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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 3

Riddhima runs out to the terrace of the office building leaving a teary eyed Armaan behind...

--Riddhima--
Dil hai mera kashmakash mein yaar - 2
Poochhti hai dhadkan meri kyoon kare aitbaar (crying )
O, poochhti hai dhadkan meri kyoon kare aitbaar
Jhoothi baatein, jhoothe vaadein, jhootha hai tera pyaar (remembers him with the girl)
Poochhti hai dhadkan meri kyoon kare aitbaar

--Armaan--
Haan, dil hai tera kashmakash mein yaar
Ho, dil hai tera kashmakash mein yaar
Chhooke apne dil se poochho kyoon kare aitbaar (remembers their wedding)
O, chhooke apne dil se poochho kyoon kare aitbaar
Bheegi palkein ponchh lo tum, dekho phir ek baar
Chhooke apne dil se poochho kyoon kare aitbaar

--Riddhima--
Thi tamanna, is jahan mein koi to ek ho (she remembers her parents)
Jo ho mera, sirf mera, dil se jo nek ho
Tune lekin dil ko toda ae sanam baar baar (remembers giving him divorce papers)
Poochhti hai dhadkan meri kyoon kare aitbaar

--Armaan--
Tere bin hoon main adhoora, yeh nahin dillagi (remembers trying to kill himself)
Saans teri, khwaab tere, hai teri zindagi
Bin tere hai maut behtar, kya kahoon aur yaar (walks to her cabin)
Chhooke apne dil se poochho kyoon kare aitbaar

--riddhima--
Dil hai mera kashmakash mein yaar (remembers their kiss)

--armaan--
O, dil hai tera kashmakash mein yaar (remembers making love to ridz)

--riddhima--
O, poochhti hai dhadkan meri kyoon kare aitbaar (falls and sits on floor)

--armaan--
Chhooke apne dil se poochho kyoon kare aitbaar

--Riddhima--
Baawre, kyoon yeh dil lagaaya re (thinks of armaan hugging her)
Baawre, kyoon yeh dil churaaya re (remembers their first kiss)
Kyoon yeh dil lagaaya re, kyoon lagaaya re
Kyoon yeh dil churaaya re, kyoon churaaya re (makes up her mind)

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Armaan is sitting on the floor crying when he hears riddhima speaking to rahul outside her cabin.

rid: bhaiya, i can't...i can't forgive him...aur being near him is just too difficult. seeing him like this is killing me lekin having him so close to me is raising feelings in my heart that i can't...i just can't....please i'm going my house. i need to be alone...please tke him back home aur tell him ki i'm sorry lekin i can't...bhaiya i love him lekin.....i think ki i'll go to New York. Papa had another company there. I'll go there. I need to get away from here. Everything reminds me of Armaan. I can't hlp him anymore. I'll never meet him again after today. I can't. Byee

Riddhima runs off.

Armaan runs out but misses Riddhima.

He turns and hugs Rahul, who is also in tears.

arm: bhaiya main marjaunga...maine kaise itna baara gunaah kardiya...is baar itna baara paap kardiya ki mera jeeven hi koh diya...mere riddhima ko kohdiya....bhaiya main marjauna. mujhe riddhima ki bina jeena nahin hain....

rah: shh ammy beta aisa nahin kehte...tum mera baby brother ho...you might be old, but to me your still that baby. aur jeete jee main apne bhai ko marne nahin dunge....nahin dunge..

arm: mujhe uske paas jaana hai....uske ghar kahaa hai?

rah: ammy beta, yeh theek nahin haii

arm: no i have to kuch garbar hai...pataa nahin kyun lekin mere dil kehta hai ki kuch garbar hai...she needss me pleasee

rah: theek hai. main le chalti hoon tumhe...

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As they approach her house...

rah: wait a minute whose car is that? and why is the door open?

armaan runs out before rahul can park. he runs in nd hears ridz screaming

rid: nahinn pleasee nahinn choro mujhe! choro! pleasee koi bachao!

armaan runs to her room aand is shocked to see rakesh trying to force himself on riddhima. Armaan grabss rakesh and starts fighting him.

Arm: TUM MERI RIDDHIMA KO ZABARDASTI KARNE KI KOSHISH KI! MERI RIDDHIMA KO! MARDALUNGE MAIN TUMHE! MARDALUNGI MAIN TUMHE.

rAKESH TRIES TO FIGHT BACK AND THO HE INJURIES ARMAAN -MOSTLY OPENS HIS OLD WOUNDS HE HAD INFLICTED ON HIMSELF- aRMAAN manages to beat Rakesh up badly. Rahul had called the police who arrived immeadiately and took rakesh away. Rahul left with them so he could give his statement to the police.

Meanwhile, Riddhima had passed out on the bed.

Armaan rushes over to her and holds her.

arm: shona utho its over. its all over.. jaana utho

armaan kisses her face madly trying to wake her, he kisses hr eyes, her forehead,her cheeks, her chin...

he then lifts her and holds her next to him, burying his face in her neck.

armaan: jaana, please utho...please mere liye utho

ridz: ar...armaan?

armaan: shona tum theek toh ho na? did he hurt you?

ridz backs away from his hold a bit and says nahin, you came in time. tum ne mujhe baacha he liya...i knew ki tum aaogi...ar..armaan? omg your bleeding! aur this cut on your stomach is pretty deep! omg!

armaan: yeh kuch nahin, yeh toh i did it to mmyself a few days ago...rakesh just opned the wound and madde it a bit deeper. i deserve it....

ridz: armaan chalo you have to get to a hospital! you're losing too much blood!

arm: nahin...mujhe maarna hai...

ridz: ARMAAN MALLIK I SWEAR IF YOU EVER TALK OF DYING AGAIN NA TOH TOH I'LL REALLY NEVER GIVE YOU A SECOND CHANCE?

arm: mat..matlab tumne mujhe maaf kardiya?

ridz: nahin, *his face falls* maaf karne ke liye toh iit'll take some time, but i want to give you a second chance. i want to comee home armaan.

arm: saach? thankk you shona thank you! i promise i wont let you down! i swear!

Armaan leans in and captures her lips in a passionate kiss.......

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3 weeks later at the mallik house,

Armaan is sitting on the floor with Ridz in his lap. he is kissing her neck secretively

ridz: armaan shhh sab yehi hai, koi dekhlega

nikki: dekhlega nahin, dekhliya...armaan kuch toh sharam karo...waise i know ki sensitive topic hai lekin we've all been wondering. ridzy you told us i your leaving. you can't...phir what made you decide to give him a second chance?

ridz; when i was sitting crying at home before rakesh came, the one person i wanted to cuddle with and talk to most was armaan. i realized ki it'll be hard lekin it'll be even harder if i leave him. aur pyaar main dusra moka dena chaiye. if you truly love something dearly enough, don't let it go without a fight. haan lekin armaan if you ever break my trust again toh

arm: i promise ki woh din aane ke aage hi main apne jaan de dunga...i'll never break your trust.

ridz: i love you armaan

arm: i love you too shona. i love you too.... waise i was thinking ki honeymoon pe jaye?

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THE ENDDDDDDD

Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago

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Sammy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

hey dear
loved this super long os 😆
do continue soon.
plz pm me

Edited by sammy4u - 14 years ago

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shonadesire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey dear
awesome update
pls complete it soonnnnnnnnnn

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Priyanka

@..KaJenDelena..

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

to be honest i am glad that he is trying to commit sucide, like come on seriously cheating on your wife that you slept with, how low is that? if he didnt love her why marry her? and if he wasnt sure of his feelings why sleep with her? and if he thinks that being all melodramatic and upset because he "loves" her all of sudden she should forgave him srry but that doesnt justify his action, personally i would never be able to forgive my husband even if he is the Armaan Malik if he ever commits such actions. LOL i seem so cold aye? lOl by the way LOVED THE OS! PM me with your work. ahaha reading the above comment you can see how involved i am with the story, that itself is proof that you have written it wonderfully.

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558278

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kajenrsmecxi
to be honest i am glad that he is trying to commit sucide, like come on seriously cheating on your wife that you slept with, how low is that? if he didnt love her why marry her? and if he wasnt sure of his feelings why sleep with her? and if he thinks that being all melodramatic and upset because he "loves" her all of sudden she should forgave him srry but that doesnt justify his action, personally i would never be able to forgive my husband even if he is the Armaan Malik if he ever commits such actions. LOL i seem so cold aye? lOl by the way LOVED THE OS! PM me with your work. ahaha reading the above comment you can see how involved i am with the story, that itself is proof that you have written it wonderfully.

haha i will def. pm you!

i know what you mean! i wouldnt either, but you can imagine riddhima's predicament right? she loves him so much, but he cheated...toh uske baad kaise? lekin does pyaar deserve a second chance?

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Parneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

hey Ashu..welcome back..hope ur trip was fun..:)
well the OS was beautiful..:)
luved it...it was pretty intense n interesting..:)
thanx for the pm..:)
tc :)
Preet <3