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JayaR

@JayaR

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#231

i feel really sad for Maan.....

when Geet was with him he dint realize her importance and just used her.....
n when Geet has moved on he is seeing her and hallucinating himself......
poor guy doesn't even know that muskan is his daughter.....

and i never thought Geet was so intimate with vicky..... but as now she is then how can she get back to Maan....???

btw great update.....
cont soon

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#232

Nice update! Include d past like maan or geet rememberin it, plz cont soon.

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#233

Yaar i luvd ur ff please add me to ur pm list waitin for next update with luv ASHVINI

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maanmishti

@maanmishti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#234

loved vicky and geet...........yes include the past............because there wont be any life in the story without the past...........anyways want more of vicky and geet and want maan to know abt his daughter and geet married to vicky............loved it........plzzzzz update soon

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#235

awsome love it..

muskaan is so cute.

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cyum321

@cyum321

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#236

loved it

include the past also but im just wondering how maan n geet will b together again althou i dont want that ummmmm😳

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mishtib

@mishtib

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#237

i waitied for long for this update plse include the past also
main maan ko tadapete hue dekhna chahti hoon as he deserver wht he has done to geet
other wise i luve maan to the core
iwill b waiting for next part soon
plse dont think of discontinueing
plse

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known

@simi91

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#238

Maan : Aap?

Muskan : hai (baby language)

Maan : yaha kya kar rahi hai?

Muskan : meethiinng hai (baby language in serious tone)

this made Maan want to laugh but he controlled it. He nodded his head seriously and asked.

Maan : konsa meeting?

Muskan : Proojjecct Meethiinngg (baby language)

Maan : Really?

Muskan : whhatt aaree yyoou doiingg here? (baby language)

Maan : Meethiingg (baby language , he mimed her)

Muskan : hmmm (baby language in serious tone)

Maan loved this kid very much. He felt an unknown bonded feeling towards this girl child. He always loved his brother's kids but this child was special more than them. he didn't know the reason. Suddenly Jai came and picked her up in his arms.

Muskan : Majjnuu (baby language)

Muskan call Jai Majnu because Yash, Meera and Vicky tease him calling that name.

Muskan : aisshhaa kaha hai ?(baby language)

Jai embarassed : hmm.. pata nahi. kyun?

Muskan : aap hamesha uusskkii saatthh haina?

Jai : kisne kaha?

Muskan : Cchhaaachhu...

Jai : Yaah ki bacche..meih tumhe choodonga nahi. Darling, meih aur aishu tho( he was finding something to make the child stop embarrassing him further.)

Muskan : Aiisshiqq hai (baby language)

Jai : kya? shocked

Muskan : you botthh need every time exxcuusee to (before she could complete the sentence Jai covered her mouth with his hands.)

Jai : ye baccha hai ya koi recorder. Yash ki bacche, i will not leave you....

Maan was laughing seeing Jai's flushed face. Suddenly, jai noticed Maan and he said.

love all this part muskan so sweet & funny little angel Maan & Geet didnt see each other its like hide & seek super mindbowing brilliant update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnn