Life partner Maneet FF Climax - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice one.. cute engagement. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it yaar..awsome one ... loving to see maneets marriage soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
so short, but yet so sweet!!! awesome loved it!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one..😊
eagerly waiting 4 next part
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe that was so sweet and haye maan bowled over her and I love that song lol anyways great update and can't wait to read more 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey jasmine i just caught up with this FF and i liked the concept👏
one suggestion: can you please add a index on first page?it will be easy for us to read the missed parts else we need to go through each and every page.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update dear...........
poor maan 😆full flat by geet n searching for her..............nice...........
looking fwd............

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Posted: 14 years ago
short but sweet
waiting 4 next one 😳😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Life Partner Part 8


Maan:You look very pretty.You look like a film star.
She blushes.
M:I'm nothing in front of your beauty.
G:What nonsense!Nothing like that.You are...very nice.
He smiles:You are a Goddess.
G:No no...
All are dancing.
M:Will you teach me to dance now?
G:Now? What re you saying?
M:All are dancing.We are the couple of the day.We hv to dance.Right?
Mohini comes saying:No.Before marriage don't hold hands together and dance.
Maan & Geet become dull.
Mohini goes away.
M:My mom is a nosy poker.She follows us always.
Geet feels like laughing.

Maan rings up Geet.
M:Hi ...5 more days to go for our wedding.I'm cutting the date in the calender to know for how many days i should wait.
She smiles.

Wedding morning..
Geet and Parvati are in the temple.Geet has closed her eyes.She opens her eyes.She is surprised to see Maan standing near her with a smile.
G:Maan!
M:It's a surprise.You also came here.It is not a joke.
Geet and Parvati smile.
Pa:Bye Maan.We have to leave now.
M:Ok...
They go.Geet turn back.She sees Maan looking t her with lovely smile.She smiles and walks away.
Anirudh touches Maan's shoulder.
M:Dad!
A:This is God's game.Otherwise you both would not have met in the temple surprisingly just before the wedding.
Maan smiles.


Wedding...
Maan ties mangalsuthra around Geets neck.He fills her forehead with sindoor.
Geet hugs her parents and siblings.Then she gets inside the car with Maan.
M:Surprisingly you did'nt cry like serial heroines who cry at the time of departure.
Geet smiles.

Maneet enter Maan's house.All the guests are looking at Geet.
One lady:Mohini..your daughter in law is very fair and beautiful.
M:Yes,my daughter in law has to be fair and beautiful.
Another lady:She has worn lot of gold.
M:My daughter in law will be rich no.
After the guests went Mohini touches Geet's ornaments:You remove it and give it to me.I will take care of the gold.Otherwise it will be lost.
M:No need.Let the gold with Geet.
Mohini's face becomes dull.

Maneet are sitting on the bed.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
they wz fast
maneet got married! nice!
n mohini is juz greedy.......juz wanted all d ornaments...not bothered about giving blessing or love to geet
hate her!
n now SR! something special!?

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