aisa kab kaha ??😲 😲 😲\\

kyaaa...tujhe yaad nahi ke tune kab kaha tha...??? thik hai nahi yaad hai toh koi baat nahi...par mujhe yaad hai...isiliye tujhe toh ise BEST banana hi padega...priiiiiiiiii !!!! you are toooo much !!! 😆

toh hum abhi FB me hain...achha hai na...!!! andhere se ujale ki taraf badhte hue achha lagta hai...!!! par yeh kya...ujale me...matlab present me raj oops...rohit ko itna dukhi kar diya...!!! vaise bhi yeh main tujhe kyoun bol rahi hun...yeh toh teri purani bimari hai...jis ka koi ilaaz nahi hai... heyyy !!! bilkul nahi haan !! ST...H mein dekh ! Raj dukhi hai kya?? waha toh usne sabka jeena haram kar rakha hai... fir bhi mujhpe aisa label lagati hai...😭 😭 jaa katti !! well....actually tu poori tarah se galat bhi nahi hai...😛😆

aaksh...Shruti...LS couple...!!! LS ki starting kafi achhi thi is fiction ki...bich me main so gayi thi...phir end hone se pahle jagg gayi thi...!!! kuch samjhi...

nahi...kya samjhana chahti hai?😕

rohit ko akash aur shruti baht respect karte hain...!!! karne bhi chahiye...hai koi aur raj jaisa kya...??? vaise Shruti ke crush par hassi aayi...!!! yeh bhi fishli na raj ke cuteness par...he he he😆

haan...mummy ka role sirf Kiron kher hi kar sakti hain...khaash kar ke mummy jab aisi ho toh...!!! bete ki present past sab discover karna chahti hai...

vaise yeh tejal ki kya mystry hai yaar...!!! kahani ke suru me alag kar ke rakha hai tune...aur naam rakha hai...'hamari adhuri kahani'...!!! warning samjh le...ya phir dhamki...par kahani adhuri nahi rahni chahiye...rohit aur tejal ko milna hoga...aur duet bhi gana padega...aur yeh sab tu karegi...samjhi...kya kaha??? mujhe kuch sunai nahi deraha ! 😉

hadh hai...aaj kal bina dhamki ke koi kaam tu karti hi nahi...lollzzz😆😆

ab next ud kab hoga...doc...!!! next week...next month ya phir next year...sochke batati hoon...😛

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesome........

fab.......

liked the concept..

cont.soon......

thanx for the pm........

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Shockerrrrrrr........Dusht kahin ki....main tujhe tang nahi karti fone pe ya anything yeh soch ke , ke madam ke exams hai...jiju kaafi hai distract karne ke liye.....aur yeh ladki updates bhi kar rahi hai aur new fic bhi post kar rahi hai...of course I dont have a prob...lekin tera har PM mujhe surprise kar deta hai.....!!!! arey yaar...main dusht nahi hoon !! ab kya karu...tension aur pressure itniii badh gayi hai ki kya batau...ab movie ka option nahi hota kyun ki 3 hrs movie and 2 hrs jaana aana...etc etc...total 5 ! now can't afford to waste that much!! aur waise bhi sabhi crap movies aa rahai hai......and dont you call HIM a distraction...😉😛

Did you know mujhe RP fics zyada achi nahi lagti...???? mera interest half reh jaata hai when I see character names as not Raj/Naina.... whaaaaaaaaaaattt??😲 😲i dint know that...i just thought ki kuch naya karte hai...

lekin tune pehle hi pic dikhadi...and I cudnt just stop myself from giving the new concept a shot.....n I liked Aakash n Shruti from LS toh enjoyed them here as well...!!!


Is it ok if I say update soon...???? ya ya...IT's ok ! 😉😆

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hey

Wow a new FF....i am excited already.

The concept is very hatke. great start.

Rohit is helping his co-workers with their love and work life.

And for the first time he is sharing his personal life with some one.

please continue soon

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Mana

Nice to see u back with all the new updates and OS..😊 You are the ONLY one whoz just plain happy and not shocked ! 😆

The title itself is very interesting..I like this song very much😃 mee tooo!!!

agar kahani adhoori hai to woh end mein poori bhi zaroor hogi😆😆 Let's hope !

I like Mishal and Payal since LS days..They make a very cute pair😃

So Rohit is a Doctor who has a very depressing past.. he was so sad😭 and yet he was so happy to see his subordinates fighting like kids..he cud always imagine him and Tejal in their place..Wat went so wrong in their relationship???

you'll come to know...😊

His mother was really super cool..bete ka past present future sab pata karke rakha hua tha😆😆😆😉..he didnn't had any excuse left..bechare ko dhoke se roke ke liye le aayi..Even his dad was with his mother in this scheme.😆

Poor Rohit!!

Wat will happen now???

STAY TUNED di !!! 😉

Pls continue soon

Bye

Originally posted by: prerna1

it sounds totally interesting
but plz try to update it regularly
nahi to sabhi RN or Rp fics ko update hue mahino ho jaate hain aur jab finally koi update karta hainto story kaha hain kuch idea hi nahi hota
it really interrupt the flow of fic
plz try to update this regularly and dont mind me its just my feelings
sumtimes i got so irritated and frustrated waiting for the fic to update but that dont happen

but nice concept
and do continue it soon